If you were the script writer of SP......

Well guys we all are talking about how we hate the Nahar - Saloni separation.
Well If you were given a chance to be the writer of SP then what would you have done with the story line....come on guys pen in your views or write a short story as to what you would have done...to the script of Sp if you were the script writer...Starting from Jiji's exposed in front of all...(Remember yug is already in the scene so write about him..)
Pen in your imagination...I will post mine in a minute...😊

I would Show an episode with jiji giving birth to a boy and dying in during delivery and Tara's dream fulfilled.
episode's of yug trying to woe Saloni and Nahar getting frustrated and then Neel coming to Salonis rescue...
then twist in episode by Neel finding who the boss of yug is and being very upset ...and in next episode reveal the boss as Bappji and his saffai (reasoning) as to why he is doing it and saying I will revenge Saloni ...and a episode of neel's Dilemma on who to side...Bappji or saloni his friend...
In between episodes of Shubra gaining control on Kunjan and her Kunjan fighting with his mom for Shubra and her son...and episode of kaveri as pregnant and doing all drama to get control of the house and Samar getting his eye back...and 4-5 episode of buasa coming back for godhbarie and having baby and Dhananjay helping Narpat to start a bussiness ...which picks up..
A in between get Saloni pregnant and by the time all this confusion ends and Nahar and Saloni get back she would deliver the baby...

A few episode on How Neel brings the truth out in front of all and end this confusion between Sal-Nahar by exposing the truth...

What do you say guys....Pen in your story...

i had posted a similar topic earlier and the responses i got were interesting.

I don't know if anyone would read what i have to write but let me go for it...

Ok, so Urvashi gets exposed in front of all. The evil Katari is on the loose and ready to prey on Tara. Saloni comes and saves Tara and faints because Katari scratched her. At that minute, Nahar comes to take her to the hospital. Everyone is in shock at what's going on. Yug comes to the hospital to visit and tells Nahar that he should go home and relax. Yug distracts Nahar and so Nahar thinking Yug is somewhat a good guy, goes to sit down. In the mean time Yug calls his boss and tells him to come to the hospital as Saloni is unconcious. The boss guy comes. We don't know who he is yet....but then we find out that it's none other then Neel. Yug doesn't know it's Neel either because Yug was always talking to someone else who was working for Neel, and so thought that the guy he talked to was the one after Saloni. But no, it's Neel. Neel comes to Nahar in the hospital and pretends to be saddened after hearing what has been happening at his house with the whole Urvashi situation. Neel then asks Nahar if he can see Saloni and he says Saloni is unconcious but he can go and see him. In the meantime, Yug inside, is trying to inject something into Saloni's arm and Neel sees this, walks in, pretends to be bold, and says "What are you doing?" He yells for Nahar's name and Nahar comes and sees Yug with a needle. Nahar immediately comes and smacks Yug, calls for the doctor and the security to come, and they come rushing, and the police come and take Yug away.

Everyone in the family is shocked. Meanwhile, Urvashi has a baby. No one is happy for Urvashi but they are happy that Tara can now have a baby to take care of who is Brijesh's line. When she goes in, Urvashi is sleeping. So Tara takes the baby and tells Brijesh and family to keep him under surveilance so Urvashi doesn't see him. Urvashi wakes up to find her child not there. She is screaming and screaming when Tara walks in and says, you want my child Jiji? You want my husband? Urvashi looks at her and starts taunting her. Just then, Brijesh comes in with what looks like a baby, but it's really a fake doll, and says, I am here but I am not for you. I am for Tara. But if you want the baby, you can come with me. He leaves. Urvashi, hysterical at that point, follows Brijesh to the roof of the hospital where Brijesh says "I don't want the child that you bore for me" and throws the baby doll down the roof. Urvashi screams and is unconcious. Brijesh calls the doctor and says that the woman has gone mad and tried to kill him. The doctors come and take Urvashi who is now waking up again back to the hospital where Urvashi keeps saying "I will make you both pay for this Brijesh and Tara, and your family will pay too. Your life is going to be hell" over and over. Because the doctors hear her threatening Brijesh, and family, they hand her over to the police who arrest her for attempt to murder, and send her to jail.

