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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 19 years ago

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This is my poem.Plz comment

THE SHATTERED DREAM OF A GIRL

Her eyes always search for beauty
She sees beauty in every single thing
She sees beauty even in the ugliest things
Where charm is'nt found
By anyone else.
She admires the beauty of nature
She admires the beauty of art
She admires the beauty of pals.
She desures to be a beauty
She strives to be pretty
With lots of hopes and passion,
But she looked funny
In the eyes of the others.
She was only a melting ice
Before her pretty pals.
Her heart breaks into pieces
Like a mirror scatters into pieces.
Her hope to be a beauty
Sinks in the river of dreams

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Uma Srivastava

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Posted: 19 years ago

#2

awh..that is such a nice poem..i really love it..

great job 👏

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ramas

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Posted: 19 years ago

#3

very well done. 👏 👏

Edited by ramas - 19 years ago

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Dwiti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#4

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

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divya

@priya_13

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Posted: 19 years ago

#5

dat wz ab excellent poem, really appreciated, 👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼

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