FF: Pyaar, Ishq Aur Nafrat:Chapter 2, page 1

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You'll know me as the Analysis Maker of the forum and the writer of the Modi Diaries. Now know me as a writer of FF's too. 😊

Pyaar, Ishq aur Nafrat is the tale of Goham post marriage...but unlike the serial, the story is more based on Aham and his tale..though Gopi will be shown too.

Aham is not your typical Krishna..and yet the same, childish, handsome and yet not a playful and cheerful person.

But he will reunite with this Gopi at any cost..for every love story doesn't need a princess.

Chapter One

Aham Modi irritably glanced at the balance sheet in his hand and then at his Blackberry. Clients were furiously messaging him demanding to know why the fall in profits that year. Aham couldn't tell them that he had just been married off to a girl he didn't love. Such excuses didn't count in business. The auditors had been like loan sharks that day-continuously circling him, demanding explanations for errors in the accounting statements. Sometimes he felt what was the use of going to Harvard if at the end of the day he could not answer a simple employee.

It had been two days since the most horrible event in his life. He had watched helplessly as the love of his life threw flowers as he tied the knot with someone else. Her tears were nothing compared to how twisted her heart was feeling outside. He was sure his marriage must have devastated her. He hated to admit it but he was a slave to his mother's whims and fancies. Usually they were for his own good-but this? His wife couldn't even read! There was no question of taking her to any meeting or parties. Yet the secret that he wasn't a bachelor anymore had spread like wildfire, and in two hours he had a meeting with an important client-who wished to see Aham's wife, Gopi.

Gopi Modi was twenty, with big innocent brown eyes and a rounded lovely face that spoke volumes of innocence and childishness. Her illiteracy was evident from her awkward posture and lack of self-confidence. Yet she won the heart of everyone with her soft-spokeness save that of her maami and cousin Rashi. Yet she had placed utmost trust in her husband only to be shocked on her honeymoon night as he threw the pillow on a couch and dozed off. She stayed awake the whole night as he tossed and turned, sleeping and yet not. His pain troubled her but now it was too late. She had become the stuttering fool he had thought her to be-just for his sake, to satisfy his pride.

But two hours later they had to be together, eat together and behave like a couple. The thought brought a fresh wave of hope in Gopi but horrified Aham-as the client was none other than his ex-girlfriend's brother Umang.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnx megha for the lovely FF......
at last here we have story based on Aham not Gopi...gr8....keep it up..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good FF, it is a good read.

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Yeah! You started it! Thanks Megs!
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Hey megha.. I just saw this FF.. Good job.. Keep it up
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Chapter 2

Gopi looked at herself in the mirror and sighed.

Despite the heavy golden jewellery, the dazzling saree and the newly applied makeup, she failed to look like a typical trophy wife. If anything, she looked more responsible than she already was. She didn't have the guts to ask her mother-in-law for anything such as a new sari or a diamond necklace or anything of that sort.

These are things your husband is supposed to give you, the voice in her head taunted.

She stood up and decided that this was it. She couldn't put on more of a show. She wore all this because it was the custom of the Modi household, not for the outside world to know how privileged she was.

It would have looked good on Anita. Maybe even better.

She knew that Aham loved someone else. It was kind of obvious when your husband treated all women around you fairly enough but when it came to you, there seemed to be only hailstorms spouting from his mouth.

It's all your fault.

Aham impatiently honked his car downstairs. Before he could shout at her again, she rushed downstairs. Aham critically surveyed her. Nothing a typical business wife should have-a designer purse, some sophisticated accessories...I bet if you asked her what D&G or Mango is she would be more dumb than she already is.

She's looking pretty, another hopeful voice said but it meekly retreated as a flash of anger crept into his eyes.

Mistaking it to be for her she covered her face with her pallu. He sighed. Why did she have to be like this? Umang would make sure he became the laughing stock of society circles.

But you hate all those parties and fakeness anyway...when you were going out with Anita you were always asking her was it necessary to...

Chup, he told the meek voice. It was bad enough having a Gopi in front of him, he did not want a Gopi in his head.

"Chale?" he asked. She nodded her head. He rolled his eyes. It wouldn't hurt her to speak.

Well at the rate you're going..it will.

Aham had already gone off to some faraway land where contracts ruled and had no time for a guilty complex. Let her enjoy it.

Gopi stared outside in wonderment. She had never stepped out of her house before. To see the greenery, the kids playing happily, the tall buildings rising into the sky as the city appeared in front of them-it awed her. Aham was momentarily distracted by the dreamy look in her eyes-then it was back to whether to sign today or tomorrow.

She was also scared, but she had full trust in Aham. He may not love her, but he wasn't an evil man at heart. He had to protect her someday or the other.

Aham's Blackberry beeped. He was too busy focusing on the road ahead to notice. Her hands shaking, she picked it up and squinted.

Before she could even guess, he snatched it away from her. "Don't try to be what you aren't." he said in an aggressive tone. She nodded her head.

He checked the message. Anita again.

I've made Umang promise me not to humiliate you or rather that dumb wife of yours. I'm going to America, to focus on my studies. Unlike some people, I know how to read, and I plan to do so for the rest of my life, considering you now belong to someone else.

Damn, he thought, she'll never let me rest in peace.

He looked at Gopi angrily. She had happily pressed her face to the window.

It's all her fault.
Edited by IndigoBlues - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Megha... that was so good... just now finished reading Part 1 too... loved it.... continue soon eagerly awaiting your next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was so good megha.. It's really nice to have something different to read.. Keep it up👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was awesome megha...u are a gem indeed.....
update next part soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome !!!! ...Indigo,

Thank you so much for starting this ... it' s like nectar for us Goham fans !

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