KaYa FF:The Journey Of Winning True Love ( Last Chapter page 56) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Too good Kabir may look like a Sadu but knows how to charm his bride.
And the bride is in for a surprise I think.

Please update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
such a cute update it is
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Very nice update Riya!!😃
Aweh kabir and us k mood swings!
Please update soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Wow Riya...
finished reading all parts in one go...

Awesome yaar, I loved it...👏


I seriously don't know how you manage to write awesome stories with a cute pinch...😳

I love this Kabir, actually Kabir jaisa bhi ho mujhe accha hi lagta hai...😃abhi toh phone mai hi ghusa rehta hai... I am waiting jab Miss Kashyap se usse pyaar ho jayega...😆


Update soon...






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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
nice part... loved it...😳
kabir ka non serious attitude😕
bichari ananya
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
WOW!! RIYA !! Amazing! Read all the parts!!
Kabir Sharma sudhrega thodhna!
Update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Chapter 5:

Ananya looked on as her cousin sisters gathered round their darling Jeeju!
She frowned noticing he was shy whike talking to them...and talked softly...a perfperfect gentleman. ...

V: chok gayi na?.mera kabir bohot alag hai...vo jitna strict dikhne ki koshish karta hai...vo iska quarter bhi nahi hai...asal mein vo bohot shy sa...reserved sa hai...par KKN ka owner hone ki wajah se he has to act all strict...

Ananya looked lovingly...at her fiance's blushing face as his sister in laws kept teasing him...

Ananya decided to relieve him and went upto them and grabbed Kabir'sKabir's hand...

A: please excuse your di and jeeju! girls!!

The girls gave naughty looks and left...

A: vaise ek baat kahu?

K: ha boliye...

A: aap sharmaate hue na haayee!!! bade cute lagte hai! Mr. Sharmile Sharma...

Kabir gave her a stern look but it her... it didn't affect her...she just smirked...

After sometime. ...
A: Kabir sir...

K: hmmm...

A: mujhe walk karne jaana hai...

K: walk? abhi?

A: haan...

K: miss kashyap...par...

A: ( pouted) nahi nahi nahi! mujhe jaana hai jaana hai jaana hai!...ma dekhiye sir mujhe...ummm

Kanir shut her mouth with his palm...

K: achcha achcha theek hai...chaliye...

They head to beautiful garden of the hall...
K: miss Kashyap...
Kabir tried to say something. ...

A: arrey aap kon hai? arrey haan! vo KKN. ke Kabir Sharma na? nice meeting u!!

K: aap...

A: ( angry ) aur nahi toh kya...main aapki honewaali pyaari si bholi si wifey hu...aise baat karte hai apni wife se?...

With that she held his arm and put it round her waist...making in rest on her stomach...

She put her head on his shoulder. ...
A: ab kahiye. ...

Kabir felt a bit awkward and lifted his arm to her shoulder. ...

Ananya snuggled closer to him...
A: aapko khaana banana aata hai?

K: haan

A: achcha? toh shaadi ke baad aap hi banana!
She beamed...making him smile...

K: done! vaise miss Kashyap...u are very cute as well!

Ananya blushed and put her arms around his neck and rested her head on his chest...

A: sirf cute?

K: and very very beautiful. ...the mist beautiful girl I have ever seen...
Kabir blurted out...and mentally whacked himself when he saw Ananya blushing profusely. ...

K: a..andar chale?

Ananya nodded and they went inside to attend the remaining function. ...

Next day...

It was their wedding the next day...It was her haldi today...of course his too...

She dressesd in a beautiful yellow net half saree...and had some flower jewellery on...much to her annoyance. ...

A: ( sulking) ma...yeh..phool kitne ajeeb hai...poori phoolan devi bana diya hai!

An: kitni pyaari lag rahi hai tu beta...kuch bhi kehti hai...

At Kabir's place...

Kabir's soul was yelling out...
" MAIN AAJ OFFICE NAHI JAUNGA VARNA PEELE RANG KA DEVTA LAGUNGA"

Kabir made an irritated face as he was smeared again and again with that annoying yellow paste...yeah...haldi!

S: haaye! kitne pyaare lagrahe ho Kabir!

K: bhaabhi! India ke no.1 channel ka owner aapko seriously CUTE lagta hai?

S: vo sab nahi patamain apbe bhai ko cute kehrahi hu...
She said ruffling his hair...making him smile...


Monu too dipped his baby finger in haldi and tried to apply on Kaabir's cheek...but he couldn't reach so he started crying loudly...making Kabir take him in his lap...

K: aww mera baby? kya hua aapko?

Monu looked sadly at him...
M: monu...halli! chachu! ( haldi)

Kabir smiled and kissed his cheek...
K: aww! no problem. ...
he took monu's finger to his cheek...making him apply it...Monu got happy and giggled. ...clapping his hands...


K: Richa...tum?
He asked as he saw Richa approach him...

T: Yo jeeju! main shagun ki haldi lene aayi thi...

K: haldi?

T: ya! auntie ne yoh yehi kaha tha...aapki utri hui hakdi Ananya ko lagegi na...

K: ( awkward and yuckkk!) uh...a...achcha...ok...

Just then...
"Kabir"
Kabir looked at the source of the voice and found Mr. Mark...one of his foreign investors...calling out to him...

Holy sh*t!!!!

Kabir immediately held Monu in front of him...the little body of his covered Kabir's face...

K: yes Mr. Mark? You...here? ?

M: well...sorry to disturb u...needed to dicuss the deal. ...

K: ummm...Mr.Mark give a few minutes I'll be back after changing...actually my wedding rituals are on so...

M: really...I must like to see u then!

K: ( in his mind) Mark ke bachche! am I some showpiece u wanna see?

