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desiseriesfan

@desiseriesfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Me,Living in the trance of Ratan ...

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VARUNI2014

@VARUNI2014

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Doreman

Hi Varuni info@shashisumeet.com is PH's email Id. Got from their website.

wil ask ayesha and email them

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desiseriesfan

@desiseriesfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Mujhe kabhi kabhi bohot hashi ata hai yeh soch kar ki Ratan ki charactar ko CV's ne kitna lightly leh li. But look, he is actually in a very complex situation. He is love with a 30 year old woman, his best friend, his wife, his gurdian and his bodyguard. And if I were in this situation I would have gone completely mad and would end up doing something stupid...

But it is too late to talk about Ratan's character development...

The trance state

Love you from the core od my heart for presenting such a beautiful heavenly garden trace state where Ratan was with Diya. I was litteraly living in his trance.

It was the best part, The way he was angry, her word betraying him. Even I loved the part when Diya was plucking flower, tulips... Every inch, was so beautiful, so beautiful...

Doc Ash, it was really the doc thing. Loved that even in this serious phycologicle state you didn't miss any part of a perfect OT details.

Nahi toh serial mai kaha yeh sab dikhata hai.

Spirit talking to Spirit

Do you believe this "spiritr talking" thing? Cause I have seen doctors laughing about this type of situation when it is displayed in the reel.

Hum toh am insan hai, I love this type of spiritual story and I believe in spiritual connoection. So I loved when Diya said"itni bate kahli, lekin yeh kiu nahi kaha ki ap miujh se kitna pyar karte hai"

Diya apne pyar ko lekar kitna confident hai, lekin Ratan...yeh ek number ka adha hai. Thank you for making him gadha in this OS also.

The shocking part

When Ratan said that he fell in love when he was 9 year, it shocked me like nothing...

One question!

Why you love Ratan's character that much? I also love his character but I have seen many people hates him for his childish behavior. Especially whom are matured. Some even stopped watching the show for that.

But after reading your last 2 OS it looked like you have examined him from every angle. What made you fall in love with bholu prasad?

Edited by nancy505 - 7 years ago

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VARUNI2014

@VARUNI2014

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

ayesha a doubt for me ..how did ratan fell in love when he was 9 yr old ..he does not know any thing whether that pehredaar is a woman or man or what his/her age is

and yes as nancy said many hated ratan childish behaviour even me hated too till that dya confession thing .i know mnay people stopped watching RLHN seeing ratan behaviour after marriage

i think CV started chnaging his characer on the day of diya confession ..till then he behaved almost like a selfish man and so many times he behaved just like a teenager IT WAS IN SO CONTRAST WITH HIS PPK character that guys who watchd PPK also stopped watching RLHN after their marriage

and lastly i dont think faling in love wih a 30 yr old woman will make any person mad ..just beause she is a pehrdaar ..i agree it takes some time to digest but it wont make any one crazy its not a big deal IN THIS AGE..may be 25 yrs back it might have been big deal

if i would have been in ratan plaec i would have gracefully accepted myself falling in love with a beautiful and kind hearted gal who values relationshipa above anything in thsi world and who is ready to sacrifiec herself for just a promise.

..i would have felt privelaged to recieve her love in return i think that what many people felt and could not understand ratan behaviour and quit watching RLHN after marriage

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VARUNI2014

@VARUNI2014

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

HEY GUYS CONFESSION IS OVER ..it has ben shooted ..so this ayesha OS we can imagine in our dreams

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jafg99

@jafg99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Such a lovely OS u have written Ayesha...👏

It was very emotional and heart touching...

Cud feels ratan's pain v well, when Diya asked him the permission to leave, when he cud just hear her voice but not see her in garden, when she called him datahukum, when her eyes were still downcast when Ratan is standing near her..

Ratan ke saath, hum bhi sapne mein chale Gaye...

And the best part- Diya saw his dream too and she wanted him to confess..his love for her..

Really, It was just superb... 😆👏

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Jannat

@Sana_Jannat

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏 just amazing & loved it ❤️ , Ratan's condition or Even his explanation or his confession then Diya's demand infact Yash-Ratan scene loved Everything ❤️👏.

