KaYa FF:PyarThoHonaHiTha(intense) Discontinued...Note On Page 143 - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update... just loved each & every bit of it...๐Ÿ˜ณ
shreya is not his gf trisha trying to make kabir jealous๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
manav likes ananya๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ i hope he is not a negative character coz i
really like him & i so want him to be by her side as her friend๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
ananya's pallu๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† lol she didn't know it in her anger๐Ÿ˜›
vso vicky & kabir R still in touch..๐Ÿ˜• &
last but not the least he kissed her did he really... i m just wandering her reaction...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
all in all it was incredible...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‰ plz continue ASAP & thanQ for the PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous
Kabir jealous of manav
Continue soon please
Thank for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic chapter
god that shreya is so chipku ๐Ÿ˜ก
all the time just throw herself on kabir ๐Ÿ˜ก
poor ananya didn't like when everybody were gave her pity look ๐Ÿ˜ญ
kabir have to talk to ananya nicely but he is always rules over her
wow ananya had guts to talk with kabir in rude manner ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
she vent out her all frustration ๐Ÿ‘
oops seeing kabir half naked ananya couldn't take off her eyes ๐Ÿ˜‰
wow kaya almost kiss each other ๐Ÿ˜‰
look like trisha planning to play cupid between kaya ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
she talk abt bad guys in front of kabir so he can be jealous
good that manav is so flirt
I hope he wont hurt ananya but i cant trust this manav
even kabir didn't like this manav & his way to look at ananya
ananya found kabir sending money to Vicky
both kaya is right in their place
ananya shouldn't have jump on Vicky marriage proposal
when she know him for yrs she should have think abt it
kabir is somewhere responsible for Vicky not taking any responsibility
he love his brother so much that he do anything for him

continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dhasuuu update paisa wasool tooo good๐Ÿ˜† superb awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow loved this update, their dynamics have changed dramtically
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Finally mystery is out shreya os nt his girfriend.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Kabir is still in touch with Vicky..
Overall superb.. ๐Ÿ‘ โญ๏ธ
Want to c the jealous side of kabir more.. ๐Ÿ˜†
Plss update soon.. ๐Ÿ˜› waiting eagerly.. ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Want to see ananya reaction
Pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
This had been wonderful as expected & with some unexpected things happening which I'm Loving it Parapaaa..
..

Initially I thought these two are poles apart ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† but eventually realising Mr. & Mrs. sharma have quite in common...

--they get "J" very easily (though they wont accept)
--Level of anger is quite similar for both
--both are good in Arguing & Assumptions ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
--last but not the least, both not realising but are physically attracted ๐Ÿ˜† & get distracted by other's one's physical charm when arguing ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...


Coming to UD, liked how Mr. Sharma handled both his wife & "not GF" ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...& boy, must have been a tough job for him ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† coz at a certain level, both not ready to understand him ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† poor boy!!! Kahan phas gaya ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Waise, Hi5 to Mr. Sharma, I also didn't noticed Ananya never took Kabir's name till now...& now, I am curious how exactly Kabir is planning to make her say
though Kabir was fun ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† "whats my name, whats my name" ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†is it his fav song ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

Glad to see Ananya getting comfortable with her job, & colleagues ...though I think Mr. Sharma doesn't seem too fond of Manav bhai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† God bless u Manav bhai, stay away from Mr. Sharma's biwi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Though With Ananya sneaking on Kabir's email, I expected some Dhamaka is on the way...but it was surely a surprise that Kabir is still in touch in Vicky๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Waise dont mind, Mr. Sharma, Ananya did have a point, that he indeed spoilt his brother, loving & caring towards younger sibling is fine, but when things go out of hand, a certain amount of control is surely required...
& for once, I thought Ananya's accusations are leading to a twist in story, something like, Kabir's confession that he always wanted to marry her in first place ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› & he purposefully made Vicky runaway ๐Ÿ˜ˆ.๐Ÿ˜†


By the way, congratulations Mr. Sharma ...on "first kiss" with your wife, & I am with you, keeping fingers crossed that you dont get "a slap" in return ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜›...& in all the anger & Kiss, hope Mr. Sharma made a mental note of his wife's "aur wali demands" what she wants from her husband & married life ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† will look forward to see Mr. Sharma fulfilling every single wish of his wife...

As for Ms. Bhagat, & Manav bhai, both of you stay off husband & wife respectively ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...coz they might not accept to themselves or each other, but they are quite possessive about their partner ๐Ÿ˜†

*****
p.s.--wonderful effort from the writer ...& ofcourse putting in extra effort to post it here... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Keep the updates coming ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by -purnima- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovelyyy update ! *applauds*
I wish I could be a multi-millionaire ! I would have definitely produced a show on this script with Rajeev and Kritika as the leads ! It fits them sooo freaking perfectly !!!! And it has been my dream to see Rajeev in one such intense and "high - on- passion" love story.. And who better than Ms. Kashyap to star opposite him !
Anyways, keeping my dreams apart, lets talk about the update.. I am in love with Kabir yet another time.. They way he respects Ananya's aspirations and her space yet is possessive about her, is really adorable.. Waise miyaan biwi ko gussa bahut aata hai ;)
Shreya and Manav both seem to be fond of drinking.. They should team up for enjoying their drinks and baatofy their "common dukhs" and keep away from our lovebirds..
So, Mr. Sharma has put his guards down and taken the first step to fulfil wifey's "dreams of marital bliss" ! Lets see, what he gets in return.. Hope not something that Kabir got in the first promo of Reporters ;)
Kudos to Raman di for such a fantastic piece of work.. And hugs to you Zannat for planning to present it here as a KaYa fanfic.. :)
Update sooon... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful writing sweet heart

Please update chapter 5

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