KaYa OS: Patching Up

Maaneet099

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Uff that was intense and superb!

I wish they show something as close as what you wrote. Beautifully penned!!

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

The slap...I wish to see it on screen.

I desperately wish so.

Nicely written :D

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luvraj4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I loved this one...I wish that this happens in the show too. .I love this kabir and ananya patching up thing. ...

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.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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No words to describe what you have written. ..just beautiful... Each and every emotion was wonderfully depicted.

Loved the passion they have for each other... The sorry-nama at the end was pretty lovely... I loved the way Shreya ki band bajayi Kabir ne... love you lots for ur flawless writing skills..

Keep writing and writing and writing and writing more more more and much much more on the bestest couple - KaYa...

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: chats53
Amazing
I love the angry Kabir ...
The best part was a slap to Shreya excatly what she deserved... I hope to see something like that in the show...
Keep writing girl I love your work 😊

Thank you so much!😳

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: elrein_2046
Its wd sooo beautiful
Thank god... atleast they patch up here
Hope this will happn in show soon

I'm glad you liked it!😉

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Maaneet099
Uff that was intense and superb!
I wish they show something as close as what you wrote. Beautifully penned!!

Thanks!😳

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: RaizadaPriya
beautiful os
really..!!

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_
The slap...I wish to see it on screen.
I desperately wish so.

Nicely written :D

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever
I loved this one...I wish that this happens in the show too. .I love this kabir and ananya patching up thing. ...

Thank you so much guys!🤗

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Kritika Pawle

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Posted: 9 years ago

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It was Awesome ❤️

That slap though 👍🏼 exactly what she deserved .

Aisa show main ho jaaye to mazaa ajaaye (only the slap cause I know baaki sab hone wala nahi 😉)

You should try Youtubing 👍🏼 .

Can count me in as one of your subscribers 😃

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Amreen...
No words to describe what you have written. ..just beautiful... Each and every emotion was wonderfully depicted.
Loved the passion they have for each other... The sorry-nama at the end was pretty lovely... I loved the way Shreya ki band bajayi Kabir ne... love you lots for ur flawless writing skills..

Keep writing and writing and writing and writing more more more and much much more on the bestest couple - KaYa...

Awww!🤗 Thank you so much for your lovely words! It means a lot to me.. Thank you for appreciating my writing...

I will keep writing for you guys!😳

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