Thanks A lot for writing such beautiful OS in short time🤗

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -Nags-
Wow..another awesome OS from Awesome Ayesha.👏❤️
Awesomely written...ufff it was so...so emotional.😭❤️
I can't express in words what I felt while reading this beautiful OS...it's more like happening before my eyes🤗🤗...Not only Ratan...even I get in to trance while reading 😆

Awww Nagsiee baby... thank you sooo much buddy...😳😃 I am sooo glad that you liked it. I was worried if the concept would sit well with the readers or not... 😳😆

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
*Un-reserved*
BROOO!!!! 🤗
Matlabbb kya likhun main
kyaaa likhunnn!!!

Itna kaatiilaana OS likha hai tumne ki main toh uss beautiful garden mein hi chali gayii, it can be my personal Dreamland now!
I have always liked your explainations...they are so articulated and expressive, and on the top of that I have never found your writing repetitive, though its difficult to bring out some new word everytime lol but even if you do repeat them, they appear new to me everytime! Your description regarding the garden and its lush grasses, the lotus and the pond urged me to transport myself to that place! ❤️
It sounded like heaven.
I really liked how you showed ratan's demeanor a bit intimidating to yash, I kinda liked that connection of the souls between diya and ratan.
The confession was full of emotions and lovely dialogues...it really stood out because it was subtle, no drama. I absolutely loved it.
And then the favorite part!
Their actual confession :')
It was totally adorable man and realistic as you wrote about him wearing mask and everything, haha glad you did that!
But it was really cute when she demanded i love you from him.
And the poem was pretty nice bro! Nice research. It connected well with this OS.
It was like it became a full circle in the end.
Cheers to nailing another different concept bro 👏
Issi baat pe saunf ho jaaye 🤣

Hahaha... saunf! 🤣 Actually its in my mouth right now... 😆😆

I am sooo glad Surbhi that you were able to read this write up in your busy schedule... Love you bro... ❤️ And I am soo happy that you liked it.. 😆

You know how i was craving to write something different...something unique... 😃 Besides you have read my novel, so you know how much I believe in the connection of souls and into spirituality... 😊 But putting it up here in DiRa situation was very risky... I was afraid if the concept would sit well with the readers or if it will go vain... But i am happy that my friends liked it... ❤️

Its very difficult to keep a track of things while writing...especially repetitions. I realize that i made a glitch after reading your comment... 😆 He was wearing a face mask, and then i showed him kissing her cheek and lips...I forgot to menton that he pulled the mask off! 😃😃 Abh obviously its understood, but you know me...Jabh tak baat sahi se clarify na hojaye, meri train atki hi rehti hai... 😳😳😆

Kher... I will correct it if its too glaringly glitchy. 😆

That poem...yea... Its beautiful..⭐️

Life does come around in full circle my friend... 😊

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014

call me vijaya (my asli name) yes ayesha the storyline u choose i.e heroine dying hero realising was cliched thats what i told u ..but u know what made the difference ?/ the dialogues in the script made teh difference those dialogues killed me

just by reading ratan telling his mind i got tears in my eyes ..

what a unique story line and what a beautful concept CV runined everything i just want to murder 😡 CV ..till marriage every thng was OK ..immediately after honeymoon over atleast tehy could have showed ratan realising his love and then diya realising her love and then DiRa romance consummation kids etc ( ofcourse KM changing to a good woman simply killed the script ..dont know who gave that brillinat idea to CV

in any story capable villian is so important }

Heyyy Vijaya... 😊 I am really happy that my story touched your heart. 😳 You liked it so much that you wanted it to forward it to the creatives... That was really very sweet of you yar.. 🤗

You know, when I discussed this plot with you the other day, I was actually recalling that scene in which in the betrayal track, Ratan sees Diya going like this...and he cries and asks her to stay. While on the other hand, Diya is actually dying.. and later when Ratan goes to meet her, he tells her that he fought with Yamraj to bring her back.. 😊 Do you realize that even in that scene, they had shown how deeply Ratan was connected with Diya? 😊 I love these spiritual elements.. I have explored them and I find them very fascinating...and REAL too.

About Cvs ruining the show...YES...they blooped big time yar. They could not handle the beautiful and unique story line... They made Ratan's character so inconsistent that it was sad to see... The ppk Ratan was shown way more smarter... Do you remember that Munh Dikhai rasam sequence where Sakshi and Shivani did a skit on Balam chhotu? Diya had started crying on their hidden taunts, but eventually Balam chhotu came and he gave a shut up call to everyone... 😃

Adult Ratan is also very sweet...hes intelligent too...but I just wish and hope that the cvs didnt have shown him like a tantrum throwing child after marriage. THAT was such a nail in the coffin that it affected the show in a very bad manner... 😭

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