TS: Vishwas aankhein bandh karke hi kiya jata hain (updtd pg 4)

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Hey Guys!!!! Iam going to write a small story on our very own KaYa. This is going to be my first ever story on India forums. I have never ever written any story, but this couple have made me pen down something for them.. Shreya's entry compelled me to write.Hope you guys will like it too.😊😳
I am not sure whether it will be a OS ,TS, SS or FF. I have just started writing it.
Hope you guys will like it.
Here goes the teaser for the story

It had all started with the merger party that Kabir had stopped speaking to her, how much ever she tried he didn't come out of his shell and she was scared.

She had messaged him asking whether he was dropping her home or should she go with Ronnie?

She had received the same message again "Ananya not possible lot of work go with Ronnie", sighing she asked Ronnie to drop her home, packing her bags giving a last look to him she left with Ronnie. She wasn't angry with him becoz she knew he wouldn't speak to anybody when he was upset, she was worried that he may turn into the person he was before she met him, and boy she was scared, it had taken her months to bring him back to his previous self, so she believed when his best frnd had told her that he was back to being his old self. She was glad that she could bring back the old Kabir Sharma who could laugh, love and play pranks with her mother and Armaan to just irritate her. She was missing her Kabir and yet she couldn't do anything to it.

Like it??? should i continue or not


Love

Aashritha

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting startšŸ‘šŸ‘
Plss continue soon😳
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Please want to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely !! Waiting to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes liked it..
good start...
Please continue ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all for the encouragement. will post the first chapter in a days time. as im busy with my entrance prepration will post as soon as possible
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Aashritha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1

Ananaya POV

It had all started with the merger party that Kabir had stopped speaking to her, how much ever she tried he didn't come out of his shell and she was scared.

She had messaged him asking whether he was dropping her home or should she go with Ronnie?

She had received the same message again "Ananaya not possible lot of work go with Ronnie", sighing she asked Ronnie to drop her home, packing her bags giving a last look to him she left with Ronnie. She wasn't angry with him becoz she knew he wouldn't speak to anybody when he was upset, she was worried that he may turn into the person he was before she met him, and boy she was scared, it had taken her months to bring him back to his previous self, so she believed when his best frnd had told her that he was back to being his old self. She was glad that she could bring back the old Kabir Sharma who could laugh, love and play pranks with her mother and Armaan to just irritate her. She was missing her Kabir and yet she couldn't do anything to it.

Hearing Ronnie speak she had come back from her thought process.

Seeing Ananaya worried Ronnie asked her

Ronnie: Sab theek hain na Ananaya ya Kabir ke saath phir jhhagda hua haij.

Ananaya: Sab theek hain yaar kuch nahi hua, bas woh pareshaan hain toh mein bhi thoda pareshaan hoon. Chal chood ghar jake baat karte hain.

Ronnie: Ab bata kya hua hain??? Kabir bhi kuch din se pareshaan dikh raha hain jaghda waghda hua hain kya??

BTW aunty and Armaan kaha hain dikhayi nahi dein rahe hain

Ananaya: Woh maa Sheila aunty ke saath vaishno devi gayi hain and Armaan clg ke dooston ke saath trek par gaya hain. Yaar pata nahi merger party par jab se Shreya ko dekha hain na he is behaving all weird.

Ronnie: Hmmm.. woh toh maine bhi observe kiya hain. Shayad work pressure hoga Ananaya dhyaan maat dein theek hojayega theek hain na. Ab haas bhi dein toh hasti hui zayada aachi lagti hain

Ananaya: Hmmm...hope so Ronnie, mein Kabir ko aise upset nahi dekh saktti hoon.

Ronnie: Kuch nahi hoga, tu tension maat lein, chal ab mein chalta hoon, gn

Ananaya: hmm, chal bye good night kal office mein milte hain.

Thinking about the past few months with Kabir, she realised that she was the happiest, he had become more open to his love towards her after her mother had accepted her relationship with him, maa and Armaan adored him, and sometimes they would all team up together and pull her leg or just Kabir would do something and she would be getting scolding's from her mom even when it's not her fault, she would always tell "Ananaya tune hi kuch kiya hoga nahi toh Kabir bina matlab kisko kyun daantega"??She would just pout and tell "haan haan maa Kabir toh aapko kabhi galat lag hi nahi sakte and aap aise behave karr rahe hoon ki mein aapki beti nahi bahu hoon and he is your son".

Suddenly she had realised that Kabir's behaviour had changed becoz of the merger and then it hit her that Shreya was Kabir's ex-wife. Now Ananaya knew what she had to do and she messaged him.

Mr. Sharma agar aapko yaad hain toh maine aapse ek baar kaha tha ki kisi par vishwas aankhein bandh karke ke hi kiya jata hain and mein aap par aankhein bandh karke vishwas karti hoon not becoz of any other reason but becoz I LOVE YOU and aapne aanjane mein hi sahi humara saath diya tha jab sabne humara saath chod diya tha papa ke case ke time par. Jab ek aanjane insaan ka aap saath dein sakte hain, woh insaan kabhi kuch galat nahi kar sakta hain and uske saath kuch galat nahi hoon sakta hain. Kabir Sharma you mean the world to me and itni aasani se aapka picha nahi choodne wali hoon, abhi toh puri zindagi aapke saath jeene hain. I love you.

He had to know that she loved him and she would never ever leave him come what may. Whatever she had to say to him she typed and send the message to him.

I hope you all like it.. do read and commen😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one...
Awaiting for the next update..

BTW All the best for your exams!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update... best wishes too
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This is awesome start šŸ‘ šŸ‘ looks interesting enough to look forward to...
Eager to know how ananya gonna bring Kabir Saab out of his shell ...its depressing to see him sad
Looking forward for next update 😃

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