Few OS and FF: ***KABEER AND ANANYA---THE WAIT*** (COMPLETED)

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: Manyata5
Flawless!
Acceptence ho gayee

Cont as soon as possible
Thanks for the pm btw

Thank you 😊 yes indeed acceptance ho gyi. 😊

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: krazykaju
Omg...
What an amazing update yr.
Kabir's sweet asaults...
Too much to handle.
How i love this!
Trust me each and every word written by you create the complete scene to imagine yr.
And specially this sensual kabir. 😳
Too good.
Wishing, hoping, requesting for some kaya physical romance.
I know its too much besharmi of me.
But can't help it. 😉
Sorry for late comment as i was really very busy with collg practicls.
Thank u so much for pm.
And plz update soon coz this is my stress buster.
Lots of love.
Lavi

I am so happy that you liked it 😳 I am happy to read that I succeeded in creating a proper image.😊 I guess we all look forward to sensual Kabeer.😊 I guess I won't be giving too much of physical thing, but sweet things for sure! 👍🏼

Love you too 😳

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LaviDovey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

I am so happy that you liked it😳I am happy to read that I succeeded in creating a proper image.😊I guess we all look forward to sensual Kabeer.😊I guess I won't be giving too much of physical thing, but sweet things for sure!👍🏼
Love you too😳

mere ko tera likha sb chalega...
now plz update yr...

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Misha (Sumitra)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#364

Hey,

It was great.

To be completely honest, I like this track so much better than the current track of the show.

Keep up the good work and do PM me.

Misha

Edited by RNgirl - 10 years ago

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#365

You think it's better than the current track? 😆 Thank you sooo much! 😊😳

Originally posted by: RNgirl
Hey,

It was great.

To be completely honest, I like this track so much better than the current track of the show.

Keep up the good work and do PM me.

Misha

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#366

PART 26:

As Kabeer reaches home, he calls Lakshman "Thank you Lakshman mujhe Ananya ke barey mein sub kuch message kar dene ke liye" "Arey koi baat nahi Kabeer Sir. Ye to meri duty hai", Kabeer smiles. "Chaliye mere layak aur koi kaam ho to zarur batayiyega" "Haan zarur". Ending the call Kabeer starts thinking about Ananya's life.

Suddenly his phone rings, looking at the name flashing on the screen, a smile comes to his face. Receiving the call he says "Kya baat hai Anurag tum ab tak soye nahi?" "Wo to so gaya hai Kabeer, par mujhe tumse kuch important baat karni thi isliye socha tumhe call kar lun. Main tumhe disturb to nahi kar rhi na?" asks Tarini. "Hmmm... Kya tum mujhe kabhi disturb karti ho Tarini? Batao kya baat hai?" "Kya tumne Ananya ko sub kuch bata dia?" "Nahi abhi tak to nahi" "Dekho Kabeer main achi tarah samjhti hun ki tum Ananya ko lekar kitne possessive ho, aur tum uske barey mein kya feel karte ho. Isliye main nahi chahti ki koi bhi misunderstanding ki wajah se tum dono ka rishta suffer karey. So please tum jitni jaldi ho sakey Ananya ko sub kuch bata dena" "Hmm... Main bhi nahi chahta ki usse koi bhi baat chupi rahey. Don't worry main jald hi baat kar lunga ussey" "Hmm..." "Tarini..." "Haan..." "Thank you" "Thank you? Kis liye?" "Humesha mere saath rehne k liye, mera saath dene k liye. Mujhe samajhne k liye" "Kabeer... please... tumhe ye sub kehne ki koi zarurat nahi hai samjhe tum" scolds Tarini, in a friendly manner. "Chalo theek hai tum apna khayal rakhna Kabeer" "Hmm... tum bhi" saying this they end the call.

