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ramas thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
please respond to the questions after reading episode we have partially correct answer but not completely correct answer. Use your imagination.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great job ramas!! i love ur parts there so good! 👏 ..i think that girl was saloni who drowned. or maybe it was someone else and saloni helped her?
Edited by DeepaliC - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks deepa. you may be right or may not? I am answering like you did.
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Posted: 19 years ago

I was wondering if anyone could continue the story. I ain't a fantastic writer but, I can always try. If yo don't like it you can always delete it

I am new to the saat phere forum however, I used to be in the tumhari Disha section.

Recap from last episode:Nahar: hey Bhagwaan yeh maine kya kiya. Meri saloni ko bachalo. Maine iske paas kaise jaoon. . Meri Saloni kaisi hogi . He tries to hold himself. But couldn't and start crying. the clerk is comforting Nahar.

Episode 20:

Nahar: (Asks the clerk) Kya kohi kabar ayi? Yaha mein itna taraf raha hu or is hotel mein kise nah kuch nahi kiya!

Saying tis he drops to the ground thinking about all the terrible things that could have happened. He thinks to himself yeh sub mere galti hein chala ta dekhna kya saloni tehar sagte hein. Ab dub gaye nah He continousley cries feeling absolutely upset. Finally the clerk tells him to go to his room.

CLERK:" if there is any news we would tell you immediatley. Please go back to your room.😊

Nahar's room:

Kash meine Saloni ko nahi chora hota Kash..............😡😡

Saloni: Nahar kya ap restroom se vapas aa gaye hein? Nahar (No reply)

Nahar: Sal..oon (Nahi yeh mere man ka vehem hein)

Saloni: Nahar kya vo tum ho? Darvaja band kardo.

Nahar: OMG! Yeh to Salonni hein.

He runs in full speed to go see if that is really Saloni. Nahar instantly hugs Saloni. At first Saloni feels a bit shocked, surprised. However, gives into the hug they are both about to kiss when...............

Clerk: Mr. Nahar em... would you like to see your wife.

Nahar: Well, actually thanks for informing me but, this is my wife Mrs.Saloni Nahar.

CLerk: I am absolutely sorry em... do excuse me? Hope you have a nice time.

Naher: Kabab mere hadi. Saloni tum kaha jahi gali ti? Vo shirt? Tum nahi te or ek ladki dub gaye te meine soche ke meine tumhe hamese kaliye ko de ya hein.

Saloni: 😲 Itna kuch hogeya! I am so sorry Nahar je mujhe maf karodo. Meine jan buch kar yeh sub kuch nahi keya. Vo bat yeh ki mujhe neend ayi te or ap ana ka nam bhi nahi la rahe te to mein yaha aa gaye. Please Mujhe maf kardo. Age se asa nahi hoga.

Nahar: Saloni it's ok swetheart. Tumhare galte nahin hein ab chala bhar gumne.

Saloni: Kaha?

Nahar: Shopping or kaha? Mein aj tumhe leya ek cheez karedne hein.

Saloni: Sachi to cholo! Nahi... ek minute

Nahar: Kya huwa? Mun nahi hein?

Saloni: Vo kapare badal ke ati hoon.

Nahar: Saloni tum jis kohi be sari pehente ho us mein bhoot he zada khubsoorat lagti ho.

Saloni: 😳😳 Ap be nah!

Finally, Saloni's ready and so is Nahar to go and do their surprise shopping. Now, the next writer will enlighten you regarding the shopping episode. Hopefully you like this little episode. I'm sorry I didn't know someone else wanted to continue sorry.

Love Manisha

Edited by miss.england02 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks Manisha very nice episode.
Yes new writers are welcome here. But we take turn so if you want to coninue writing with us. You have to letus know so the episodes are not repeated and also the writer who writes previuos episode tells the next writer what is the mystery.
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Posted: 19 years ago
It's ok manisha no one started working on an episode yet i m glad u continued. Ur a wonderful writer 😛. Poor Nahar he was worried for no reason. Just tell me next time u want to write so that 2 ppl dont post the same episode. 😛

I guess i ll do episode 21. Nahar and Saloni have been on their honeymoon too long lets bring them back home. 😛 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
I agree muni very good idea. At home family member must be missing them. lol!!!!!!!!!
Edited by ramas - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
yea lol i think that's a good idea too! 😆 ...btw good job Manisha.. hope to see you continuing with us! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

I will post the reply to episode 19. Since many of you answered partially correct.

Answers to the episode 19 which is on page 23.
Update to episode 19
While Saloni was swimming A drunk fat lady walking by the pool fell in the water and went to the bottom. Saloni got scared and pulled her up and tied her with Nahar's shirt and pulled her by the curbside and went to front desk and got a clerk. In all this excitment she forgot her shirt and some kid threw that in the pool. She was so anxious to tell Nahar what happened and thank him for teaching her to swim that helped her saving someone's life. She went to look for him and they finally meet . She tells him what happened and Nahar is very happy and proud . he hugs her and wants to buy something for her so they goto shopping.

Edited by ramas - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks!.. lol drunk fat lady 😆 😆 .. saloni was so nice to help her out!

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