DIRA (FF) : HUME TUMSE PYAR KITNA..UPDATE 13 on PG 39 - Page 18

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014

liked the update very much .

actualy in that shoping scene i agree with ratan.diya made a mistake by not upporting ratan view in front of abhay.

she wears it or not ..she should have agreed with ratan and purchased it in front of abhay.

oh man ratan is being so sweet .he is so understanding caring and loving

as Nags said thakranisa deserves that angry treatment by ratan ..


Thanks Vijaya for liking the update..😊

Diya is wrong this time.. She has hurt Ratan a lot... And Ratan's anger is fully justified here..

She had only seen Caring and loving side of Ratan till now, now she will see his ANGRY side 😡😡...
Edited by arulya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Beautifully written
Continue soon


Thanks Plmzaq for liking the update😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: arulya


Thanks Nags for liking the update😆

Ya, Ratan is a super-sweet and Super-caring husband, Diya shud be v proud to have..😊

Now diya also feels that she shud have supported Ratan esp in front of Abhay.. He expected her to support his opinion, but she didnt.. And this had hurt him A LOT... He had been maintaining his calm with Diya till now, but this time, he just cudnt..

He had been trying so hard for past 1 month or so, trying to convince diya.. and after so many days of non stop try, This is how Diya behaves or treats him... Ratan just lost his COOL...Till now Diya had only seen his loving and caring side😊, now she will see his ANGRY side.. 😡

Thanks for appreciating pics- actually it benefits me doubly- as i get to watch the entire episide again, apart from selecting pics for FF😆😆 Only irritating thing -watching ADs on sony liv app😕


Sonyliv app sucks 🤢
Dearie try to surf sonyliv web...that's much better compared to the app version.😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nags-


Sonyliv app sucks 🤢
Dearie try to surf sonyliv web...that's much better compared to the app version.😉



Hav tried both.. Ya, website is less irritating than mobile app, like u said..😃 Surprisingly, y'day i didnt have to watch even a single ad on their website...😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nags-


Sonyliv app sucks 🤢
Dearie try to surf sonyliv web...that's much better compared to the app version.😉


i paid something like 500 i think for one year on sonyliv web so .i wont get any ads .in fact i like watching on sonyliv web than tv because for me NO ADS
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome !!!!!
👏 👏
Ratan ,so loving and caring hubby. Really such a caring hubby is dream of every girl. Diya till now got his love , care and affection, now anger. Now it's Diya to woo him, I think she will wear that dress for Ratan.

And also the way you are using Abhay''s character to bring Dira closer , I liked it very much.🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Doreman

Awesome !!!!!

👏 👏
Ratan ,so loving and caring hubby. Really such a caring hubby is dream of every girl. Diya till now got his love , care and affection, now anger. Now it's Diya to woo him, I think she will wear that dress for Ratan.

And also the way you are using Abhay''s character to bring Dira closer , I liked it very much.🤗


Thanks Dear..😆😆 M glad that u liked the update..😊😊

Yes, Now Diya shud be able to understand the state of Ratan's mind and Heart.. He had been trying NON-STOP to convince her.. And after she has seen him lose his cool, she shud make some efforts to calm him down..😊

COME ON DIYA, NOW, IT'S YOUR TURN...😉 But Diya.. Ratan ko jab gussa aata hai😡😡, to bahut aata hai😡😡.. Itna aasaan nahin hoga, Ratan baabu ki manaana...😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: arulya


Thanks Dear..😆😆 M glad that u liked the update..😊😊

Yes, Now Diya shud be able to understand the state of Ratan's mind and Heart.. He had been trying NON-STOP to convince her.. And after she has seen him lose his cool, she shud make some efforts to calm him down..😊

COME ON DIYA, NOW, IT'S YOUR TURN...😉 But Diya.. Ratan ko jab gussa aata hai😡😡, to bahut aata hai😡😡.. Itna aasaan nahin hoga, Ratan baabu ki manaana...😆😆


eagerly waiting for next update as to how diya wll make ratan calm down ...guessing she will wear that dress and go with him to that party .
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014


eagerly waiting for next update as to how diya wll make ratan calm down ...guessing she will wear that dress and go with him to that party .


Ya, she is gonna try hard to calm Mr Angry Young Man urf Ratan down.. Lets see if she will succeed😊 or not😕..
Wait for next update, which will be uploaded very soon (may b today itself)😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

UPDATE 8

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Ratan and Diya return back home. Ratan still looked angry..

Sakshi- Arey datahukum, Thakraanisa.. Aap aa gaye.. Hum aap dono hi ka intzaar kar rahe they.. Aaiye na..

