Anchaha Darr KaYa OS... - Page 2

Originally posted by: pd786

nice os

Thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: krazykaju

superb..
start was so poetic.
chaand badal and ananya.
ananya's wishes won over kabir's fears.
awsome.
the way u expressed was magical.
loved it.

Thanks dear for appreciation of little details...really obliged... 😳

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Originally posted by: sss97

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Loved the way Ananya had put forward her POV and last mein Kabir too understoond n gave in.. Nice to read an OS in hindi after a very long time

Thanks a lot dear... glad u loved it in hindi... 😃

Originally posted by: bawaswift

This looks like a masterpiece Rabzy..⭐️👏

Loved the emotional phase Ananya is going thru,,

And equally felt the fears Kabir is scared of.. !

Kabir ko bad experience hai first marriage se.. thats why he is not able to take another chance.. n cant afford to loose Ananya.. Well narrated.. !

But her determination n love made him surrender n now needs her help to overcome his fears..

Brilliant theme Rabzy.. loved the OS.. Anchaha darr hi tha jo Kabir aur Ananya ke beech mein aa gaya tha.. wo nikal gaya aur ab ek nayi shuruaat.. !😃

Loved the description of night and bright stars that Ananya looked all the night.. And the suraj ka madham hona sabse khoobsurat laga.. !!

Thanks for the OS,,, ! Keep it up..

I am missing your poetry😳😃

Such a detailed comment Bawa ... thanks a lot...ohh u noticed the night n morning description... 😳 you know me so well...i will write poetry ...even i dont post it...i ll pm u...if u r ok with it... 😊

Originally posted by: SeharishFatima

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Thanks a lot dear... 😊

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Such a detailed comment Bawa ... thanks a lot...ohh u noticed the night n morning description... 😳 you know me so well...i will write poetry ...even i dont post it...i ll pm u...if u r ok with it... 😊

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Never a problem if you send me one Rabzy..😊

But i want you to share your written fabulous here as well...😳But all as per your own wish.. i am ok with what way you want.. !

Thanks Bawa 😃

Awlaa...