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Posted: 19 years ago
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I have noticed that many of the forum members are excellent in poetry and I just wanted to start a theard in which the forum members write a piece of poetry for the person above them or any poem that they like. I know that a lot of my bhiayahs and didis are gifted in this field so I am really looking forward to see another glimpse of their talent. Thank you in advance to everyone who participates and I really do hope that atleast someone participates. Thank you everyone and I am really sorry if you think that this is an extremely stupid thread...I just thought it would be interesting.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gumshuda

Jenny kissed me when we met,
Jumping from the chair she sat in.
Time, you thief! who love to get
Sweets into your list, put that in.
Say I'm weary, say I'm sad;
Say that health and wealth have missed me;
Say I'm growing old, but add-
Jenny kissed me!

nice poem ghumshuda ji...was it your invention or did you read it some where?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gumshuda

It is from a dirty old man whose name was leigh hunt

acha then ish peom kah view itnah acha nahi raha...i hope kih ish poem kha koi jandha mathlabh nahi ho😕

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: gudia8712

acha then ish peom kah view itnah acha nahi raha...i hope kih ish poem kha koi jandha mathlabh nahi ho😕

i wouldn't know kyun ki marah koh gandha double meanings itnih jaldhi nahi samjh man atha

lakin it seems like ghumshuda jih kih aap shayarih main interest rakh tha hain

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gumshuda

This is a classic from english literature 😕



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Posted: 19 years ago
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aaawww abhi bhaiyah that is such a sweet poem 👏
abh i wonder kih woh kis kah liyah thi? (a future to be bhabhi of mine maybe?)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Gudiya rani, tere yeh uncle-ji thoda bahut paagal hain... inse door hi rehna
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gumshuda

mujhay maaf kar do..mein ayenda classics post nahin karoonga

nahi nahi marah mathlabh woh nahi tha...main bhi classics padh thi hoon but since main sirf single meaning poetry padh thi hoon and i have not been exposed (thank god) to double meaning (joh gandha ho) i wouldn't be able to catch it quickly...though i can catch satire and undercurrents pretty quickly...and i am sorry agar mainah aap koh hurt kiyah hain gumshuda ji...sorry once again

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sangeetaa

Gudiya rani, tere yeh uncle-ji thoda bahut paagal hain... inse door hi rehna
😆

hahahah😆 acha didi abh aap kih bharih kuch likh yah nah please😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Poem for Gumshuda:

1 big ole monkey jumping on the thread...
He fell down and broke his head..
Father called the doctor. Doctor said:
NO MORE MONKEYS JUMPING ON GUDIYA"S THREAD!!! 😆

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