My take on the Flying Sari ....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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As we decided earlier .... if the epi was no good, then we'll dish up our own version of Goham scenes ?. So, here's my take on the saree flying epi .........😊

"Oh No" ... thot Gopi," looks like it may rain, I better get the clothes inside" . She hurried to the courtyard and began taking the clothes off the line. The wind was quite strong and she struggled to gather the saris in her arms.
Suddenly she heard Aham's voice and went still, Aham was walking into the courtyard, talking to someone on his cell. For a minute Gopi stood there, petrified, her hand on the clothes peg. Then she shook herself and removed the peg , at the same time trying to hide behind the sari. Without warning, a gust of wind had the sari billowing out and it flew straight over Aham's head.
She watched in complete horror as her sari settled covering Aham completely, and he began to struggle to take it off him. Praying that he he wouldn't yell at her she tugged the other end of the sari and got it off him.
Just as he looked at her, she began tugging at her pallu, trying to cover her head. But the wind was too strong and she just couldn't get it over her head. She dared not lift her eyes and look at him . She knew he'd be livid.
Aham stood there watching her. No doubt at first he was annoyed at her clumsiness and wanted to yell at her as usual, but the sight of her pertrified look stopped him. She looked liked she was facing the firing squad, he mused. He'd never seen anyone so terrified of him. He continued to watch her struggling to cover her head and failing miserably because of the strong wind. Without a warning he felt his lips curve into a smile. He turned on his heels and strode back into the house, Silly girl, he muttered smilingly, as he ran his fingers thru his hair.
So .... how was it ? ... Any good ??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ye lo...forum is full of creative writers....ek dhundhi yaha to saare ek se badhkar ek hai....
usha...good one.....and my best lines are.....
Without a warning he felt his lips curve into a smile. He turned on his heels and strode back into the house, Silly girl, he muttered smilingly,

below one is the BESTEST as i can clearly omagine him doing so..
as he ran his fingers thru his hair.
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Thanks Sadhli ....*pleased* ....
Am glad you liked it .... the last line is my fav too ... 😃 ...
Can you imagine how cute Nazim would look doing that ?????
I mean .... a slight smile on his face ... maybe he's going a little red too ... and running his fingers thru his hair ....
Haila ! 😍....... that would be awesome !!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😍

see my condition just by thinking him all red and slightly smiling...
CVs plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz kuchh karo warna we all will be in our dreamlands permanently.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chalo Yaar, Sadhli ... I'm off to bed now ... it's very late ....
C U tomorrow ! ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ahem of your imagination is far better than the real one ....
Sadhli & usha , forget about the CVs , you guys rock in your imaginations👏
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Originally posted by: fungirl

Ahem of your imagination is far better than the real one ....

Sadhli & usha , forget about the CVs , you guys rock in your imaginations👏

Thanks Nisha ! .... 😆😆😆😆
I know as of now 'our' Aham is much better than 'their' Aham !!!
Lets stick to our Aham and keep our sanity ....... the CVs are bent on driving us round the bend !! 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rusha4003

Thanks Nisha ! .... 😆
I know as of now 'our' Aham is much better than 'their' Aham !!!
Lets stick to our Aham and keep our sanity ....... the CVs are bent on driving us round the bend !! 😆😆😆


@bold....i have a revised version of one of the songs.......

ye humara Aham.......ye humara Aham..
kisi ko dekhna ho gar to pahle aake maang le meri , usha ki, tam ki, shelly ki, nisha ki hum sab ki nazar........

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cvs we would love to give u our sight.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-


@bold....i have a revised version of one of the songs.......

ye humara Aham.......ye humara Aham..
kisi ko dekhna ho gar to pahle aake maang le meri , usha ki, tam ki, shelly ki, nisha ki hum sab ki nazar........

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cvs we would love to give u our sight.................

ClapClapClapClapClapClap ......
That is awesome Sadhli ....... and soooooo true !!!!!!!
Jo baat hum logon ko Aham & Gopi me dikhraha hai ... woh CVs ko kyun nahi dikhayi deraha ????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yahi to problem hai....CVs are pretending to be sleeping when its come to see what Aham and Gopi have together....they are not in a mood to take advantage of their Chemistry, their Amazing look together.....and punishing us by showing KiShi,U-R-K, RaJi...all crap..

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