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Posted: 14 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: saran.pl
Waiting for ur update

will update soon dear,,,,

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tellyaddict

@Telly_Addict

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#252

Hello Frnds......
Thanks all for ur appreciation which motivated me to write first FF.

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Shashank interuppts: Gopi par...i mean Gopi Bhabi par aaj bhi sirf tera hi haq hai, aur unhe khush rakhna teri jimmedari hai na ki meri....
(Today also u only has all the rights on Gopi..i mean Gopi Bhabhi....and u hv the responsibility to keep her happy.....)

Aham is badly shocked: what..?????

Shashank Haan..kyunki aaj meri sagayi Pinky se hui hai...Gopi Bhabhi se nahi...buddhu...
(.yup....coz I got engaged with Pinky...not with Gopi Bhabhi.....stupid.....)

And then Shashank, Gopi, Pinky hears a voice of some accident from the other side and Gopi shouts Aham ji.
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Part 17

Shashank also tries to calls Aham on phone but no reply from the other end and his heart skips a bit just by imagining the worst thing that could be possible i.e. Ahams's accident and prays God to keep him safe till he reaches the spot. He says sorry to Gopi for his mistimed teasing but Gopi is not in her senses she just crying
"Mujhe Aham ji ke Paas le chaliye, Mujhe Aham ji ke Paas le chaliye".
(Take me to Aham Ji...Take me to Aham Ji...)

Shashank asks her to be at home and assures her that he will bring Aham to her but Gopi first time is so Adamant and Stubborn that she does not listen to a single word of Shashank just keeps saying "Mujhe Aham ji ke Paas le chaliye.."

Pinky signals Shashank to take with her. Shashank agrees and goes to his car with Gopi, asks her to sit inside and starts the car and moves on the way to Modi Mansion as Aham told that he is going home. As soon as car is moving towards the MM Gopi's heart is beating faster than the previous second, she is sobbing and talking to himself

"Aham Ji....aaj aap ko kuchh nahi hoga, mujhe mere Kanha ji par pura bharosa hai, aaj tak har mushkil har pareshani me unhone mera saath diya hai to aaj kaise wo mujhe akela chhod sakte hai.....
(Aham ji....today nothing will happen to u....i trust my Kanha Ji.....till today he always supported me in all my problems and troubles so how can he leave me today....)

aur aaj Kanha ji ko dikhana hoga ke wo sirf Patthar ki murti nahi jiske saath main abhi tak apne dukh dard baant ti thi.... balki wakai me bhagwaan hai jinhone mere har prarthna ko na sirf suna tha balki mana bhi tha aur aaj unhe sab prarthnao ko Safal karna hoga...
(And today Kanha ji has to prove that he is not a mere Statue with whom I was sharing all my pain and problems and he is God in real who not only heard all my prayers but also accepted and today has to make all of them truth...)

aaj Kanha ji ko apni is Gopi ko uska Aham lautana padega.....Kanha Ji agar aaj Aham ji ko Kuchh Bhi...Kuchh Bhi hua to ye Gopi unhi ke saath is duniya se vida ho jayegi....kyunki main Aham ji ke bina ek pal bhi nahi ji sakti...and starts sobbing badly...
(today Kanha ji has to return his Gopi HER Aham.....Kanha ji if Anything Anything will happen to Aham then this Gopi will leave this world with her Aham Ji......coz I can not survive for a second w/o Aham Ji...)

On listening this Shashank cant stop his tears...he is blaming himself for everything happening to Gopi n Aham, he thought why dint he told Aham clearly....why he played trick on him....why why why...????

On the accident spot....Aham's car dashed into a tree...he comes out of his car, his forhead is bleeding, he has bruises in his arms, he is in pain but still he is smiling as this pain is nothing in front of the Happiness he got today, as nothing happened to his dream of having Gopi in his Life again, Gopi is still HIS and no one else can claim her. He is still recalling all the words Shashank mentioned on phone that "U only have rights on Gopi bhabhi to keep her happy". He has tears in eyes but Smile is Dancing on his lips as he cant believe he Got Every thing in his Life and now he does not need anything else to survive Except Gopi in his arms...he is still in his Dreams of Gopi and seeing her every where around him suddenly he listens a noise of Cars brakes. He looks at the direction of Noise.

Its Shashank's Car and he stopped it seeing Aham's car not in a good condition. On seeing he almost stopped breathing and cant even move from his place but Gopi already reaches the car and looks inside the car but when she does not find Aham there scream comes out of her mouth but Gopi does not even care abt the heave rain she just runs towards the car
Gopi: Aham Ji......aap ko kuchh nahi ho sakta....mere Kanha ji mere saath anyaya nahi kar sakte....agar aapko kuchh bhi hua to main ji kar kya karungi...."
(Aham Ji....nothing can happen to u....My Kanha Ji cant do injustice to me...if anything will happen to u then how will I live....)

On seeing Gopi there Aham gets the power to stand and to call Gopi.....he stands like a lightning and calls her name.

