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Posted: 7 years ago
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As I said I am back! Enjoy!!
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It' had been a couple of weeks since DiRas marriage... Infornt of both of there's relatives they acted as a good married couple but when they would come into the room they would turn into complete stranger

Dia was sitting the room and thinking ' Ratan-Sa apne humse shadi kar ka bahoot galat kia... Sab kuch galat ho gaya Abhay bana Kasey niklay aur Ratan sa se shadi karna ka badh humaray best friend bhi chala gaya, asey lagta hai I have no one to talk with'
Dia eyes got teary
Just Ratan-Sa entered the room
Ratan got concerned looking at the tears in her eyes
Ratan: is everything okay?
Dia nodded her head
Ratan went down on his knees and put his hand on Dias check: Dia... Kya hua?
He wiped the tear that had escaped her eyes
Dia: kuch nhai... shahid anhkoon mein kuch chala gaya ho
Dia loved the concern that came from him it showed that they might actually have a chance, just then kaki ma sa and saski come into the room
Saski: aye haye Dia sa your so lucky, and I am so happy ap donu ka beach mein sab theek ho gaya
Dia thought to herself 'acha toh all this concern for me was a show for them... Like always' she gave a weak smiled
Kaki: achi baat Hai, because we were downstairs talking with Ratan that we are sending you guys on your honeymoon and Ratan-Sa said that Dia will pick the place where you want to go
Dia looked at Ratan and he looked away
Dia got a idea if she can't have Ratan sa as a husband... She won't loose him as a friend- best friend either
Dia went over to saski and kaki ma sa and whispered in there ear of the place she wants to go
Saski: omg Dia ap aur udher ja kar kya Karen gi?
Kaki: Dia koi aur jagah pick karay
Dia: nhain hum udher Ja ya gay
Ratan: Kon si jagah
Dia: that's a surprise

The tickets were booked and everything was packed
Ratan started hating himself after the marriage, he also felt like he had no one to talk with especially when he needed his best friend... 'maybe marrying Dia wasn't the right choice... But I had too, she has done so much for me, how will I ever re-pay her back? But I don't know what's worng with me, why did I stop talking with Dia, she has tried so many times to talk with me but know she doesnt try either, we pretend to be happy infornt of our relatives but it's not enough... Atleast not for me, and know going to this honey moon for 1 week with Dia alone she is probably selected to visit the place with temples-'
Ratan's thought were interrupted when he saw Dia come into the room
They did not talk with one another when they would be alone so she came with the maid, told him to pick all of the suitcase and said her byes to everyone and sat the car,

Ratan wanted to ask Dia where they were going but his ego did not allow him
Dia thought to herself "I know Ratan-Sa you must be dying to know where we are going... But I will not tell you, until you don't ask me"
Dia smirk to herself and Ratan noticed that he thought "just as expected we are going someplace boring tabhi Dia looks so happy, and I know that she knows, I want to know where we are going but she has such a big ego she won't tell me herself"
The place they were going to was almost 10 hour drive (okay guys just aheads up... I am not from India, so this place that they are going to is made up)

Dia thought "uff 4 hours I have not said a word and neither has Ratan-Sa he has such a big ego"
Dia looked over at Ratan and found him sleeping, Dia smiled "he looks so cute when sleeping,... yeh mein kya soch rahi hoon"

Just Ratan moved and his head landed on her shoulder and after some time even she fell asleep
Ratan was the first one to get up and he saw Dia's face all cuddled into his neck and Ratans arm around Dia
Ratan was in awe of her seeing her sleeping this close, it might be the first time, and it was a sight to see, she seemed even more beautiful suddenly the hair moved on her face and he softly touched the edges of her face to move her hair away and tucked it behind her ear
Suddenly Dia woke up with a jerk and got starled looking at Ratan so close to her face

Without saying anything to one another Dia moved away from Ratan, Dia thought "kitni achi needh ayi hai, I feel like finally after my marriage I have slept"
Ratan felt sad about Dia moving away from him, he felt empty but did not know why

The driver: Ratan-Sa Humkum bas 30 mins takh we will reach our destination
Ratan thought finally " I will know where we are going"
Dia thought "I know you must be thinking that know you will know where we went, but you won't know till morning" Dia again smriked and Ratan noticed that again
Ratan thought "Pata nhain yeh kahan la ayi hai"

