Short Story: Finding Love P3 page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys..im hereee...i've had a long day full of freedom and i thought i should use my time wisely..this is the first time i've ever had a go at writing an SS..LOOOL the thought makes me laugh but yeah this is the first, let me know what you think of it and if i should carry it onđŸ€—



Indu Singh, the only name on the lips of every woman. He was the dreams of millions of girls. Everyone wanted him and he loved the attention. This rare man saw himself as Adonis, the man full of beauty and love. He felt that the world should fall at his feet.

His work life was the smoothest it could be it was always field trips and business meeting or just sitting in his study doing what he loved doing the most; painting. He wished life was a lot more easier. He too has dreams about meeting his life partner. "I've dated many women but none of them have loved me they way I am, they're all fake, all they love is my money and the expensive gifts. I just want a simple life partner that loves me for I am, someone who understands me and loves me.đŸ„ș

Next day at office: Karan, Indu's PA walks in: Sir please explain to me again why you're going camping"

Indu: its simple, I'm working on my next project and for that i need to go to the country side, just have all the equipment's ready for tonight, got it, i must leave as soon as

Karan: what about the bodyguards

Indu: what about them?

Karan: I mean, are they going too

Indu: of course you dumb ass why wouldn't they, besides i cant even go to the club downstairs without them, you know what just get on with what I've told you to do and don't irritate me.

Karan walks out confused, "what an ajeeb man, without even informing his clients he decides to cancel everything and go on a little holiday leaving us all to do the dirty work for him urghh god i hate him. Thank god i don't have to see his flawless and annoying face for a whole week. This definitely calls for a celebration..Yippee

Indu just sits in is office chair day dreaming about his new adventure trip " If only they knew what the actual I'm going for is" He sighs and carries on with rest of his work and gets ready for the long night ahead of him.

By 10pm Indu and his guards have reached their destination, the biggest forest in Wales. Perfect he thought, just the scenery he needed.

Indu : Okay lads set up the 4x4 tents, i need to sleep I've got a long day ahead of me tomorrow.

Next morning, the Sun is shining, the birds are singing. What could be a better vacation than this? He smiles to him self and goes for his usual morning run with his bodyguards. Suddenly they come across something rather unexpected. A young is woman lying down next to a tree with a huge injury to her forehead. Indu goes next to her and feels her pulse

Indu: she must have fell and hurt herself, she's still alive lets get her to a hospital

Bodyguard 1 (Raja): Sir we're in the middle of nowhere, lets take her back to tent and let's see if we can treat her

Indu: fine, i'l pick her you guys get her stuff

And with that Indu goes and takes her in his arms and carries her to his tent and carefully places her down. The guards get the first aid and they treat her head and they leave. Indu just sits there and watches her (not in a pervy way😆) her face is just beautiful. He lifts his hand t touch her face and carefully removes the locks of her hair fro her face. He feels this strong yet unknown pull towards her, he can't quite figure it out but he is loving it and welcomes the emotions arising in heart.â˜ș

After a few minutes the young lady starts to gain back her consciousness, her eyes flutter and they open.


Okay how did that go..im not even sure myself😆 im so nervous, please leave you comments and if you liked it, hit the button below😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ooh I really hope the injured lady is little miss Sanchi! It was nice to see a different Indu in a different light - he's very career focused!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely Faisa ..your story was nice and up to the mark ..lubbed it dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: butterbear

Ooh I really hope the injured lady is little miss Sanchi! It was nice to see a different Indu in a different light - he's very career focused!


awwh thanks love.i feel so much better now 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good work Faiza! And yes please I with love some more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: PiE-ChUcKeR_AmI

Lovely Faisa ..your story was nice and up to the mark ..lubbed it dear.


yaaay thanks Amit!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: suki11

Good work Faiza! And yes please I with love some more!


oh dont worry i'll be updating it soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Faizu my little darling. I loved it...brilliant and love Indu in a new light and avatar! Keep writing doll!
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Originally posted by: Namita.Murti

Faizu my little darling. I loved it...brilliant and love Indu in a new light and avatar! Keep writing doll!



awhh thanks love...awwhh im getting really lovely responses...dont worry i'll update very soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh.. Fazi.. You dont have to be nervous..

It is nice. Keep writing.

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