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Amit

@GunDaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

i mean jo is topic mai 20 lines likhi ho usko edit karke 40 lines likh do.

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@Silentsoul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

got it sweety...should I pm you...till when I can post it

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Sonali.S

@Sonali.S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

no no kul...jo hoga sabke saamne hoga...post it here...kynki mai baad me sabko saath me arrange kar dug...abhi ti bahut time hai aaram se likho

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@Silentsoul

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

to kab tak likh sakte hai time limit kya hai and whats dhaano

Edited by kuls11 - 13 years ago

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Sonali.S

@Sonali.S

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

itni jaldi bhul gayi...dhanno indu ki sarpat daudne wali bike hai...u can post till friday and word limit is 40 words...

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Michelle Dantis

@michelle281194

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

superb!!! will think of something tonight! :)

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Michelle Dantis

@michelle281194

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

InSa locked in bathroom:

When Indu was searching for his clothes in the bathroom, Sanchi entered and shut the door without noticing him. Now its not opening again.

S: Yeh humne kya kar diya!

Looking at her expression, Indu tries to lighten the mood.

I: Sanchi ji, humko aapse ee umeed na thi! Hum jaise bhole bhale, pyare, hendsum se launde ko aise bathroom ma gher liya aapne! Badmaash kahi ki! Mood mein toh hum bhi.. Par bathroom mein! Ab bahar ka ijjat reh jayegi humri?

S: Itne bhi handsome nahi ho tum ki-

I: Itne bhi? Matlab thode toh hai na? Arre humka pata hai, ee sab laxmanrekha ka khel tumri na humri ijjat bachane ke liye hai! (laughs)

S: (sarcastically) haan haan, humari buri nazar toh tum pe kab se hai!

I: Oho dusht vishkanya! Tumri bhi ka galti, hum lagte hi hai itne chauchak! Pure benaras mein hum jaisa launda na milega aapko!

Veena starts trying to open the door.

I: Sasuma, jaldi humka bachao! Do minute mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai humre saath! Ka Sanchi ji.. Romance ka itna hi mood tha toh humko seedhe se bol deti! Hum toh humesha mood mein hi rehte hain! Waise, aaj raat ki jagah, din ma hi satak gayi tumri? Kuch lee ho ka?

S: Chee, kaisi baatein karte ho..

Her mother opens the door and she leaves with a slight smile.

I: Kaahe Shiv ji, kaahe? Kaahe itni chauchak muskaan diye ho dharampatni ji ko! Humre dil ki dhadkan humri dhanno ke jaise daudne lagti hai! Haaye!

(hopefully, i dint bore you! My induvani is not so great coz i have no grasp on north indian hindi.. Hindi in mumbai is quite abused and ashudh :D sorry!)

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Sonali.S

@Sonali.S

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

chauchak likhi ho bey...humre udaas chehre par muskaan aa gayi...gher liya...hahaha...indu bahut chaalu cheez h...pta ki ki dharampatni ji ko kaise irritate krna h

Michelle...indu ki diwaani...mjhe bahut jyada aacha laga

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Sonali.S

@Sonali.S

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

i know ki ye waqt khush hone ka nhi isliye maine sbko part lene ke liye insist hi nhi kiya kynki mai bahut depression me hun

Phr bhi ye saare scenes mai new thread me post karungi aur mai aur faisa batayege ki winner kaun h induvaani ka.

It was so funny michelle.

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Rashmi04

@Rashmi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Friends, First time I have written a FF . Hope you will like it.

TOPIC GIVEN BY SONALI - Indu and sanchi on bike and Rain.

Indu and sanchi on bike were going to college and it started pouring out of nowhere. Sanchi asked Indu in taunting way Apni khatara ko teez nahi chala saktay.

Instantly Indu replied Dharampatni ji humree dhano ko kuch na kehna bolo yeh mausam hi itna mast hai to maar humree dhano na hoge mast bey. Sanchi ji aap har bakhat ghoray phar sawar na Raha karo kabhi aagay bhi nazar ghoma liya karo (Indicated towards him). Chauchak mausam hai woh kaya kehtay hai... woh ... ENJOB karo (ENJOY).

Sanchi made a face and said what else I can expect from you?

I know you will be happy if I'll fall ill.

Indu with confused looks replied Aab yeh mat kehna sasuri iss mein humrey galti hai Aur Indra dev humray saath mil kar Aap ko bemaar karney ke yojana bana rahe hai bey.

Sanchi was not happy because she got drenched. Indu tried his luck again by Pointing towards a girl who was enjoying in the Rain. Sanchiji ek aap ho Aur ek wo laundiya hai jo maar mausam ko pura enjob kar rahe hai . Aap toh baas Bhatakti Aatma ki tarah kallege se ghar aur ghar se kallege tak he jatay ho

Sanchi got furious and asked him to continue bird watching activity.

Indu immediately realised that she has misunderstood him and got irritated .Tumree khopde mein koi samay wala bomb hai kaya bey (time bomb) jab bhi humray saath hote hu woh fat jata hai Aur tumra dimaag hil jata hai.

Sanchi asked him to shut his mouth and this time indu thought it is better to keep quite (Adrak waley chai hmmm idea drop)

Edited by Rashmi04 - 13 years ago