Diya hesitantly smiles. Ratan doesn't seem interested in anything..

Sakshi- Diya thakranisaa.. Zara dikhaaiye to, Datahukum ne aapko kya dress dilaayi...?

Ratan- Nahin Sakshi baisa.. Diya ko meri suggested dress pasand nahin aayi.. Unhe sirf apni pasand ki dresses pehan-na achcha lagta hai.. Baaki kisi aur ki feeling se, unki choice se, Inhe koi farak nahin padta.. He sounded frustrated and very angry.

Sakshi Kya ghuma ghuma ke baate kar rahen hai aap, datahukum.. Diya thakranisa, chaliye aap hi bataaiye.. Kya laayin hain, shaam ki party ke liye..

Ratan-Haan Diya, aap hi bataa deejiye.. Sakshi baisaa, main thak gaya haun.. main kuch der aaram karna chahta hun...

He gives an angry stare to Diya. He heads towards thier room, without saying anthing more..

Diya cud understand state of Ratan's mind.. She knew that she had done very wrong by not supporting Ratan's opinion in that clothing store, in front of Abhay.. Now, She wants to speak to Ratan and apologize for her mistake.

Diya- Sakhshi baisa, hum bhi thoda thak gaye hain.. Thoda aaram karna chahte hain.. She is about to get up, but Sakshi stops her..

Sakshi- Arey thakranisa.. Zaraa dress to dikhaaye, hum bhi to dekhen aap kya laayin hain..

Diya shows her the dress, a saari..

Sakshi- Oh.. Saari.. Humne socha tha, ki datahukum aapko party ke liye, koi bahut achchi si western dress dilaayenge.. Par aap to saari le aayin.. Chaliye koi nahin, yeh saari bhi bahut pretty hai.. Aap par achchi lagegi.. Sakshi keeps Diya busy for sometime, though Diya wanted to speak to Ratan.. She wanted to say sorry to him..

Meanwhile Ratan goes to the room.. He is very angry and upset with Diya.. He needs to vent out his anger, but at the same time he doesn't want to shout on Diya... He goes to restroom as he desperately wants a bath to cool him down and to relax him.He comes out of washroom..


He knew Diya wud come to room, anytime now.. But he is no mood to speak to her now. He lies on bed pretending to be asleep. Diya enters the room. She finds Ratan sleeping.. She tries calling out Ratan's name just to check if he has really slept, but he doesn't respond.. She doesn't try again, as she doesn't want to disturb his sleep..

Diya too freshens up and lies down on bed to sleep.. She notices that this time, Ratan himself had kept the Motu-sa-pillow on the bed, in the centre, between them. She feels sad for not being able to speak to Ratan.. Diya then decides to talk to him after he wakes up in the evening.. After sometime, Diya too falls asleep..

It's evening now.. Diya wakes up but she doesn't find Ratan in the room.. She gets up hurriedly... She calls out Ratan's name.. Then she checks in washroom.. But there is no sign of Ratan in the room.. She goes downstairs and asks Sakshi about Ratan's whereabouts..

Sakshi- Thakraanisa, datahukum to party ke liye nikal chuke hain... Humne unse poocha tha ki, woh aapko kyun saath nahin le jaa rahen. Par unhone kaha ki aapko parties pasand nahin, isliye.. Kya aap sach mein jaana chaahti thi?

Diya- Sakshi baisa, hume aapki madad ki zaroorat hai.. Kya aap humari help karengi..?

Sakshi- haan haan, kyun nahin.. Bataaiye..

Diya tells Sakshi about her plan.. Sakshi goes with Diya to clothing showroom to buy that same black dress.. Meanwhile Diya was trying Ratan's number repeatedly.. But he didn't answer any of her calls and Diya was now just freaking out bcoz of this.

Diya and Sakshi come back home hurriedly... Diya slips on the dress. It fits her perfectly.. Sakshi helps her in getting ready. Diya asks her not to overdo anything.. Sakshi puts little make up on Diya's face and Diya's dark smoky eyes were doing all the magic. Small diamond studs added to her elegant look. She looks in the mirror.. She looks so feminine and kinda sexy actually.. Her feet felt numb and her hands were shaking..

Sakshi- Thakranisa, aap aise ghabraa kyun rahin hain.. Aap ko iss dress mein dekh kar to Datahukum k ehosh hi udd jayenge..

She usually doesn't become this nervous.. But she was doing it for Ratan and this thought made her confident.