He gave a pleading look to Sandhya who immediately draped him with a white bedsheet...

Kabir got up somehow. ..stumbling...as he couldn't see a thing...

M: ( shocked) ummm Mr. Sharma...what's this?

K: uh...a..a..a...actually in India it is not allowed to see the groom before wedding during a ritaul...

M: I see...

Kabir almost ran...fell down in between but got up somehow and ran upstairs to his room...leaving Sandhya barely able to supress her laughter...and Mark stunned!




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T: Iiitttsss! haldi time!
Richa cried!!

A: mujhse zyaada toh tu khush hai...

T: aur kya! mere jeeju! haayeee!

A: chup kar! badi aayi!

T: Auntie...kuch jal raha hai? ( sniffs) arrey Ananya smell toh teri taraf se aarahi hai!

A: Trisha ki bachchi! tu ruk!

That night...
Ananya was hugging her mother...
A: ma aap bhi chalo na! main aapke bina kaise rahungi waha...

An: chal paagal! kuch bhi!

A: maaa! I'll miss u...aapko milne main roz aaungi...pakka wala. promise. ...

An: ofoh! mujhe na Kabir ke liye dar lagraha hai...bechari iss paagal ladki ko kaise jhelega?


A: haawww! ma abhi se beti parai??? jao katti!

An: Anu...beta tu abhi bhi choti si bachchi hi hai...apni innocence ko hamesha aise hi rehne dena...aur Kabir ko tang nahi karna...

Ananya nodded...and hugged Anita again...

A: I love u ma...

An: don't worry...I'm sure...Kabir tumhe Armaan aur mujhse bohot zyaada pyaar karega...

Ananya blushed a deep red at his mention and looked at his name inscribed beautifully in her mehendi and then the beautiful solitare he gave her on their engagement. ...

She slept dreaming of him...her last maiden night...maybe...She blushed and chided herself for thinking all this...

Next morning. ...
Kashyap house was buzzing with guests...
Anita was busy shouting orders for shagun and other materials to be taken...

Her uncle from the US had arrived along with her cousins Taarini and Anuraag...

Ananya hugged Taarini tight. ...
A: hi Taarini...tumse mile kitna time hogaya...u look just like maami...but maami kaha hai?

Anu: mamma ki thodi tabyat kharaab thi par di ...u don't worry! main hoon na!

A: of course mere shah rukh khan! Why fear when Anuraag the great is here!!!

Anu: of course!!!!

Taa: hey! but u know what...don't know my jeeju only...kon hai?

Ananya blushed and bought the day's newspaper that read...

" TOP SHOT KKN ONWER KABIR SHARMA TO TIE THE KNOT!"

She saw the handsome face below it and blushed...

A: ye hai tumhare jeeju...

Ta: Oh My God!!!!! ye?????? Kabir Sharma???? My god he's famous in US also...I heard unki shaadi horahi hai...par tumse??? wow!!!

A: actually vo ma ki best friend ke bete hai...they just met a few days back...and finalised. ...

Tasrini hugged her sister...she was so happy for her...

Time flew by and it was 4 in the afternoon. ...
A: bas bas kitna sajaaogi...
Ananya said as Taarini continued applying blush on her cheeks...

Anita smiled at her daughter. ...heavily decked up as Kabir's bride...

She rubbed her tears away and smiled...

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Aaahhh!

T: kya hua?

Ananya made a sad face...
A: ye lehenga bohot bhaari hai yaar...main chalungi kaise?

T: oh! chal koi nahi! its fine...jerju ka pyaar hai!

She winked at Ananya...


At Kabir's place...
K: maa! please yaar! main ghodi vodi nahi chadne waala...

V: Kabir...please beta hamari tradition hai...Please. ...

K: ( pout) theek hai...

Kabir climbed on the horse when Monu extended his hands towards him...
Kabir smiled at his cute nephew. ...he too was wearing a small turban looking like a baby groom...

K: aapko mere saath bethna hai?

Monu nodded and Kabir smiled. ...and made him sit ahead him on the horse making him sqeaul. ...

Kabir pecked his cheek seeing him so happy...watching the baarat depart with all dancing crazily...including his bhaiyya bhaabhi...

At the venue...
Anita performed a grand welcome...
She did Kabir's Aarti and pulled his nose according to the ritual...


Once they were in...Kabir was made to sit quietly and wait for his bride...

He saw her come...her gaze lowered...for the varmaala( garlanding)

She was about to garland Kabir when Rajveer and their other cousins picked him...

Ananya's cousins were no less and finally they garlanded each other...

Kabir had to admit thst she was the most beautiful bride he'd seen...and he smiled seeing her blush because of him...


TBC😃

Precap:
A: no no no no you have to do it! varna...varna...main...

Kabir smiled awkwardly at her...

K: Ananya...main...

A: aap kitna haklaate hai...office mein toh full sadu...aap hi kehte ki humeapni sari duties poori karni chahiye...phir aap bhi kijiye...

Kabir looked embarrassed. ...

A: please...
She said burying her head in his chest. ..inhaling his cologne. ...

He hekd her tight caressing her hair as he heard her sob...
K: ( cupping her face) Ananya? kya hua?...ro kyu rahi ho?

Ananya continued sobbing...
Kabir sighed and leaned in closer and placed a gentle kiss on her forehead making her hold him tight...

K: happy? now stop crying Ananya...aur sojao...I'll be back...

She said making her lay down and covering her with a blanket. ...





Edited by akyabiggestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Arre kahan chhod diya? I mean hum sabko? What did you feel, I am talking about Kabir leaving Ananya?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
superb
please continue soon ...
i wanna know wat precap is about
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
what an awesome update...
loved it as always...
continue sooner plx can't wait...

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