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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Story till now


By Nancy

Diya at mandap waiting for Abhay Bannah. She is feeling very akward. 12 years later she going to be with the person whom she always wanted to. Abhay bannah came to the mandap with his family. Every one is present but some thing is missing.

Diya - Everyone is here. But where is Datahukum. Yash Bannah can you say where he is ?

Yash- Yes. He said he would go to the kitchen to see if every thing is ok or not.

Diya-Why are you sweating in this cold? Everything is ok naah ?

Yash gave a smile and said - Yes everything is ok. Look Abhay Banaah is saying something.

Abhay-You are ok Diya?

Diya replied in the affirmative. But she was not well. Something is wrong, something is wrong are the words playing in her head.

Sravani Bai Saah could see the tension in Diya's face.

Yash goes on the side and phones someone. Sravani could see everything is going according to plan. She was hoping that Nancy Bai Saah is doing her job. Yash is talking something . She went close to him behind a pillar and listened

Yash-Track Data hukum fast. What? The phone is switched off. Damn.Who can kidnap Datahukum and why?

By Surbhi

Daatahukum is shown struggling in a dark room, he cannot see who has kidnapped him. On the other hand diya gets to know about it, runs to find him, abhay comes with her, yash goes separate ways with his team, diya worries like hell on the way, till a limit abhay finds it normal but deep down he is getting uncomfortable about it.

parallel scenes are going on with ratan and diya, thinking about each other, how he managed this wedding and did all of this, and ratan is praying that diya gets married and hopefully only after that would come to know about this kidnapping, as she deserves this much in her life. They get a clue towards the direction as told by yash, a blood stained handkerchief. diya panics.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sravani_Rao

Ok the members till now are me, nancy, surbhi, shikhu, Caroline and Pranu


Who is on whom's side?

Team A : Kidnapping Datahukum (This will be our main priority )
Team B :Kidnapping CT(After joining "team A" some can join "B".)
Team C : If any one interested to create side problems or kidnap other's they can join this team.

ATTENTION 1 : Every will join team A
ATTENTION 2 : You can join all the team parallaly or any particular one or two.
ATTENTION 3 : No one will help or kidnap Diya ( Any one interested kidnapping Yash?)
Edited by nancy505 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: nancy505


Who is on whom's side?

Team A : Kidnapping Datahukum (This will be our main priority )
Team B :Kidnapping CT(After joining "team A" some can join "B".)
Team C : If any one interested to create side problems or kidnap other's they can join this team.

ATTENTION 1 : Every will join team A
ATTENTION 2 : You can join all the team parallaly or any particular one or two.
ATTENTION 3 : No one will help or kidnap Diya ( Any one interested kidnapping Yash?)

wait nancy i prepared another part of this story!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sravani_Rao

wait nancy i prepared another part of this story!!



I was thinking,it would be better if we modify the same plot Surbhi posted, like including dialouges and other things ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nancy we can include us also in the story na!! Both stories parallely.. chalo na jaa ke Diya aur Ratan se milke aayenge!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sravani_Rao

Nancy we can include us also in the story na!! Both stories parallely.. chalo na jaa ke Diya aur Ratan se milke aayenge!!



Tum kese Ratan or Diya se milna chatiho?We are kidnapping Ratan nah?
But still we can meet Ratan as kidnappers. I was thinking we would meet Diya later on the story and we would also fight with Diya for Ratan. Till than Surbhi and C0raline must entry the scene before we meet Diya.
Shikha and Pranuro also need to enter but I don't know they are on which side.
I will try to update the story tomorrow .
What you say?
Edited by nancy505 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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BY SRAVANI😉
The scene moves to the mandap, where we can see everyone of the family are worried for Ratan sa, there was a lot of Drama going on Diya's father blaming Ratan for stopping Diya's engagement once again while we see Ratan's family defending Ratan...
fed up with all those choas... SRAVANI decided too slowly move away from there.. She messaged someone... and was slowly sneeking out when she felt a hand on her shoulder.. she stoped and turned back to see...
SRAVANI: TUM!!!
PERSON: Haan mai... par ye batao, yaha kya ho raha hai Sravani.. aur tum yu chupke se kaha jaa rahi ho.. in sab mein tumhara haath tho nehi hai na..
SRAVANI: Wo...
[the scene freezes on Sravani's face]