Ratan had reached the party.. Surprisingly Abhay is also invited there.. Abhay cud see that Ratan was alone, and Diya wasn't accompanying him..


He felt happy about it.. He goes near Ratan and asks him- Datahukum, kya hua? Aap akele aaye hain, party mein? Aapki wife, Diya nahin aayin, aapke saath? Saari mein?


Ratan- Mujhe aapke sawaalon ka jawaab dene ko koi zaroorat nahin hai.. Aur meri wife ke baare mein, koi baahar ka insaan, yun pooch-taach kare, yeh main bilkul bardaasht nahin krunga..

Abhay- Kya datahukum, aap abhi bhi, dopahar ki tarah baatein kiye jaa rahen hain.. Aap dono mein jab husband aur wife jaisa koi mel-jol hi nahin, fir kaisa rishta, aur kaisi, uss rishte ke liye, humse yun naraazgi.. Just chill, datahukum.. aapki wife nahin aayi, iska zyada gam mat manaaiye.. Hum, iss party mein aapko company de denge..

Suddenly Ratan cud smell Diya's aroma, being carried by the gentle breeze around him.. He cud sense her presence.. As he turns around, he finds her standing behind him..

Her black eyes glistened in the dark night. Her open long, dark hair, brought in front over her shoulder, her soft tender lips and her beautiful flawless face made his anger disappear completely, just in a fraction of second.. Her beauty was mesmerizing and Ratan's eyes just refused to move away from her. Diya too was looking at Ratan, very lovingly..


She moves closer to Ratan.. She smiles, wraps her one arm around Ratan (to show off to abhay) and asks- Ratan, kya humne aane mein der kar di?

Ratan- Haan, thodi si.. Par woh kahte hain na, sabr ka fal meetha hota hai.. Aapko yun dekhne ke liye to, main ghanto aapka intzaar kar sakta hun, wifey..

Abhay is feeling embarrassed now.. He hadn't expected that Diya wud come, wearing that short dress.. Ratan now looks at Abhay- Shayad, ab kisi ko uski baat ka zawaab mil gaya hoga.. Behtar hoga, log dusro ki life mein dakhal dena band Kar den.. Nahin to unhe, har baar, apne munh ki khaani padegi.. Aisi hi kuch kahaawat hai na, Diya?

Diya- Haan, bilkul sahi kaha aapne.. Abhay cud see a huge winning smile on Ratan and Diya's face. He prefers to leave and goes near the bar area.

Ratan takes diya to main area.. He says- Thank you Diya...Maine nahin socha tha ki aap aayengi... Aur yeh dress pehnengi.. Thank you Diya.. Thank you so much.. Aapne mere liye jo aaj kiya, it really means a lot to me.. Sach main, aaj ka din bahut special hai.. Diya smiles..

Diya- Aapko yeh sab achcha laga, hum bas issi se bahut khush hain.. And I m really sorry, wahan shop mein hume jo kaha, woh galat tha..

Ratan- Aapko ek baat bataaun?

Diya- haan bataaiye..

Ratan- Aap iss dress mein superhot and super sexy lag rahin hain..

Diya- kya?

Ratan- Compliment hai, wifey.. Aap waise bhi, mere liye iss duniya ki sabse khoobsurat lady hain, par aaj jo aap kyamat dhaa rahin hain.. Really..

Diya- Ratan, ab aap bas kareeiye..

Ratan- ok ok.. He takes out his hand and stares into her dark black eyes. Ratan asks- Diya, kya apne husband ke saath ek dance karengi..?

Diya looks in his eyes and says- haan..

Ratan- to chaliye...


Both go to dancing area. Ratan lifts diya's right hand and places it on his left shoulder. He holds Diya's left hand in his right hand tightly. Then, he places his left hand on her slim waist. He pulls her near him. Ratan's gentle touch on Diya's waist was doing something to her. His scent was making her weak.. Her face starts blushing. Ratan is also totally enjoying holding Diya like this.. Diya, the most beautiful lady, he had ever seen.. God's best creation.. His wife.. So close to him.. Both dance to a slow romantic song.. They fully enjoyed the dancing and holding each other so close..

After the dance, Diya says- Ratan, hume pyaas lagi hai.. Kahin koi waiter dikh raha hai kya aapko?

Ratan- Diya, aap yahin rukiye.. Main bas 1 minute mein, aapke liye kuch peene ke liye laata hun.. Soft drink lengi aap?

Diya- okay..

Ratan- Main khud, aapke liye soft drink lekar aata hun..

Abhay had been watching both of them closely.. He gives money to the waiter and asks him to add a sedative (sleeping medicine) in Diya's drink.. Waiter agrees for this..


