CHOICE 2
write a special way in which u would propose rahil/karan's . tell about setting/background..how would u say n props u ll use.. ur dialogues etc etc.
My proposal to karan.
scene 1 - on the saarrthi sets.
Asit (director) "arrey, baar baar light kyun chali jaati hai, I'm fed up yaar. chalo aaj ke liye shooting cancel. everyone go home." He waves to everyone and walks out.
everyone are leaving, but karan and romanchak are almost the last ones remaining on set. Romanchak-"chal karan, teri car kharaab hai so I will drop u home today." karan collects his wallet and phone and replies, "thanks a million, raaste mein we can stop at a coffee shop, subaa se kuch nahin khayaa hai, I can only think of food!" romanchak lets out a loud laugh and adds, "you mean food and girls!"😆 Karan lightly punches his shoulder and they both leave together.
scene 2 in the coffee shop.
romanchak -"arrey karan, uss larki ka kya huwa, u know the girl that came from england, u became good friends, kya tha uska naam....hmmm, shazy..." karan interrupts him, "shazia is her name magar sub pyar se usko shazy kehte hain." Romanchak smiles and gently whispers, "oohh, pyar se!"😉 karan blushes slightly😳!
karan- "aisi koi baat nahin hai stupid. u know that I wanna be a bachelor all my life....aur maine apne chat mein bhi aisa hi kaha tha!" he continues to eat his sandwich but romanchak doesn't let go of the topic.
romanchak- "ok, whatever. magar eik baat main kehna chahta hoon, that she was a very sweet girl. she was different than the other ones...u know, jinke peeche tum ghoomte thay!" karan just rolls his eyes and continues to eat. They continue to talk when a band come in and stop in front.
band man- "ladies and gentlemen, we don't normally do this but this is something special. This song is for karan grover, but who dedicated this, yeh toh raaz ki baat hai!" The band begin and karan is left a little confused. he waits for the song. It's...........adnan sami's kabhi toh nazar milao.......karan enjoys it, but is thinking.....who dedicated it for me?
After a short while, both karan and romanchak decide to leave. they are walking towards the car and romanchak is still teasing karan about this mystery. suddenly, a little boy comes with many balloons in his hand. "saab, saab, balloons lelo na." the boy is holding on to karan's trouser😆 karan puts his hand on the boy's head and says, "no thanks." he's about to turn away when romanchak shouts, "karan, balloons pe dekho!" karan reads the writing on the balloons, it says....KABH TOH NAZAR MILAO. romanchak tells him that it must be from the same person who dedicated the song, to which karan replies, "nahin yaar, it could be adnan sami's publicity stunt to promote his next album"😆 they both continue to discuss but are unable to solve this mystery.
scene 3 karan's house.
enjoying his day off, karan is relaxing on his sofa, watching the indo-pak cricket series. suddenly, the bell rings and he gets up to open the door. A man with a hug bouqet of red roses is in front. "Mr karan grover?" he asks. karan nods his head. the man hands him the bouqet and says, "handle with care sir, they are not just flowers, they are someones love."
karan places the roses in a vase, when a small card falls down. he picks it up to read it, which says, "love without return is like a question without an answer. Mujhe tumse eik jawaab chahiye. waqt aane par main saamne aaongi..."❤️ karan is still confused....."arrey saamne toh aao, phir jawaab doonga." he reads the card again and blushes.😳
scene 4 joggers park.
After a long hard jog, karan decides to rest for a while. he sits on the bench to catch his breath. a few minutes later, a woman comes to him, "excuse me, this is for you." she hands him a box. he opens it to find another box in it. he opens that box too and finds another one. he opens it again and there remains a small box. he opens it and sees a little note on it saying......PYAR MAANGA HAI TUMSE, NA INKAAR KARO. Karan asks the lady, "kisne diya hai?" she points towards the opposite direction. as karan turns round he sees the back of a young girl. he runs after her and grabs onto her dupatta. the girl turns round and then shouts "darling, dekho yeh mujhe cher raha hai!" suddenly, a heavy man comes upto karan and looks him in the eye. karan says sorry and runs off. "subaa, subaa double exercise karni par rahi hai...."😆 he whispers to himself.
scene 5 inside the coach
the whole saarrthi team has come out in the middle of the night to shoot a special episode of saarrthi. It's very cold and everyone is sitting in the coach, waiting for the shot to be called. karan is sitting at the back, all alone. baar baar soch raha hai ke yeh larki hai kaun? suddenly, his phone rings. he picks it up..."hello?" a few second later, the song plays....TERE MERE MILAN KI YEH RAINA....and then cuts off. karan is now very confused. just then, the spot boy comes in...."karan ji, aap ko director saab ne pehle bulaya hai, on the bridge." karan thanks him, and puts his phone in his pocket. "kaun hoga?" he asks himself again.