It had gotten dark and in the darkness he could tell there is only one small house, it seemed like a small house in the middle of no where, Ratan thought "oh f*** where am I, this looks like a haunted House"
There just one blub that seemed like it might fuse any second and he saw there was a bed, TV and a small fridge that's it, this was not even a house it seemed like a studio room
There was old man- the care taker who looked very scary, his teeth was broken and he had white hair/bread, and one of his eye was of stone, that just scared Ratan-Sa more
Dia: chacha(the care taker) yahan pe khaney ka Liya kuch Milla gay?
Chacha: KYAAA???
Just when he thought nothing could get any more worse, this so called chacha was hard of hearing and was very aloud when he spoke,
Dia: CHACHA YAHAN PE KHANEY KA LIYA KUCH HAI?
Ratan was shocked hearing Dia match his tone of voice, she kinda looked cute doing that
Chacha: HAAN MAIN LATA HOON
Since Dia and Ratan did not talk when they would be in the room alone, Dia opened her suitcase took out her nighty suit and went to the bathroom
Ratan"this women makes me soo mad, why doesn't she just tell me where we were... Or what we are doing here
Dia came out wearing a nighty
Ratan's mouth almost fell to the floor, it was a pink color nighty and he could tell that Dia felt uncomfortable but he couldn't stop staring her, the nighty barely went down her knees and it had a nice opening by her cleavage which offcourse he could tell because Dia being Dia was covering herself by the dupatta
Suddenly there was a LOUD knock on the DOOR, it was chacha with food
Ratan went to get the food, it was boiled rice with pani type of dal, the food was horrible but they both were hungry as they did not eat anything, so they both ate!

After sometime
Ratan had changed his clothes and was I his pajamas, both were sitting on the bed, as there was no other place to sit Ratan turned on the TV, and there was Imran Hashmi song on, bheegi hote Tera

Ratan and Dia both looked at one another and Dia got mad and took the remote away from Ratan and she changed the channel and to her shock the scene that came on was from Aae Dil Hai Muskil, Ranbir and Ash kissing
This time Ratan took the TV remote and changed the channel and again it was Hollywood movie scene where the couple was making out,
Dia took the remote and turned off the TV
Ratan thought that this was ridiculous he wanted to talk with her but couldn't because of his ego, Dia got up from the bed and got cushions from the closet and build a wall in between them, she finally spoke
Dia: because there is no other place to sleep, that's why
Ratan nodded his head, "I should have said something"
Dia got mad at his response of just nodding his head, "I want to scream and shout at him I know he saved me and family form a life long of insults but why does he not talk with me"
Ratan thought " I should have said something I don't know why I got so hesitant by Dia, I feel like I lost her as a friend because of my own stupidity, Dia never asked me to marry I did it for her... Arrgghhh I hate being this way to Dia"

Dia and Ratan laid on the bed and after which seemed like ages they finally fell asleep,

Ratan was the first one to awake and the wall of cushions that Dia had built was down on the floor and Dia was cuddled in his neck her arm around his stomach and is arm around her back, Ratan started loving seeing Dia this close and personal "she is so beautiful and so strong" Ratan saw that the dupatta that was covering her cleavage was also thrown on the floor and he had a nice sight of her she looked so prefect laying on the bed with him all cuddled up, they fit perfectly together

Dia again woke up starled again she saw how close they were and quickly moved away and picked her dupatta up and covered herself

Ratan: Agar dupatta hi pehna tha toh nighty kyun pehni?
Dia felt shy and quickly ran the bathroom
Ratan "that's it I have decided even tho we are here for a temple tour in this God knows what kind of forest, I want my best friend back"

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Part one of two... I know it's long but still I hope you guys like it, maybe the next one might be longer... Any ideas on where they might be??

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-Nags- thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
Superb, please do continue soon.
Mina H thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nags-

Superb, please do continue soon.


Yes hopefully I will be posting the next part soon!