Next day in the office Kabeer calls Ananya into his cabin. "Ananya tumhe apne bhai ke college mein jana hoga" he informs her as she enters the cabin. "Mujhey? Kyun?""Tum bhul gayi tumne mujhe apne bhai ke college ke barey mein bola tha? Main chahta hun ki tum iss news ko cover karo""But Sir main?" "Han kyun kya problem hai?""Par Sir wahan sub mujhe I mean Armaan ke friends jante hain" "To?" asks Kabeer, creasing his brows. "Dekho Ananya, wahan tum KKN ko represent karogi, na ki apne bhai ko" "Hmm... Par Kabeer...", he looks at her and waits for her to complete the line. Taking a deep breathe "Theek hai" saying this Ananya leaves the cabin.

Moving to her desk, she asks Sunny to get ready "Par Ananya humein Armaan ke college kyu jana hai?" asks Sunny. "Wo exams ke time zada projects de dene ka case hai" informs Ananya. "Oye tu ne Armaan se baat ki?" asks Ronnie. "Ussi ne to puri baat batayi thi. Maine inhe bataya" she points towards Kabeer's cabin and finds Kabeer looking at her. He smiles, Ananya returns back the smile. Then continues looking at Ronnie "Aur inhone mujhey order de dia ki main iss story ko cover karun" "Oye Ananya to iss mein problem kya hai?" "Sunny yaar wahan mujhe sub jante hain. I mean at least Armaan ke friends, and mujhe bohot weird lag raha hai" "Par Ananya isse kya hua agar wo tujhe jante hain to?" enters Trisha. "Trisha maine sunna tu ne resignation de dia hai?" says Ananya, turning to look at her. "Haan bus kuch saaman collect karne aayi hun""Trisha we are going to miss you" says Richa, hugging her."Haan Trisha ji hum na apko bohot miss karne wale hain" says Sunny, getting emotional. Getting up from his seat Ronnie embraces Sunny by his shoulder and says "Oh tu fikar na kar Sunny, hum hai na yahan. Hum tujhe Trisha ki kami kabhi mehsus hone nahi denge" "Aap na Ronnie Bhai jab dekho mujhse mazak hi karte rehte ho" says Sunny, rubbing off his tears. "Waise Trisha ji aap humein bulayengi na apni shaadi mein?" "O ji Sunny paji ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai? Aap to invitation list mein top pe ho" smiles Trisha. "Waise Sunny doston ko bhi koi invitation deta hai?" asks Trisha, holding Sunny's hand and getting emotional. They hug each other.

"Chal Sunny jaldi chal. Acha Trisha hum tujhse baad mein milte hain" saying this Ananya hugs Trisha. "Koi baat nahi Ananya tu ja main waise bhi abhi yahin hun, wo alag baat hai main kuch kaam nahi karne wali. Yaar kabhi kabhi to mauka milta hai KKN mein free rehne ka aur enjoy karne ka" as Trisha completes the line, her eyes wells up with tears. They all embrace her into a group hug.

Rubbing off her tears Trisha says "Acha bus ab aur emotional nahi hona. Agar abhi sarey emotions dikha denge to shaadi pe kya karenge?" smiles Trisha. "Tum sub ko mere shaadi ke har function mein rehna hai samjhe na? Bhaley hi main KKN mein nahi hongi par humari friendship kabhi khatam nahi hogi, okay?" "Bilkul yaar hum zarur honge, tu ne agar nahi bhi bulaya na hum besharmo ki tarah aa jayenge" says Ronnie placing his hand on her head. They all smile. Ananya and Sunny leave.

Edited by Sterolinelover - 10 years ago

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Sokool27

@Sokool27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#367

Hey

Now I am the first one to reply. 😊

So lovely and romantic and naughty too😉

Looking forward to the scene of revelation of Kabir's past.

I know you will definitely update it asap.😊

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Diksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#368

Amazing update.. 👏
Lovely.. 😳

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heartbroken1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#369

nice one !!!!!!

awesome!!!!!

great going !

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: Sokool27
Hey
Now I am the first one to reply. 😊
So lovely and romantic and naughty too😉
Looking forward to the scene of revelation of Kabir's past.

I know you will definitely update it asap.😊

Thank you sooo much for liking it 😊