Abhay leaves from there, before Ratan comes. Ratan- waiter, 2 glasses of soft drink plz..

Waiter- Sir aap, chaliye..Main wahin, aapke liye 2 glass soft drink lekar aata hun..

Ratan- Oh cool.. Theek hain, main wahan right side main wait kar rahan hun.. thoda jaldi keejiye.. ok?

Waiter- yes, sir.. Main bas abhi laya..

Ratan- ok.. Ratan leaves and goes to Diya..

Waiter comes and serves soft drinks.. Ratan picks up the glasses and give one glass to Diya..


Waiter leaves.. He signals thumbs up to Abhay, who is standing far away.. Both Diya and Ratan finish their drinks..

Ratan- Diya, agar aap bura na maane to kya main aapse kuch confess kar sakta hun?

Diya- haan, boliye? aisa kya kahna chahte hain aap humse?

Ratan- Diya, aap bahut beautiful hain.. Mere liye, aap sabse important hain.. Aapko humesha se maine apne bahut kareeb maana hai.. Ek aap hi hain, jo mere dil mein hamesha se rahi hain.. Shayad issi liye, un 12 saalon mein, aapse itna dur hone ke baad bhi, aapko humsha apne aas-paas mehsoos kiya.. Diya, I feel, m in love with you..Actually this is not how wanted to tell you this.. But I cant just wait any longer.. I cant think of living without you.. Aapse ab aur dur rah paana mushkil hai mere liye.. Main nahin jaanta aap mere baare mein, mere pyar ke baare mein kya sochti hain.. Par mere liye, aapse behtar aur koi nahin. Mera dil sirf aapko chahta hai, sirf aapko maangata hai.. Pata hai, Mera dil abhi mujhse kah raha hai, ki bas abhi, issi waqt kas ke aapko kas ke apni baahon mein bhar lun.. Aapko apna banaa lun.. Aapko itnaa pyar dun ki aap kabhi mujhse dur jaane ka soche bhi nahin..

Diya- ratan.. aap yeh sab... abhi.

Ratan- Diya relax.. Main sirf apne dil ki baat aapse kah raha hun.. Don't worry, I understand, you still need some more time..main jaanta hun ki abhi bhi hum mein dooriyaan hai..

Diya doesn't say anything.. Ratan- but I wish, yeh dooriyan jald se jald mit jaayen..

By now, Diya starts feeling little dizzy..

Diya- Ratan, hume kuch achcha nahin lag raha.. kya hum ab ghar chalen..?

Ratan- kya hua diya, aap theek to hain?

Diya- haan, kuch khaas nahin.. bas humara sir thoda bhaari lag raha hai..

Ratan- ok, agar aap ghar jaana chahti hain to, hum chale jaate hain.. Aaiye..

Ratan holds her close and they both start to leave.. Next moment, it starts raining heavily... Both Diya and Ratan hurry up, but they get fully drenched in rain, by the time, they reach the car..

Ratan starts driving fast, as Diya isn't feeling very well.. Both reach back home.. Ratan helps Diya to get back to their room.. He makes her sit on the bed.. He changes his dress first.. Then, he helps Diya to reach the cupboard, so that she can take her night dress and change.. But Diya is feeling quite drowsy by now and she slips.. Ratan hold her and saves her from falling down.. Both look into each other's eyes.. Diya can see immense love and passion for her in Ratan's eyes.. She remembers wat all he said to her, in party..


She tries to gain control over her body and stand straight, but she is unable to.. Ratan makes her sit on bed again and turns around to get the nightdress for Diya.. As Ratan brings a night dress for Diya, he finds her deep asleep.. He didn't know wat happened to her suddenly.. She was ok, 30 min back.. He thinks- may be she is too tired.. Later he also goes back to sleep..

Next morning, both Ratan and Diya are still in deep sleep. Ratan is holding Diya's hand tightly, while sleeping, as she wasn't well last night..


Ratan wakes up first.. he checks the time


He looks at Diya who is still sleeping.. Ratan calls out Diya's name.. Diya.. ? Diya..? Aap theek hain..? uthiye, bahut der ho gayi hai..

Diya wakes up.. She is still feeling heavy-headed.. She tries to remember wat happened last night.. She cud remember- Ratan saying- aapse ab aur dur rah paana mushkil hain mere liye.. Mera dil abhi mujhse kah raha hai, ki abhi, issi waqt aapko apni baahon mein bhar lun, aapko apna banaa lun.. Later she had a soft drink, given to her by Ratan.. Then it rained, both got fully drenched in rain.. They came back home.. May be she was in Ratan's arms later..


