A DiRa OS- The Happy Ever after! - Page 2

Still DiRa love each other, that is what true love, right?

Originally posted by: Doreman

Ayesha , I don't have words to express my emotions about your OS. The way you have picturised the feelings and emotions of infertile woman is real. I too faced problem after my conception, had to under prolonged medication for which I had to quit my career. I know the feeling as my close friend also suffered from infertility and now she had adopted a child. She had stopped to attend the functions and when I suggested h er to consult my gyno the reply she gave is in my ears - I have lost hope in God and treatment and I can't bear that pain, " GOD HAS GIVEN ME EVERYTHING WHICH I DIDN'T ASKED FOR, BUT HE IS NOT GIVING ME WHAT I AM BEGGING."

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

*Un-reserved*

Awww Broo!!

Tussi toh senti kar ditha in the Prologue itself 😭 but I can understand your situation so its like...hmm okayyy :/ :|

Now coming to this wonderful se bhi wonderful OS ❤️

Ayesha how can you write such pretty stories?! Like howww??

I mean the concept is awesome, Dira have grown old together, but the scenes and the story you've come up with them, which also includes their grandparents is just head over heels adorable!

Its like I am watching a scene far into the future, a perfect written scene with superb angle shots and good direction hahaha hope you got what I am trying to say here ;)

I loved how you took care of the infertility thing, that's too sensitive and it really does break people's heart and their soul...so sweet of diya finally embraIcing parenthood...and I just loved how you showed ratan as such a lovely and supportive husband! Aisa chahiye mujhe ladkaaa!!

That blindfold moment where diya rests her back on his chest was so dreamy! Such a fairytale moment ⭐️ I think everyone in their life would want such amazing life partners and such super cute moments with them...even if they are past 50!

And those cute little munchkins :* Adorable cuties!!

Loved how you passed on the story telling ritual from kaki masa to diya 😃

As I said before, its such a feel good OS! It brought peace and contentment to me amidst all these chaos.

Couldn't be a better adios from your side ayesha 🤗

Originally posted by: arulya

Such an emotional and beautiful OS u have written Ayesha...

All ur OS, including this one, are like dreams and we readers just get completely lost in them...

For ur imagination and ur magical words- 👏👏

All ur previous OS had been just SUPERB but this one has won my heart and is undoubtedly BEST (i feel)... There was so much love❤️ in this...

I really liked the way Ratan had changed from a fun-loving boy to Real DATAHUKUM of Surajgadh (change in his personality was v impressive). Even that motherly love of diya for children, u had shown, was so touching.. Also the way diya still worries abt Ratan's safety, was so nicely depicted in this Os..

The cherry on the top, was their IMMENSE LOVE for each other, which never faded with time... V cud feel Diya's pain and ratan's concern for her.. And the way ratan always stood by her, was heart touching...

Mazaa aa gaya, padh ke ayesha... Din ki bahut achchi shuruwaat ho gayi...

Keep writing... We love u and your work...

Happy Ramadan, in advance..

Originally posted by: Doreman

I was very much touched... 😊 I couldn't control my emotions and was in tears as I have seen the pain very close, and also was nearby to that. Please don't mind about my boring comment.

Written very well about maintaining relationships for longer periods and how the concern and support of a spouse make a person strong enough to tackle with anything👏

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Beautiful os

Love it

Originally posted by: nancy505

Still DiRa love each other, that is what true love, right?

Beautiful, more than beautiful...

The way you started Diya playing with her grand children I was like, how Aysha jumped it to that far and why she said in the beginning that it would hurt us. I am not at all hurt after reading it. If I clearly say, for me it was more like you, giving me a life lesson about marriage, love, trust.

My eyes became teary after reading it. In true word if it was just randomly written about some other fictional character than it wouldn't had touched my heart. But imagining Diya and Ratan being strong at their hardest time, Ratan handling everything maturely, DiRa becoming grand parents, playing with their grandchild and most importantly their love is still evergreen made me emotional than nothing...

