KaYa SS: Kaho Na Kaho-- Part 6a/ Page 17(22/03) - Page 2

Originally posted by: cSaiP

So beautifully the emotions came up...cud feel Annie's pain...kabirs love...

Very nice👏👏👏

Update soon...can't describe more...as still mesmerized by the emotions that plyd up in yr story😊

Thank you so much.
Glad those emotions could reach out...
😊

Originally posted by: kavikas

Love ur concept!! Do contniue an dpm me plz.. And ur topic is amazing!!Its speak for itself!

thank you dear...
I might not be able to pm anyone for this SS but keep it in ur watched list...or bookmark it...
hope u will like it further on too😳

Originally posted by: Sagi.

I could almost feel Ananyas pain...it was a dream then? to be held and comforted by Kabir?

Even Anita is equally guilty. The CVs let her easily through and Kabir was the one who carried the entire burden of guilt.

Please continue! My OS (cant call it that anymore!) is also on similar lines. Please have a look.

thank you so much Sagi...
yup, it was a dream...
and yup again...I always wanted Anita to atleast regret what she had done...Kabir wasn't guilty...he just wanted to save a life after one was gone...
I will surly check on ur SS...hehe...OS's are hard to keep limited so I already called it an SS rather than OS :P

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Love to read this. Truly speaking in last 30 episodes I always felt this relationship is based on Kabir's sacrifices n his love n till date my thinking is same..they just ended the show without redeeming kashayaps..

But I love to read this part here. So plz continue

Yup...I too felt that Kabir was showed as the guilty party...
somewhere, he was demeaned...n thats why this idea came up in my mind...
😳

Originally posted by: zakter

Loved reading chapter 1 😊

Must say you are a wonderful writer 👏

by reading your writing i can visualize all the scene vividly in-front of me

excited to read the next chapter 😃, please continue 😊

Thank you so much dear...
glad to know that u can visualize the scenes as thats what I wanna do...
will cont asap

Originally posted by: elrein_2046

Btfl story... i dn't want to kabir soo easily frgive ananya fr wat she did.. coz of CVs in end it looks lyk dat ananya did'nt deserve kabir... she hv to proove dat she really loves kabir nd deserve him too.. othrwise we fangirls r enough fr kabir..

thank you dear...
I too, didn't want Kabir to forget Ananya...Ananya has to show till what extent she can go for him...
She has always given up beside the time when shreya entered or when her kabir told her the past and when anita disagreed to there marriage but those were not the big tests...
in big tests, her trust shook...and she left him so I really want to show her pay off...

I just lovedd your concept...

Beautiful start...glad to know like me many felt end was not perfect...and Anita was as much guilty as Anu...their relation was almost like give and take...not in equal proportions...kabir was made too soft and giving...so much so that he almost felt like a totally different man ...we knew as Kabir...some changes ought to be there...but ...

Originally posted by: sonyjknum

Beautiful start...glad to know like me many felt end was not perfect...and Anita was as much guilty as Anu...their relation was almost like give and take...not in equal proportions...kabir was made too soft and giving...so much so that he almost felt like a totally different man ...we knew as Kabir...some changes ought to be there...but ...

Nice concept.. loved to read..