It's very dark, and karan is making his way to the bridge. he can hear the crew members, but can't see them. he continues to walk . suddenly, a red dupatta fall onto his face. It smells very nice😳 he holds the dupatta in his hand, and sees a knot in it. he unties the knot to find a small paper in it. he reads it aloud...."main pyar hoon, main dikhai nahin deti hoon. magar dil ki aankhon se dekho, shayad tum mujhe dekhlo...." karan closes his eyes, only to open them quickly when he hears loud fireworks. he looks up in the sky to see beautiful fireworks- of all colours. but he looks closely to see that the fireworks are spelling out his name....and it says.....KARAN.....I LOVE U. the fireworks are so beautiful, that even karan can't help but smile. he stares in the sky for a long time until he hears someone say, "ok karan... shot ready!" but then karan thinks "yeh kaun hai, director ki awaaz to nahin hai...koi larki..." suddenly, karan begins to run to the top of the bridge. on his way he sees a live band, they sing the song.....HUMAY TUMSE PYAR HAI KITNA, YEH HUM NAHIN JAANTE, MAGAR JEE NAHIN SAKTE, TUMHARE BINAA.....he begins to run again, to the top, to find a girl in a black saree....standing on the bridge...her back facing him.....
karan slowly walks towards her, and puts his hand on her shoulder. The girl touches her shoulder, and whispers...."TERE EIK CHUWAN SE JAAGA, YEH KAISA EHSAAS, PEHLE TOH MEHSOOS HUWI NA, MUJHKO AISI PYAAS..." she slowly turns round.....and shocks karan.😲 "shazia...tum?" at first he is shell-shocked. but then he smiles.😊 "tumne toh mujhe paagal banaa diya!" he laughs. shazia looks into his eyes and says, "paagal toh aap ne mujhe banaya hai, isliye main itni duur se aap ke paas chali aaiy." karan softly puts his hand in her hair and brings her closer. they then hug tightly.
they both stare up at the sky. shazia whispers, "kitni khoobsurat raat hai, dekho kitne sitare hain." she puts her head on his shoulder. karan looks at her and replies, "haan, bahut khoobsurat raat hai, magar dekho, aaj aasmaan kitna budnaseeb hai......kyunki chand toh meri baahon mein hai...."😳 shazia looks at him, with tears in her eyes. she places both her hands on his cheeks and says, mujhe zindagi se kuch nahin chahiye. bas Khudaa se eik cheez roz maangti hoon, aur woh ho tum. agar tum mujhe mil jao...toh phir mujhe poori duniya mil jayegi." she grabs onto his collar and whispers, "kya tum mujhse shaadi karoge? Maine aaj tak koi khushi haasil nahin ki....par agar tum meri zindagi mein aajao, toh phir main zindagi bar Khudaa se kuch nahin mangoongi." she begins to cry😭 karan gently holds onto her face...."sshhh." he puts his finger on her lips. He then takes out a small box from the pocket of his jacket and opens it up. It's a small, diamond ring...very simple yet beautiful. he places the ring on her finger. "jaanti ho, maine kubse yeh ring apne paas sumbhaal ke rakhaa hai. aaj iss ring ko apni manzil milgaiy aur....." he stops. shazia ask, "aur?" karan smiles...."aur mujhe BHI apni manzil milgaiy.."😳 they both smile at each other and karan takes shazia into his arms🤗
they are both left standing on the bridge, hugging, all alone. But with only the stars watching above them, shining and smiling upon them.......
well guys, sorry if this is too long. I apologize, I know it's not that good. but I had a small accident in which I hurt my leg. so I've tried my best.😕 sorry if there are any mistakes. And one more thing, I dedicate this story to my best friend.......pakhi.😃 Take care all.🤗
Edited by shazy - 19 years ago
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