Thank you
surbhimathur thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Classic writing hai boss!!
Super loved it, liked the new touch to the ongoing track! Diya and ratan's monologues were so nice, even though they were not talking, it didn't feel like it, they truly have a connection.
And diya is our headstrong girl, she will really surprise ratan sa, are they going on to river rafting or something?
Loved their cute moments!
Too excited for the next update :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome writing..Loved it..I can simply see their chemistry even without nothing has happened. Your writing felt so real and felt like watching a scene in front of my eyes..Kudos👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Classic writing hai boss!!
Super loved it, liked the new touch to the ongoing track! Diya and ratan's monologues were so nice, even though they were not talking, it didn't feel like it, they truly have a connection.
And diya is our headstrong girl, she will really surprise ratan sa, are they going on to river rafting or something?
Loved their cute moments!
Too excited for the next update :)



Thank you soo much for the amazing feedback
Mina H thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranurosid

Awesome writing..Loved it..I can simply see their chemistry even without nothing has happened. Your writing felt so real and felt like watching a scene in front of my eyes..Kudos👍🏼


Thank you your too kind!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dia was in the bathroom changing her clothes she had taken her top off

When Ratan knocked on the door even tho it was a soft knock but the door opened and he saw Dia wearing pants and her bra,

For the first time he found Dia really hot
Dia quickly grapped towel in the bathroom and covered herself with it

Dia: Ratan-Sa shut the door
Ratan snapped out of the trance he was in and shut the door

Dia came out wearing a t-shirt and pants
The curves in her body showed really well
Ratan: listen Dia I am sorry,
Dia: about what?
Ratan thought " I want to say about everything, about being a jerk to you after marrying you" instead he said: I just knocked on the door and it opened... I didn't mean to do that
Dia: okay, did you need something from me?
Ratan: umm no, I just wanted to use the bathroom

Dia got irratated and thought" I am doing so much for this idiot and he can't even talk with me"

Ratan went to the bathroom and took a cold shower, he needed it after this morning, and especially after seeing Dia like that came out of the bathroom changed clothes

Ratan thought " that's it no more being a jerk I am going to apologize for everything and hopefully everything can go back to normal between us"

Ratan: Dia, why are you wearing western clothes?
Ratan thought "omg I am such a idiot what was I suppose to say and what did I say"

Dia finally he asked me something: because we are here...

There was a knock on the door
There was a handsome looking guy probably around Ratans age wearing a huge smile on his face
He extenders and his hand and shook Dia's hand
Hi, my name is Roshan... Hiritik Roshan
Dia: sachi mein??
Roshan: nhai, my first name is Roshan

Ratan was getting mad seeing them hold hands
Roshan: I must Dia your really beautiful
Dia: thank you

Ratan came and put his arm around her back and pulled her closer him
Ratan: and I am Ratans, Dia's husband

That was the first time he said something like that, and it felt good

Roshan: yes for sure Ratan and Dia our late entries

Ratan: late entry... For what?

Roshan puts his on Dia arm: Dia you still haven't told Ratan..., Rattan your in for a big surprise as your honey moon package is a actually a surprise adventure pack scavenger hunt... Where just be being in India you will get the feel of America, Canada, London, China Japan... You will experience all of these country's right here on our beautiful India, so guys get ready to introduce yourself to your fellow contestants I will see you in 10 mins outside.

Roshan left the room and Ratan felt horrible for giving Dia soo much attitude all the times she tried to talk with him,
Suddenly Ratan gave a tight hug to Dia
Ratan: Dia I am a idiot I deserved to be slap, I don't know what was wrong with me for the past couple of weeks I am soo sorry I was trying to say sorry to you for the longest time... But I coldnt find the right time or the right thing to say, please Dia forgive
Dia hugged him as much as tightly he hugged her
Dia: Ratan-Sa it's okay I know, I know it must have been hard for you as well everything happened quickly but I am sorry as well
Ratan: why are you sorry its my fault

They broke the hug, but Ratan still kept his hands on her shoulder
Ratan: Dia you always think about me, I am a jerk, I have missed talking with you so much, being the same room and not being able to say anything was the worse
Dia: Ratan-Sa I know it was hard for me too
Ratan: so we don't have to do this stupid adventure trip, please don't do this for the sake of my happiness
Dia eyes got teary: Ratan-Sa no matter how we are married, and we should enjoy what one another likes to do, even tho I booked everything for you, I am excited to live on the edge
Ratan smiled: live on the edge, well then let's bring it on
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Idk if there should be another part or not... Let me know thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yay, finally our old DiRa is back on track!🥳
Superb update 🤗👏
Please do continue😳
Edited by -Nags- - 7 years ago
pranurosid thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
Is that a question?? Obviously we need the next part.. Waiting.. Waiting .By the way such a beautiful update😳

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