FF: Broken Souls Part 13 Pg 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
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My story "Second chances" will finish in three parts. Here's the prologue to my next story. Feedback is welcome!

Prologue Pg 1
Part 1 Pg 3
Part 2 Pg 4
Part 3 Pg 6
Part 4 Pg 10
Part 5 Pg 11
Part 6 Pg 13
Part 7 Pg 15
Part 8 Pg 17
Part 9: Pg 19
Part 10: Pg 21
Part 11: Pg 22
Part 12: Pg 24
Part 13: Pg 26

Prologue
Kabir ran into the hospital. He saw Anita, Arman and Ronnie crying helplessly. Ananya was sitting slumped on the hospital bench.

Kabir: How's Kunnu now?

He looked at everyone beseechingly. But none of them spoke a word.

Finally he walked towards Ananya and placed his hand on her shoulder. Life suddenly entered her body. She stood up and looked at him.

Ananya: My baby is gone! You hear that?! He is gone. He was in so much pain. But all he kept asking for was his father. His father of course was too busy chasing professional glory.
You hear that Kabir Sharma?

Our son... correction... my son is gone. He is dead.

She slumped back onto the bench. Kabir broke down crying. A few minutes later he knelt down near Ananya and placed his hands on her lap.

Kabir; Ananya I...

She pushed his hand away.

Ananya: Along with my son, our relationship died too.

Get out from here.

Get out.

Ananya never came back to their home. She never spoke to him after that. He tried explaining himself, begged her for forgiveness but she didn't relent. She didn't want him to attend the funeral either. Thankfully Anita intervened and made sure that Kabir got a chance to bid farewell to his beloved son.

A week later Kabir received a msg with Ananya

"I am leaving this city with Ma and Arman. Don't try and find me. It's pointless."

Ananya was supposed to be Kabir's second shot at life. What happens when she leaves him and goes away?


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Diksha_1991 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Wonderful.. 👏👏👏
Nice start.. Plss continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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eagerly waiting for the first chapter. DO continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantabulous
Pl. Cont soon


Love and prayer
Yogini
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Amaaazing start!! 👏
Please do continue soon !😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Nice strt😳
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
this seems interesting
waiting for chapter one
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
once again n intresting story.
lovely start.
an emotional one.
update soon.
thnk u so much for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept dear.egarly waiting for next part.so sad kabir kiu nehi aya? anu kiu kabir se dur ja rahi hay.plz update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the prologue. ..Continue soon

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