Gopi hears her name in a very low voice "Gopi...Main Yaha Hu Gopi.."
(Gopi...I am here Gopi.)

hearing this her eyes shines like 1000 stars are shining in the sky....as she is listening a very familiar voice, which she was expecting to hear all the way from shashank's home till here and she got her life back which was almost reached heaven just to meet her Aham Ji there.........but suddenly she gets hit and her life is back in her body saying "how can i leave when Aham ji is still on earth waiting for me calling my name"

She turns back and finds Aham standing on the other side of road stretching his Arms seems like now he is not in a mood to let Gopi away from him even for a second, his heart is jumping with joy that now he will have his life in his arms, his eyes pleading Gopi to come and give him the feel that no one can separate them.

Gopi started crying but with happiness looking at him all hale n healthy and can not neglect Aham and his stretched arms plea....She runs and lands up into Aham's arms.......He wraps his arms around her and has tears in his eyes but a satisfaction on his face that at last he got what he was wanting to have....while Gopi is sobbing badly. Gopi is hiding herself in his chest, she feels herself safe and secure with Aham.

Gopi sobbing: A...A...Aham ji....aap theek hai na......meri to jaan nikal gayi thi sirf ye soch kar ke aap kaise honge....a...a...aap nahi jaante main aapse kitna pyar karti hu.
(A...Aham Ji are u alright.....I was almost dead just my thinking ur safety....u dont even know how much Iove you...)

Aham releases her from his embrace and looks down at her, while she is still crying lowering her face. Aham cups her face and raises her face so that she can look into his eyes directly, wipes her tears with his thumbs, looks into her eyes and keeps staring at her, heavy rain shows that Kanha ji himself crying on this reunion of two Lovers who got to know each others Love today only..

Aham: Gopi, aaj mat rona....aaj ka din to sabse khushi ka din hoga.....aaj mujhe tum Wapas Mil gayi ho.......aaj ke baad hum dono ke beech me koi galatfahmi jagah nahi bana payegi......par....
(Gopi...plz dont cry today....today is the most happiest day of my life....today I got u back in my life....and now there wont be any place for any misynderstanding between us......but.....)

Gopi: looks at him with doubt.....P...Par kya Aham Ji.....
(Bu...But What Aham ji......)

Aham goes down on his knees, takes Gopi's hand in his and says: Kya tum mujhe maaf karogi Gopi, maine tumhe sirf dukh takleefe di hai...kya tum un sab ke liye mujhe maaf karogi......main tumhe bharosa dilata hu ke aaj ke baad duniya ka koi bhi dukh tum tak pahuchne se pahle mujhse takrayega, main tuhme duniya ki har wo khushi dunga jo tumne kabhi sochi bhi nahi hogi.
(Will you forgive me Gopi, I only gave u pain and problems....will u forgive me for all that.......and please trust me from now any pain will have to face me before reaching ur side, i'll give u all happiness that u never imagined to have in ur life....)

Gopi cant believe he is the same Aham who never thought her as his wife and now he is on his knees seeking her forgiveness, how much importance she has now in his life.......she starts crying again and puts her other hand on his shoulder and asks him to not to do this and supports him to stand.

Aham looks at her and says: aur aaj ke baad se tum sirf aur srif mere Dil me Rahogi........
(U'll live in my heart from now....)

hearing this Gopi blushes and hugs Aham tightly, then Aham hugs her too.

Both remained in each other's embrace for some time and then Aham looks at her from corner of his eyes with a mischievous smile and says
Aha: "Par ek baat hai....."
(but there is one thing....)

Gopi too looks upward at him but still in his arms asks "Wo kya.."
(whats it..?)

Aham: Mrs. Gopi Aham Modi ne ye to bataya hi nahi ke wo mujhse kitna pyaar karti hai.....aur wo mujhe apne dil me jagah dengi ya nahi..
(Mrs. Gopi Aham Modi dint tell me how much she loves me and will she give me a place in her heart...)

Gopi shyly looks at him first then hides herself in his chest and Aham rests his chin in her hair while keeping her in his arms and both of them start dreaming of their Bright Future Together.

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P.S..This is it......Last Part of This FF.......
Hope u like it....and please do comment...

Edited by -tellyaddict- - 14 years ago

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Rafeal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#253

Lets fall in love? If i will fall in love after reading, then i must give it a chance.. Lets see, i start readin chapter by chapter frm today.. 17 chapter to go, rite? Hmmm..

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Nidhi Chandrakar

@MeetPremeer

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#254

awesome dear

r u gonna start a new ff

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Rukhsar Ahmed

@ruky786

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#255

awesome update you are finishing it aww i didnt want it to end thanks for the pm hope you do start a new FF

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desisrock

@namziee

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

Superb, Sadhli!! Just so romantic!! Oh my, Ahemji and Gopi are so made for each other here!! Loved it!!

Just re-read that this is the last part.....oh....are you going to start another FF? You write so well....

Thanks much!!!

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

bad bad sADhli... how can you finish it...
But i do understand... only this could be the proper end for this FF...
and a very touching one too...👏👏👏👏👏

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..Naina..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#258

that was so awesome sadhlii! would it be horrible if i asked for an epilogue? [LOl]

anyways it was aamzing! i totally hope you start another one!

cheers!
~Naina