FF: Saloni and Nahar..With Savri and Shweta Part 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Guys this is my 3rd ff but not on this forum so i decided since allt his tragic event i wanna make a ff and guys Nahar didnt die hes Amrit but is tryin gto help Saloni out told her everything and why he did all that<br>ok let me Intro were we are know<br>this is only the intro<br>Years passed and well Savri and Shwera are about both 17 and Nahar and Saloni live far away from everyone but Savri lives with them becuase Shewta refused to go when they were leaving beacuse Tara sais she want no ristha with Saloni or anything And BRIDGESH IS FINE<br>Savri lives with Nahar and Saloni<br>ok tell me if you like so i can countineeeeeee<br>luv u allll<br>
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice intro dear...continue soon !!!
Can't wait to read the whole part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks you two well anyway im about to coutinue.....
ok
here goes
Part 1:
Saloni: Nahar
Nahar: Saloni i know what your gonna ask i answered it already and im telling you were going to try to go back
Saloni: In there hearts there a lot of hate for me
Nahar: Well its going to end soon
Saloni: i hope your right Nahar
Than Savri comes in and says Ma Pa i just say Shewta ( she thinks NASA are dead and Savri too so she didntk now Savri was there)today and she is taller than me she really healty and fine
Savri pic:http://www.india-forums.com/tellybuzz/images/uploads/8FB_soni.jpg
Shewta pic:http://www1.india-forums.com/tellybuzz/images/uploads/4A9_Gunjan-Walia.jpg
forgot the sindoor is there and mangalstura srry about that i couldnt find a pic of her with out it
i didnt know who to chose show i just chose them
Nahar: Thats good
Saloni: Savri hows everyone in the house doing
Savri: I dont know
Nahar: Saloni stop worrying her
TO HER IN-LAWS HOUSE
Tara: Shewta here your lunch
Shewta: I miss mamma
Tara: Listen your mom is dead so why are you alwas talking about her
Brigesh: TARA THATS ENOUGH
Tara: but Brigesh
Than Aditya comes
Tara: Aditya
Aditya: What MA
Tara: YOu rlunch and amke sure you all get to school on time
im srry it a bit short it just my bro is sick and he was me to gice me telnoy so i got to give him that so i ll see u alter
hope u like it byesss
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was really good dear !!! I really loved the way how Brijesh was angry on Tara.
Keep it up and continue soon..Can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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is this a story Created by Persii
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really like it continue soon yarr.......and i want tara has more to suffer by adi also bri.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok im gonna oc**tineeee
srry it a bit late this is will be a lttle short also im preety busy soo sorry
Part 2:
savri:Mamma lets go to the mandir
Saloni: ok betari
Savri was going threw the mandir and say Tara and they left but savri stayed and tara thought she was a servant
Tara: excuse me miss nocar can u clean that mandir side and Savri looked up
Savri:Just because you guys are rich doesnt mean you have to call other people thats lower than you a servant
Tara: dont you dare speak to me like this
Savri: i just did dont you dareeeeee
Tara and savri looked at each other and Savri just left
Savri thiking: i hate beahsa
tara: mein osco chorenge
Shewta was at the mall and say Saloni and than was like MA
and Saloni say hwere and Nahar also say here
and everyone was there
Ans Savri was looking at Tara
srry it a bit short but i hope you like itttttttttttttttttttt

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