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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
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Guys superrr!!
Kya mast likha hai ayesha
Crazy ho rhi h ye story puri
Sorry for coming so late here...
Angel are you writing the next part?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

🤣
Guys superrr!!
Kya mast likha hai ayesha
Crazy ho rhi h ye story puri
Sorry for coming so late here...
Angel are you writing the next part?


Surbhi ji...apko Ratan aur Christian mien kuch common nazar ata hai? 😃😃

Edited by Doc.love - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Surbhi if you want you can totally write the next part... mere dimaag mein abhi tak koi naya idea nai aaya hai iss story ke liye...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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For some unknown reason, Ratan burst into laughter at the perfect timing of his intoxicated Kakusa...while Diya confusedly looked at Ratan and towrds the direction where Kakusa was lying..and she thought,
"Dono chacha bhateeje ajeeb pagal hi hain!"

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Diya was about to continue with the book when they heard a knock on the door.
Ratan gave a confusing look at diya and then turned to open the door while thinking
*Itni raat ko kaun hai*
A suited booted waiter appeared infront his eyes as soon as he un-bolted the door.
Ratan "Yes?"
Waiter "Sorry to disturb you sir, but your guest has received a parcel and since it was marked urgent, I thought to deliver you"
Ratan was puzzled, he was about to say something when he heard kaku sa shouting from behind in a drunken state...
"Mhaara parcel aagayo ke!? Taylor Sa thaaro ghano aabhaar" and he fell on the bed again while his hands still adjoined in Namaste.
Diya reacted in an instant "Taylor???"
Ratan looked at Kaku sa in shock, then he looked at diya, then he looked at waiter "Taylor??"
Waiter was by now completely bewildered and he quickly wished them Good Night and ran out of the lobby wondering what crazy family has checked-in their room!
Ratan closed the door and was about to open the parcel when his eyes fell on the Name tag
WHATTT!!!?? he exclaimed in puzzlement.
Diya almost jumped in her bed "Ab kya hua ratan!? Aap itna chilla kyu rahe hain?"
Ratan read the name out loud!
"This parcel is addressed to...Mr. Christian Grey Singh of Surajgarh!"
And they both looked at each other like they had landed somewhere else and they don't know the way out...then they looked at kaku sa who was silently smiling and whispering "Majjo Aagayo" in his sleep...
Edited by surbhimathur - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Surbhi!!! Tumne ab tak mera FF ka part 2 nai padha!?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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btw kya update kiya hai tumne yaar!!! A package for the Christian Grey of Surajgarh!!!! Waah bro! Superb 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrs_weasley

Surbhi!!! Tumne ab tak mera FF ka part 2 nai padha!?

Broo padh liya tha! Comment krne aaj aayi hu, guests aye the ache se likhne ka mauka nhi mila mujhe
ab ye scene likhke bas ussi thread pe going 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Broo padh liya tha! Comment krne aaj aayi hu, guests aye the ache se likhne ka mauka nhi mila mujhe
ab ye scene likhke bas ussi thread pe going 😳

Accha okay okay... Koi baat nai...😆😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrs_weasley

btw kya update kiya hai tumne yaar!!! A package for the Christian Grey of Surajgarh!!!! Waah bro! Superb 🤣


Shukriya dost 😳
Mujhe lga pta nhi kaisa lgega yaar 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur

For some unknown reason, Ratan burst into laughter at the perfect timing of his intoxicated Kakusa...while Diya confusedly looked at Ratan and towrds the direction where Kakusa was lying..and she thought,
"Dono chacha bhateeje ajeeb pagal hi hain!"

------------------------------------------------------

Diya was about to continue with the book when they heard a knock on the door.
Ratan gave a confusing look at diya and then turned to open the door while thinking
*Itni raat ko kaun hai*
A suited booted waiter appeared infront his eyes as soon as he un-bolted the door.
Ratan "Yes?"
Waiter "Sorry to disturb you sir, but your guest has received a parcel and since it was marked urgent, I thought to deliver you"
Ratan was puzzled, he was about to say something when he heard kaku sa shouting from behind in a drunken state...
"Mhaara parcel aagayo ke!? Taylor Sa thaaro ghano aabhaar" and he fell on the bed again while his hands still adjoined in Namaste.
Diya reacted in an instant "Taylor???"
Ratan looked at Kaku sa in shock, then he looked at diya, then he looked at waiter "Taylor??"
Waiter was by now completely bewildered and he quickly wished them Good Night and ran out of the lobby wondering what crazy family has checked-in their room!
Ratan closed the door and was about to open the parcel when his eyes fell on the Name tag
WHATTT!!!?? he exclaimed in puzzlement.
Diya almost jumped in her bed "Ab kya hua ratan!? Aap itna chilla kyu rahe hain?"
Ratan read the name out loud!
"This parcel is addressed to...Mr. Christian Grey Singh of Surajgarh!"
And they both looked at each other like they had landed somewhere else and they don't know the way out...then they looked at kaku sa who was silently smiling and whispering "Majjo Aagayo" in his sleep...


One glance at CT and then they looked at each other... "Abhi ke abhi hamare saath bedroom mein chaliye Ratan..." Diya said to Ratan in a soft voice so as to not wake CT... he followed her out of the room. A muffled "majo aagiyo" was heard as the left the room...
They entered their room and Diya locked it from inside and turned to face him... She took a step towards him. And he took a step back... She took another step towards him, this time a more rushed step... And he stumbled backwarads and fell onto the bed..."Diya yeh aap kya kar rahi hain?!" he said in a squeaky voice...
"Christian Grey of Surajgarh!! Kya hai yeh sab haan? Sahi kaha tha na humne aap pure ke pure Grey hain!!! Gusse mein bhi aur oversmartness mein bhi... Aur" "aur?!" Ratan asked in shock "Aur paagalpan mein bhi!! Hamari book dekhkar hume prank karne ke liye itni jaldi yeh stupid parcel bhi mangva liya!? Kholiye isse aur bataaiye hume ki kya hai isme!"
Ratan took the parcel and opened it. His heart stopped when he saw what was inside. The blu ray CDs of the 50 shades triology and a hardbound copy of Fifty shades darker and freed each... It was like the whole world's erotica in a box...!!

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