Yug is stunned when he learns that the boss he was working for was none other then Neel, but Neel just wanted to keep his identity hidden. Neel says this to him when he goes to see Yug in jail. Neel also says that is going to make Nahar and Saloni's life a living hell and Saloni will suffer without her love. Yug realizes he's fallen for Saloni and decides that he is going to get out of this jail cell and show Nahar and Saloni that Neel is the mastermind behind the whole game of seperating them. Somehow, Yug gets out by coercing a police guard and sneaks back to the house. He sees Neel sitting there and talking to everyone like he is really close to them. Yug hides and hears him talking. Yug goes to the hospital and sees Nahar. Nahar goes "YOU" You are back from the jail? I will beat you" and he is about to when Yug plays something he recorded....he recorded Neel talking at the jail with his cell phone and Nahar goes hysterical when Yug tells him it was Neel the whole time. Meanwhile, Saloni has woken up. She is weak but fine. Nahar goes to see her and calls the doctor to check on her since she is awake. Nahar tells Saloni about Neel and she is happy to hear he is back but when she hears what was going on while she was unconcious, she starts crying. She says it's her fault for ruining Neel's life so that is why Neel is doing this now. Nahar gets permission from the doctor to let Saloni go home and he says it's ok. So they all go. Yug, Saloni and Nahar reach the house and Neel is there. He sees Saloni, goes to her and says "you're fine now!" and he smiles and she looks at him coldly. Saloni says, "Neel, I thought you were a good guy. I didnt know that by marrying Shubhra your life would be ruined. I am sorry on her behalf but you are the lowest scum of the earth! You were my best friend, and I loved you at one point in my life too but now my eyes are open and I see how much hatred you have for me" Everyone is shocked to hear this out of Saloni's mouth. Bhabho goes "Saloni what are you saying? Neel is your friend" and Nahar goes, "No Bhabho, Neel is not the same guy he used to be" and Yug goes on to tell everything. He even plays the recording. Neel is in shock and says "how dare you do this to me" and he said he had no choice as he sees that Saloni is so nice and caring. And Yug admits that he has fallen in love with Saloni but he knows Nahar is her husband so after this he will too go away but not without putting them together. And Neel starts crying. Nahar asks him why and Neel starts apologizing that he lost his senses and didn't know what he was doing. He wanted revenge because of how Shubhra treated him. Nahar says to go take revenge on Shubhra but not on us because we didn't do anything to you. The police come and take Neel away. And then Chandni comes in. Everyone is shocked. Brijesh looks at her and says "you are dead!" and she says "Yes I was but now I am back, and you know what? I am here for you" and she goes to Tara and is about to choke her when Saloni rushes there and grabs Chandni's hands, and starts to twist them tight until Chandni screams that she's hurting her. Saloni then says get out of here now! And throws her out. But she vows to come back for Brijesh.

That's all I can think of for now. At least Saloni and Nahar are together. Now we have to worry about Brijesh and Tara!

Originally posted by: aasighazi

I don't know if anyone would read what i have to write but let me go for it...

Ok, so Urvashi gets exposed in front of all. The evil Katari is on the loose and ready to prey on Tara. Saloni comes and saves Tara and faints because Katari scratched her. At that minute, Nahar comes to take her to the hospital. Everyone is in shock at what's going on. Yug comes to the hospital to visit and tells Nahar that he should go home and relax. Yug distracts Nahar and so Nahar thinking Yug is somewhat a good guy, goes to sit down. In the mean time Yug calls his boss and tells him to come to the hospital as Saloni is unconcious. The boss guy comes. We don't know who he is yet....but then we find out that it's none other then Neel. Yug doesn't know it's Neel either because Yug was always talking to someone else who was working for Neel, and so thought that the guy he talked to was the one after Saloni. But no, it's Neel. Neel comes to Nahar in the hospital and pretends to be saddened after hearing what has been happening at his house with the whole Urvashi situation. Neel then asks Nahar if he can see Saloni and he says Saloni is unconcious but he can go and see him. In the meantime, Yug inside, is trying to inject something into Saloni's arm and Neel sees this, walks in, pretends to be bold, and says "What are you doing?" He yells for Nahar's name and Nahar comes and sees Yug with a needle. Nahar immediately comes and smacks Yug, calls for the doctor and the security to come, and they come rushing, and the police come and take Yug away.