The scene shifts from there to closed factory, there we can see a person tied to a chair and his face is covered by a mask!! and there were three other persons around him!! slowly the screen moves up to their faces
CAROLINE: UFF!! yaar this guy is sooo heavy!!! never thought a 21 yr old to be this heavy!!
SURBHI: Arey yaar!! tum log bekar mai Ratan par gussa ho rahe ho!! guy body hai thoda heavy tho hoga na...
SHIKHA: Tum tho bolo hi mat.. mandap ke paas se gaadi tak sirf mai aur Caroline leke aaye the Tum aur nancy tho gaadi mai bete hue the..
[There enters our Nancy]
NANCY: offo!! guys chill!! aur ye batao Ratan ko hosh kab aayega??
SURBHI: I dont know!! usse ye dava tho Sravani ne di hai na!! tho usse hi bata hoga!!
SHIKHA: haan waise Sravani reh kaha gayi.. usse tho abhi tak aa jana chahiya tha na..
NANCY: (with a naughty smirk seeing Caroline) Mandap ke paas hai na tho kya pata Bhuvan sa pe line maar rahi hogi!!
CAROLINE:😡 i know.. mujhe pehle se hi shak tha... ye Sravani pakka mere Bhuvan sa ke liye hi gayi hogi andar issiliye tho mujhe mana kar diye andar aane se... Pehle aane tho do usse.. phir bataongi..(interrupted by)
SRAVANI: kya bataogi!! 😉Bhuvan sa tho pehle bhi mere the aur mere hi rahengi... hum dono ne tho abhi abhi ek duet laga ke aaye the!! aur wo mujhe pata rahe the ki wo mujhe kitne miss karte hai!! aur wo kitne handsome bhi lag rahe the... aur ...
[Caroline was getting annoyed while others were enjoying the cat fight!! quite common for them now😆.. but Sravani gets interuppted by...]
PERSON: Hey Bhagawan!! Ct ke liye itna competition!!
EVERYONE: PRANU!!! TUM!!!
PRANU: Haan !! guys!! slowly.. chilla kyu rahe hai... wo maine Sravani ko mandap se aate samay pakad liya... aur usne ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya and I'm in this too... And Caroline Sravani jo bata rahi thi aisa kuch nehi hua😆.. wo bas kahaniya bana rahi thi..
[the person in the first scene who caught Sravani was Pranu]
CAROLINE: i know ... Bhuvan tho sirf mere hai!!
SHIKHA: Ab bas guys! Sravani tum bolo Ratan ko hosh kab aayega
SRAVANI: usse hosh aane mei abhi thodi aur wakt hai...
SURBHI: tho guys pehle uske chehre par se mask tho utaro...
NANCY moves forward and removes the mask and everyone standing there gets the shock of their lives!!! the person in the chair wasn't Ratan but... Bhuvan...

The scene then divides into four parts... one where Ratan sa is seen to be tied on chair
two... Diya, Abhay and Yash searching for Ratan
three... Soundly sleeping Bhuvan sa...
four... Shocked faces of our own...Sravani, Pranu, Nancy, Shikha, Surbhi, and Caroline...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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how's this??😃 is it ok??
so who's the one Sravani messaged before leaving the mandap??
if not them who kidnapped Ratan sa??
who did Bhuvan end up getting kidnapped??
will Diya be able to find Ratan and bring him home safely??
why did these ppl kidnap Ratan??
will Dira end up together.. if yes, how???
😆
so who's writing the next part😛
Edited by Sravani_Rao - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sravani_Rao

how's this??😃 is it ok??

so who's the one Sravani messaged before leaving the mandap??
if not them who kidnapped Ratan sa??
who did Bhuvan end up getting kidnapped??
will Diya be able to find Ratan and bring him home safely??
why did these ppl kidnap Ratan??
will Dira end up together.. if yes, how???
😆
so who's writing the next part😛



Oh my god Sravani!!!!!
Will you marry me?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nancy505



Oh my god Sravani!!!!!
Will you marry me?

sry... 😛I'm only my Bhuvan sa's

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