After that, she cudnt remember anything more.. She looks around.. she finds herself in her night suit.. She gets up hurriedly..

Ratan- kya hua diya?


Diya- yeh night dress..? humne to kal ek black dress pehni thi na..? Fir yeh night dress kaise?

Ratan- woh actually kal, aap aur main, dono baarish mein bheeg gaye they to.. Aapki dress to bilkil gili ho chuki thi.. Isliye change karni padi..

Diya- change karni padi.. ? kya matlab hai aapka?

Ratan- kya matlab ka kya matlab?

Diya- kya aapne kal, yahan room mein, hume apni bahoon mein liya hua tha?

Ratan- haan, woh isliye ki..

Diya interrupts - Ratan, aapne yeh kya kiya? Humne kal aapki ek baat kya maan li, aapne socha ki, humne aapko hum par sab haq de diye? Aapki himmat kaise hui humari dress change karne ki? Aapne socha bhi kaise, ki agar maine kal raat aapki pyar bhari chaar baaten sun li, to aapko mujh par poora haq mil gaya.. Hum jaante hain ki, Aap hume apna banana chahte hain, par hume iska andaaza bilkul nahin tha ki, aap humari neend mein, humare saath aisa kuch karenge.. Ratan, humne aap par bharosa kiya, aur aapne kya kiya? Humne aapke saath bed share karne ke liye haan ki thi, khud ko share Karne ki nahin..


Ratan- Diya, stop... Bahut bol diya apne. Diya stops..

Ratan- Kuch soch samajh ke bol rahin aap, ya fir jo bhi aapke mann mein aa raha hai, wahi bole chali jaa rahin hain? Aapke kahne ka kya matab hai, diya? Aapko lagta hai ki, maine kal raat aapke saath kuch aisa kiya, jo mujhe nahin karna chahiye tha? Aapko lagta hai ki, Kal maine aapki dress change ki? Aapko apni baahon mein liya, aur aapko aapna banaa liya, ya aapna banaane ki koshish ki?


Ratan- Aap mere baare mein aisa sochti hain, diya? Really? Aap ko lagta hai ki main kuch aisa kar sakta hun, aapke saath..?

Diya is not saying anything, seeing Ratan's anger

Ratan- Haan, kal main aapko wahan dekh kar bahut khush tha, isliye nahin ki kal aap uss dress mein bahut hot lag rahin thi, par isliye ki aap wahan meri liye aayin, aur aapne meri pasand ki hui dress pehni.. Haan maine aapse confess kiya tha ki, main aapko apna banaana chahta hun, aapko bahut pyar dena chahta hun.. Par aapne aisa socha bhi kaise ki, aapki neend mein, main aapka fayda unthaaunga.. Diya, let me tell you very clearly that I wud never, ever take advantage of you.. I have loved you, truly.. I have loved ur heart, your soul, Its not just ur body, that I want. Mujhe aapka pyar chaahiye, aapka saath chahiye..


Ratan is feeling very bad and his eyes get little teary now- Diya, agar mujhe aap par issi tarah se yun haq jamaana hota, to pata nahin, main kab ka woh sab kuch kar chuka hota, jo aapne socha ki maine kal raat aapke saath kiya.. And trust me, aap bhi mujhe woh karne se nahin rok paati.. Faayda uthana, kya hota hai, woh shayad aapko achche se pata nahin. Aur rahi baat, aapko apni baahon mein lene ki, woh mujhe isliye karna pada, kyunki aap fisal gayi thi.. Aur aapki dress change karne ki baat.. Aap apne hosh mein nahin thi, kal raat.. To isliye maine, esha bhabhisa ko bulaya, madad karne ke liye.. Unhi ne aapko night dress pehnaayi.. Aur aapki dress change hone ke baad hi, main room mein waapis aaya..


Diya is feeling very embarrassed and sorry for wat all she had said to Ratan, without thinking anything.. Ratan's eyes are fully wet now- Diya, mujhe nahin pata tha, ki aapke saath bed share karne ki sazaa mujhe aapka bharosa kho ke chukaani padegi.. I m sorry Diya.. Aaj ke baad, yeh bed to kya, yeh room bhi, main aapke saath share nahin karunga.. Main hotel ke room mein, aaj hi shift ho jaaunga.. Aap yahan aaram se SAFELY rah sakti hain..


Ratan leaves the room angrily.. Diya is feeling very ashamed of herself..

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To be continued..

Edited by arulya - 7 years ago

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