Ayesha tum itna acha kaise likh keti ha yaar, I mean how?

You said this would be your last DiRa FF, I am going to miss you like nothing my friend. I pray, that soon we will be blessed by some of your eriting in the future. I know we can join some other forum but after reading your all FF I think it would be hard for you to love some character like DiRa and make OS about them.

Love you Aysha ❤️❤️, Allah tumhe khush rakhe.

P.S. You didn't gave me autograph. Angle se mangi thi usne bhi nahi di. Surbhi se isliya manga hi nahi. Kiuki janti hu woh nahi dega. You guys have to pay for that ...

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Awww Nancy.. Ameen.. Allah tumko bhi buht khush rakhay, buht accha husband de...buht acchi life de..ameen... ❤️🤗

Tumko mera OS pasand aaya.. mujhe buht accha laga...😊

You know that you and your comments always make me happy... Love you bro.. ❤️

About the lessons...yes.. Life, Love and Marriage... These were the three lessons that I wanted to give.. Sabko malum hi hai.. kuch naya nahi kaha miene...but in a story format, sometimes messages get better understood than just a random discussion.. 😊

After DiRa..i am 1000% sure that sooner or later, I will get attached with some other couple.. 😆 You know that I watch sooo many other shows too.. and I believe in moving on in life.. Aik jagha phasay rehna is just so inconvenient.. 😉😆

So we will meet in some other forum in sha Allah and you will hopefully get to read stuff from my side... Aur kuch nahi tou mere novels hi parh lena.. 😉😆😆

But i will miss you and this forum always.. You guys have become so important for me.. 🤗

^^ Actually, again, the thing is that I have become very dheet and very habitual of watching and ending shows...because I watch a lot of them...and not from today, from many years...ranging from Pakistani, indian, american and british series. Some time back I was head over heels in love with an indian show called Bairi piya...and then I fell in love with Pak show, Bashar Momin. Then I thought I will never like some other show, but another Pak show caught my attention...and later on american show...then again a pak show, then indian show...so on and so forth. In 2017, i thought Aru and Mukhiji will be my favorites forever from Yeh moh moh me dhage, but then Pak show Yakeen Ka Safar's Dr.Asfandyar and Dr.Zubiya became my favorites...and Later on I fell in love with Diya and Ratan ... 😆

Originally posted by: Doc.love

^^ Actually, again, the thing is that I have become very dheet and very habitual of watching and ending shows...because I watch a lot of them...and not from today, from many years...ranging from Pakistani, indian, american and british series. Some time back I was head over heels in love with an indian show called Bairi piya...and then I fell in love with Pak show, Bashar Momin. Then I thought I will never like some other show, but another Pak show caught my attention...and later on american show...then again a pak show, then indian show...so on and so forth. In 2017, i thought Aru and Mukhiji will be my favorites forever from Yeh moh moh me dhage, but then Pak show Yakeen Ka Safar's Dr.Asfandyar and Dr.Zubiya became my favorites...and Later on I fell in love with Diya and Ratan ... 😆

All of this doea not mean that I stopped loving all those couples or shows... I still keep going and revisiting their videos... I still love all of them... and I think this is what these things teach us also : All good things come to an end. Everything ends... We have to keep evolving... If we get stuck at a certain point, that makes life quite difficult...phir chahay woh aik show ya aik fictional character hi kyun na ho.

Ofcourse, everyone is entitled to have their own opinions, but in my experience with television, I think kisi show ko ya kisi character se buht ziada dil nahi lagana chahiye.. 😊

I think I have become very cynical with the passage of time... 😃

I get emotionally attached and invested in a show...and when it ends, I search and find some other show and then become hooked to it!

Iss terha se I stay happy and keep discovering new good shows and other good characters too.. 😊

To say that "this is not possible for me" is actually a wrong statement..because then it means that one is not ready to explore new things...one is not ready to discover some other good thing..and one is not progressing in his or her life!😊