Creative channel - Page 2

wahey!!! great idea!!
if u need my help in any way..dutnt hesistate to ask!!
i'll be ready to help...

Originally posted by: shivvy16

wahey!!! great idea!!
if u need my help in any way..dutnt hesistate to ask!!
i'll be ready to help...

Thanks Shivvy, We gonna have an international band of song writers...we need people from all age groups to write beautiful songs..thanks for responding..😃

Originally posted by: coolsaints11

Thanks Shivvy, We gonna have an international band of song writers...we need people from all age groups to write beautiful songs..thanks for responding..😃

no probs...but i hardly have any music talent...i'll try and help though

Originally posted by: shivvy16

no probs...but i hardly have any music talent...i'll try and help though

we all have some creativity inside us, but we are soo busy with our every day lives that it remain supressed.. we come to this forum.. some times we have fun.. some times we fight... some times we are sarcastic..we can also be creative..writing a new, original song.. taking help of every body...and feel good about it..

I think I started this thread at wrong time..I have to go back to work now..Hopefully creative channel is still alive when I come back😭 😭...bye for now

Originally posted by: coolsaints11

we all have some creativity inside us, but we are soo busy with our every day lives that it remain supressed.. we come to this forum.. some times we have fun.. some times we fight... some times we are sarcastic..we can also be creative..writing a new, original song.. taking help of every body...and feel good about it..

I think I started this thread at wrong time..I have to go back to work now..Hopefully creative channel is still alive when I come back😭 😭...bye for now

i'll be happy to use my hidden crativity to help u..

dunt wori i'll kepp this topic ALIVE!!

Any body with interest in reading poetry..Any body given a try at writing poetry..Any body with any poem published in school magazine, college magazine...newspaper..book..Can you share your experiences... 😃

A situation is...
A man sees a woman and is mesmerized by her beauty but is not telling her so that there is no
misunderstanding...

It has been very well described in an old song..

tere husn kee kyaa taareef karu, kuchh kahate huye bhee darataa hoo
kahee bhool se too naa samaz baithhe, ke main tuz se mohabbat karataa hoo

Can you come up with another lyrics for the same situation in a new style, in a new form, may be an hindi english version 😳

I have no words after reading your poems...Lagta hai yadi yeh "International band of song writers" ban gaya to bollywood kya, hollywood mein bhi dhoom macha dega 😉.I would just say ..mind blowing..mind blowing..mind blowing..Aap ke kavita padh ke mujhe yeh gana yaad aa rha hai..
Twinkle 😉 Twinkle 😉 little star
How I wonder what you are?
Jokes apart..your poems are mind blowing

Originally posted by: shivvy16

i'll be happy to use my hidden crativity to help u..

dunt wori i'll kepp this topic ALIVE!!

Thanks Shivvy😃

A little thing about creativity in Hindi songs...How the poet describes his love..

In "Bobby" the poet says

Main shayar to nahin, magar ai haseen, jab se dekha maine tujh ko mujh ko shayari aa gayi

Going ahead further, In "Karz" the poet writes...

Dar-ye-dil, Dar-ye-jigar, dil mein jagaya aapnein
pehle to main shayar tha aashiq banaya aapne

Going further, another poet is going ahead repeating it three times, to tell how strongly he loves her

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
aashiq banaya, aashiq banaya, aashiq banaya aapne

Whatwill be the next poet write to make a bigger impact 😃
Any body with any comments, further extension of this poetic thread.. 😃