Everyone in the family is shocked. Meanwhile, Urvashi has a baby. No one is happy for Urvashi but they are happy that Tara can now have a baby to take care of who is Brijesh's line. When she goes in, Urvashi is sleeping. So Tara takes the baby and tells Brijesh and family to keep him under surveilance so Urvashi doesn't see him. Urvashi wakes up to find her child not there. She is screaming and screaming when Tara walks in and says, you want my child Jiji? You want my husband? Urvashi looks at her and starts taunting her. Just then, Brijesh comes in with what looks like a baby, but it's really a fake doll, and says, I am here but I am not for you. I am for Tara. But if you want the baby, you can come with me. He leaves. Urvashi, hysterical at that point, follows Brijesh to the roof of the hospital where Brijesh says "I don't want the child that you bore for me" and throws the baby doll down the roof. Urvashi screams and is unconcious. Brijesh calls the doctor and says that the woman has gone mad and tried to kill him. The doctors come and take Urvashi who is now waking up again back to the hospital where Urvashi keeps saying "I will make you both pay for this Brijesh and Tara, and your family will pay too. Your life is going to be hell" over and over. Because the doctors hear her threatening Brijesh, and family, they hand her over to the police who arrest her for attempt to murder, and send her to jail.

Yug is stunned when he learns that the boss he was working for was none other then Neel, but Neel just wanted to keep his identity hidden. Neel says this to him when he goes to see Yug in jail. Neel also says that is going to make Nahar and Saloni's life a living hell and Saloni will suffer without her love. Yug realizes he's fallen for Saloni and decides that he is going to get out of this jail cell and show Nahar and Saloni that Neel is the mastermind behind the whole game of seperating them. Somehow, Yug gets out by coercing a police guard and sneaks back to the house. He sees Neel sitting there and talking to everyone like he is really close to them. Yug hides and hears him talking. Yug goes to the hospital and sees Nahar. Nahar goes "YOU" You are back from the jail? I will beat you" and he is about to when Yug plays something he recorded....he recorded Neel talking at the jail with his cell phone and Nahar goes hysterical when Yug tells him it was Neel the whole time. Meanwhile, Saloni has woken up. She is weak but fine. Nahar goes to see her and calls the doctor to check on her since she is awake. Nahar tells Saloni about Neel and she is happy to hear he is back but when she hears what was going on while she was unconcious, she starts crying. She says it's her fault for ruining Neel's life so that is why Neel is doing this now. Nahar gets permission from the doctor to let Saloni go home and he says it's ok. So they all go. Yug, Saloni and Nahar reach the house and Neel is there. He sees Saloni, goes to her and says "you're fine now!" and he smiles and she looks at him coldly. Saloni says, "Neel, I thought you were a good guy. I didnt know that by marrying Shubhra your life would be ruined. I am sorry on her behalf but you are the lowest scum of the earth! You were my best friend, and I loved you at one point in my life too but now my eyes are open and I see how much hatred you have for me" Everyone is shocked to hear this out of Saloni's mouth. Bhabho goes "Saloni what are you saying? Neel is your friend" and Nahar goes, "No Bhabho, Neel is not the same guy he used to be" and Yug goes on to tell everything. He even plays the recording. Neel is in shock and says "how dare you do this to me" and he said he had no choice as he sees that Saloni is so nice and caring. And Yug admits that he has fallen in love with Saloni but he knows Nahar is her husband so after this he will too go away but not without putting them together. And Neel starts crying. Nahar asks him why and Neel starts apologizing that he lost his senses and didn't know what he was doing. He wanted revenge because of how Shubhra treated him. Nahar says to go take revenge on Shubhra but not on us because we didn't do anything to you. The police come and take Neel away. And then Chandni comes in. Everyone is shocked. Brijesh looks at her and says "you are dead!" and she says "Yes I was but now I am back, and you know what? I am here for you" and she goes to Tara and is about to choke her when Saloni rushes there and grabs Chandni's hands, and starts to twist them tight until Chandni screams that she's hurting her. Saloni then says get out of here now! And throws her out. But she vows to come back for Brijesh.

That's all I can think of for now. At least Saloni and Nahar are together. Now we have to worry about Brijesh and Tara!

nice story...Hope Nahar -Saloni get back soon before too much happens...