Two Shot: Patching up(Based on current track) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
It was Awesome Aazeen...
I just loved this version...the way things turn out...KaYa get married...loved it...
Kabir...he was with her in each situation & the way he make her understand...superb..!!!!
so it's time to patch up...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Oh wowww...really loved this version...how I wish this would happen in the show...at least we would have got to watch KaYa's wedding. ..hehe...but we all know that's just a dream for us...

But I am so happy to read this aspect too...great work. .
Waiting for the next update. ..
Continue soon

Thanks a lot buddy!
Hehehehe... We all so wish to see the wedding... But we know aisa hoga nahi...
But what we say- Dil ko behlaane ke liye khayaal achha hai...😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

ok i m nt against love bt thank god serial mai aesa nahi hota.. Family k khilaaf jana..uff.. Bt still u shwd it in simple way.. Wish agr Shreya n office ko bolney walla part hota toh maza aaata.. Now waiting for nxt part

I do understand Shahsair what you are saying... I too must have not taken such a step at personal front, but it's just a story... A story cannot always be morally correct for all, after all people do take such steps... Its a personal choice... Just read it like a story n enjoy!😆
As to Shreya be told, and office bolne wala part, I'm very sorry I couldn't stand on to ur exoectations... well I dont think that was necessary for the flow of my story... Its abt patching up of a mother n daughter, and lets stick to that part only, since it's a short story and not a novel... N that's why I didn't put that part...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Wow Aazeen aunty. Kya story hain.

In serial e I don't think yeh sab karne ki zaroorat padegi.

Iske baad kya?

HEHEHE I know sagi, In the show we wont need this all tactics...
It's an Indian show, and everything has to be set to be happily ever after situation in the end...
Just tried to break the monotony of the idealistic situations and write something different...

Iske baad a patch up between mother-daughter...

PS: Lost interest so soon to write any further now... Lets see if I'm gonna continue this or not...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: -Gitanjali-

Wow this was really awesome

Thanks a lot Nandani di!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u Rajani di!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonyjknum

Khush kar ditta Aazeen

Hehehe... Mujhe khushi hai di, that you liked it...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: samreencutie

Oh my god aapne toh Kaya ko shadi ke bandhanme jodh diya aap na CVS ke bheje me kuch daalo

Coming to the story
Awesome awesome

Hehehehe... Thank u Samreen...
As to CVs... i think they are doing a great job...
Because they r not going the cliched way...
I am sure by the end of the show, u will love them more...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really very good
so annaya choose Kabir over her mother
Kabir being a man of words tried to make her understand that they should have a talk with Anita jee but as annaya knew how her mother is she totally discarding his words wanted him to get married
Kabir who love her more than his life married her to make sure that she have him in every steps of her life
but being a daughter how can she so easily remove the feeling the emotions she shared with her mother
the very sight of her reminded her of the moments they shared
Kabir i really love him
the way he is with her and also making her understand every point of life and the ups and downs
i agree with his decision they should talk with Anita
plz cont soon and pm me

Hi Ria...
Thanks a lot yaar for summing it all up...
Thats another unique way of sumarising the update...
Thanks...
Will continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

It was Awesome Aazeen...

I just loved this version...the way things turn out...KaYa get married...loved it...
Kabir...he was with her in each situation & the way he make her understand...superb..!!!!
so it's time to patch up...
continue soon...

Thanks a lot Prinky...
Yeah for a change I think this version is likable...
The other solution the other choice apart from being idealistic, is what I wanted to show...
Glad u liked it...
Will try continuing this dear...

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