FF: Broken Souls Part 13 Pg 26

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violette

@violette

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Oh! I so love this OS!❤️

Precise, perfect, to the point story with an undercurrent of romance and lingering volatile emotions!👍🏼

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sonai

@rajeeviansonai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

lovely update. annu kabir ki taraf dekh to lo.uski halat to jaan lo

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Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Loved it. I think this one is may fav amongst all those that you've written. Update soon. :)

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Wonderful update..loving pia and kabir's bonding. ..

Continue soon

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Diksha

@Diksha_1991

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Wonderful update..👏 👏

Plss continue soon...😳

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paradigm

@paradigm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Very happy with the positive response to this story

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praneeta

@pd786

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

pia is such a sweetie

ananya needs to think before she speaks

i hope kabir would be fine

update soon

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paradigm

@paradigm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Thank you for all your valuable feedback. I have realized that I have been spending a lot of time providing insight into Kabir's though ptocess and feelings. As a result most readers are able to empathize with him. I haven't been giving enough time to Ananya in this story and hence most people are finding her harsh and unfair to Kabir.

Will try and dwell into Ananya's thought ptocess in the next part.

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LaviDovey

@Lavi_dovey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

beautiful.
amazingly defined.
kabir and piyu part is really cute.
loved the faith piyu has in kabir.
ananya is really hurt and so as kabir.
an emotional cute part.
hope soon they will understand eachother.

mind blowing update.
update soon.

Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago