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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very lovely and sweet OS👏. Plz plz update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RaizadaPriya

thank u so much for the mention of my post

ur os is sooo beautiful

thank u for fulfilling my wish

plzz continue soon

its really too beautiful


Your welcome yes I was continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sagi.

Awesome. Itni jaldi patchup?


Thanks Sagi
I wrote a detailed post on the jhagda couldn't drag it was too much for me to see the show and then imagine KaYa fighting hence this TS 😛 😉
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Originally posted by: Sona29

Very lovely and sweet OS👏. Plz plz update soon.


Thankyou
Yes if today I get some free time at work will update 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I don't know why how much ever I try to cut short, my two shots turn in three, they are still TS though :D

Thank you everyone for your overwhelming response and appreciation, you do not know how much it means for a first time writer like me..Enough of my bak bak.. here is part 2 for you:

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Part-2

Recap: Ananya challenged Kabir to make breaking news in front of everyone; else he gets the couch for the night

Kabir accepted the challenge as he knew his girl loves to play these games and he did not wanted to disappoint her, moreover today was their special day and he was ready to go to any lengths to make it more special for her.

He went in the direction where Richa, Ronnie and Ananya were standing and talking:

K: kya baatein ho rahi hai doston ke bech? Kahi abhi se meri burai toh nahi shuru kar di mrs.Sharma ne? 😃

R: Jiju burai kare aapke dushmaan.. mai toh yeah keh rahi thi ki aaj aap kya lag rahe hai! Qayamat dhaa rahe hai 😛😛... Agar aap office mein humare sir aur bahar humare Jiju na hote toh mai hi aapko abhi propose kar deti!!

K: Accha yea baat hai...toh chalo mai hi bol deta hoo... I love you too Richa , you're the cutest saali I could get...😉

Saying this he winks at Richa and by then Ananya is fuming with jealousy.

K: Abb agar aap doston ko problem na ho toh kya mai apni wife se 2min baat kar sakta hoo??

But Ananya was a little jealous at Kabir flirting with Richa and also was in a little mischievous mood as she knew Kabir was trying to play along the challenge she gave him, so she says

A: Uff Kabir.. humhe toh baat karte hi rehna hai in this lifetime, but let's attend the guest that especially made it to our party ...

Saying this she winks at him and leaves from there attending and talking to everyone around. Kabir tried a few more times to go close to Ananya and at least give her a peck on the cheeks so he can complete the challenge, but Ananya was too fast and too quick for him. Armaan was noticing this the entire time, how his sister was making Kabir run around, so Armaan approached Kabir:

Ar: Jiju mai kabse dekh raha hoo ki didi abhi se aapko ungliyo pe nacha rahi hai, kuch karo Jiju, kahi asie na hoo sari life unke piche bhaagte hi rehna pade.

Listening to what Armaan says Kabir gets an idea, he whispers something in Armaans ears and then they both hi-fi... then Armaan runs towards the main switch of the house and then next minute the power goes off... Its jet dark, Kabir walks in the room holding a candle in his hand..

K: Attention ladies and gentleman, jaise aap sabko pata hi hai how much me and Ananya went through in the last few days. I cannot thank you all enough to come here today and be a part of this special days of ours, but today in front of you all family and friends I want to make sure that the most beautiful woman of the world, who happens to be my wife, feels extra special...

Ananya who was standing in one of the corner feels extremely shy and scared as to what Kabir was going to do or say next, she was scared that for real he would kiss her in front of everyone ... she was actually hoping that he does not do that as it would get too embarrassing for her and keeping her fingers crossed while her heart was beating at 250mph

Kabir walks towards Ananya and pulls her in the center of the room, Ananya still all scared and shy ... then he holds her hand and says

K: This is for you Ananya... and starts singing ❤️

"Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb.."

Everyone present in the room were shocked and surprised... Ananya who was beyond surprised just keeps blinking her eyes with an "O" on her face as in trying to gulp in the situation, the very serious very private EIC of KKN, and now her husband, was actually singing for her in the middle of their wedding reception.

Once Kabir finished singing the song he pulled Ananya closer and lightly kissed her on her cheeks 😳. Ananya's eyes just got wider as she just tries to register what happened . Ananya and Kabir were both shivering in desire lost in their world when everyone around starts clapping and brings them back to reality... Armaan switches the lights back and then he walks to the couple..

Ar: Kyun kaisa raha didi, kabse jiju ko aage piche ghuma rahi thi?

Ananya is more shocked that her own brother who was always by her side was now ready to go to any lengths for his Jiju. She knew how open heartedly her mom and Armaan had welcomed Kabir in the family where there was no place for doubts and suspicions left anymore. Just then Kabir whispers in Ananya's ears:

K: Kaise lagi breaking news Mrs.Sharma? 🥳

A: Baat toh lips pe kiss karne ki huai thi, lagta hai EIC biwi ko bhi news ki tarah manipulate karna chah rahe hai!

K: Ananya yeah galat hai, tumne kaha tha breaking news, jab sabka attention humare taraf ho toh who breaking news hoti hai na?

A: Kabir, yeah humare wedding ki party hai, sabka attention waise bhi humari taraf hi hai, aab aap 1 kaam kijiye haar maan lijijye and couch pe sone ke liye ready ho jayenge!

Saying this she winks at Kabir and goes in the direction of her mother. Kabir was so furious and frustrated at that moment but he knew it is impossible to win over the demands of his Angel. All through the party whenever Kabir had an eye lock with Ananya he kept widening and twitching his eyebrows and giving her a furious look, but all in disdain. His wife and her challenges were going beyond Kabir's reach now..

The evening went on with light conversations, blessings from elders, teasing between friends and Kabir, Ananya and everyone else enjoying the party. A little before midnight everyone leaves and Kabir and Ananya leave for their new house too, ready to step into a new beautiful world together.


Just when Kabir picks the keys to open the door of his house, he is pleasantly surprised by Tarini and Anurag opening the door and greeting the newlyweds. Tarini welcomes Ananya in the house the traditional Indian ways and Anurag feeds desserts to the couple for a pleasant beginning of their new life. After all the welcoming Tarini and Anurag start to leave for their home, when Kabir interrupts

K: Tarini itni raat ko tum dono ghar kaise jaogi? Kal subah chale jana

T: Kabir I am a big girl, I know how to take care of myself, aur waise bhi muze aur Anurag ko 2 love birds ke beech kebab mein haadi banana ka shauk nahi... Right Anurag?

Tarini and Anurag hi-fi agreeing that the couple needs to have complete privacy. Tarini and Anurag bid farewell to Kabir-Ananya promising to meet soon. Finally the love birds were left in the sanctuary of just each other's company, exactly what both had been dreaming and wanting for a while now.

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TBC...😳😳

Some raunchy romance coming up.. kids stay away part-3 is meant for adults! 😉😉

Edited by chats53 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Loved both parts ...I am glad that you took a happy subject to write on...the sadness in the show is really getting too much to handle. ..I can't see a broken Kabir...
But this made up for it...
Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Loved both parts ...I am glad that you took a happy subject to write on...the sadness in the show is really getting too much to handle. ..I can't see a broken Kabir...

But this made up for it...
Waiting for the next update


Thankyou so much
Yes I had enough of fight too needed original KaYa 😛
Last part tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
sirf Ananya hi Kabir ko ungliyo pe nacha sakti hai, nice update. Plz continue and thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Very nice update
Looking forward to part three
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Very beautiful update😳
Continue soon

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