KaYa OS - Flutterings Of a Naive Heart (08/07)

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Greetings! 🤗
I hope you have a happy read.
I would love to know your thoughts on this :)

-May



OS - Flutterings Of a Naive Heart

Standing at the very edge, she beheld the sight nature wanted her to perceive. Her face glowed with a sweet smile as she glanced back the journey she'd travelled so far.

A pleasurable journey indeed! A journey filled with its own sweet share of treacherous passes, roads running through thickets of hurdles, extreme conditions and heartrending emotions. Her life, like a cloudless blue sky over a summer day was adorned with mild breezes and flowers in full bloom. Like a colorful butterfly, she flitted across, spreading her wings majestically.

Yet, as she stood admiring the ethereal beauty of the vast waters, her dense curls were stubbornly played by the strong winds. Yes, he was one among those strong breezes that caught her unawares and ever so slightly touched her face with a calm recognition.

Her over anxiousness beckoned her to let go of all inhibitions and plunge deep into the vast blue-green seas of extreme surprises. She had done exactly that, following the melodies of her heart. Plunging into the fathomless territories of love and passion. A place full of dreams and happiness, experiencing the purest of joys without any fears.
A place so full of itself, the soft murmurs of the wind delighted her. She was basking herself in sugary sweetness of the feelings, as she breathed in the salty air.

Far away, the clouds were gathering, creeping stealthily over the sky. The obscure mass of dark grey clouds intimidating her, demanding her attention. They grew hazy and darkened progressively. Occasional flashes of lightening startled her, as if deliberately perturbing her innocent soul.

Her smile vanished.

Soon, they would envelope the beautiful blue sky over, speading out its gloom. They would thunder, rumble to shook the earth, winds would wreck havoc over the now calm waters of the sea, sending it into a tizzy of tides roaring and slashing through the rocks, applying its full force over the cliff. The rains would ravage the trees, terrorize the sea, alarmingly challenging its power.

Beneath, the waters crashed over the rocks, only to retreat, foaming.
The fury of clouds was imminent. She could sense the dark clouds, the impending cataclysm.

This too shall pass, she believed. The sea would attain its normalcy, its calmness shall prevail.
The tempest would cease and her breeze would return to calm her... guide her... protect her.

The man besides her was her life, her breeze. If she had to, she'd defend him, shield him from the viciousness of dark clouds.

She believed in him.

She believed in the naivety of her fluttering heart.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written!

I love how you merged the splendor of mother nature into a wonderful metaphor for Ananya's journey with Kabir and her internal emotions. Very well done! 👏

Please do write more!
You are very talented 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was wonderful. The choice of words and the scene depiction was awesome. Love it👏👏
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Amazing.
what a mind blowing merger of ananya's journey and nature !!
awsome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh wow ! wonder language, and the way you drew parallel from nature to kaya's situation is just fatastic...i love when u r in a pure writer's mood itz like works falling free from your mind and taking shelter in your writings...
good job darling !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Rinnie.

Beautifully written!

I love how you merged the splendor of mother nature into a wonderful metaphor for Ananya's journey with Kabir and her internal emotions. Very well done! 👏

Please do write more!
You are very talented 😊

Thank you very much Rinnie 😊
I was pondering over, to write something on KaYa, and suddenly it started raining. :) Thus, this short os was born .. It was like, nature urged me to write this! 😊
Edited by SuperChillz1 - 10 years ago
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Thank you very much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nicely explained about what might happen in future..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os!
Do write more! 😊

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