A KaYa OS based on the latest spoiler

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys my laptop has crashed and I cant come online regularly for some days now.. however the latest spoiler abou Ananya proposing Kabir just gave me an idea to write something. Let me tell you that this is my absolutely first attempt at writing anything on IF, and I lack creativity as well. So I would like all of you, all the writers and readers of the Reporters forum to contribute to the story ..akele mujhse nahi hoga yeh ! This would be a fun weekend activity ad well ! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely idea!

I'm game! 😃

The new spoilers have definitely given me quite a few ideas too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Logged in from my cell..so sorry for the typos in advance.

Part 1:

Since the moment Nalini Verma has stepped into KKN, she has bonded surprisingly well with Ananya. though her words on love constantly reminded Ananya of Kabir, but by now she has learnt to put up a fake face in front of the world.. this relationship was not meant to be no matter how much she pined for him, that place was already taken by Tarini, and its pointless to make a mockery of herself and her sentiments by thinking about it anymore, or at least in office, she thought.


But unknown to her, Nalini Verma has managed to see her inside out in the time they spent talking together. Being the matured person she is, and with a profound knowledge of human emotions, she could easily read between the lines that Ananya spoke, even if she never mentioned any particular name.


Will be back aftr dinner. . Rinnie im not done yet with my part.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Facing problems in editing my post, so posting as part 2
Part 2:

The day of the novel's release arrived. Kabir has entrusted Ananya with looking over the entire event and she hasnt got a moment's rest since morning. It's already 5pm now and the official release is scheduled at 6pm. Ananya stopped to take a sip of water and her eyes involuntarily moved to Kabir's cabin. He's engrossed in last minute discussions with Khalid, Malvika and Nalini. She smiled to herself.. she saw Nalini explain something to him while he looked confused. "Nahh ! Enough of my staring at him.. get a grip Ananya".. she thought and went back to work.


10minutes later, she found Nalini searching for her.

Nalini: there you are! I need your help.

Ananya: yup sure. What's the matter?

Nalini: I have been thinking, how about enacting a scene from my novel in front of the audience? that would surely garner a lot of interest in the story!

Ananya: that's great ! But what do you want me to do?

Nalini: you will have to be the actress dear. And before you think of backing out, let me tell you that you have a very expressive face and lovely eyes and I just can't think of anyone else in your place.


Ananya gasped. " why me yaar?!" She thought.
Outwardly she nodded her head in agreement, "okay, tell me about the scene. "

"It's the scene where the herione speaks her heart out and confesses her love to the hero." Nalini stated.

Ananya's throat dried at her words. "Ab kya yehi baaki reh gaya tha?" .. she wondered. but there's no way she could back out now and she began rehearsing her lines.


Finally the clock struck 6pm. Nalini Verma officially inaugurated her novel "Mohabbatein Aur Bhi" with Kabir and Khalid by her side. After the initial interviews were done, Nalini stood up to address the group.

" my work have always received love from people all over the globe. But this time I have a little surprise planned for everyone. To give you a glimpse of the story, I have Ms. Ananya Kashyap and our very own EIC Mr. Kabir Sharma enact a small scene from the story. Please give them a huge round of applause".

The hall resounded with claps while the two people in question stood rooted on their spots.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3:
Ananya stood still, Nalini hadn't told her about this! She felt her head reeling, she couldn't even remember the lines. She stepped up onto the dais, her mind gone blank and her senses numbed. What she's going to say now?

Kabir's condition was no better. He already disapproved the idea when Nalini asked him to enact a scene from the novel in his cabin, but agreed finally out of courtesy. Little did he knew then that he would land in such an awkward situation.



To be continuef tomorrow. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay moner radio ami ektu khani update krte chai...jzt er porer scene ta... hope u dnt mnd...r pochondo na hole u can even update ur own scene
.. so here it goes...
Part 4...
Ananya kept staring at kabir and suddenly she felt completely oblivious of her surroundings...she didn't even know when she had started to speak...
"Kisi ne kya khoob kaha hai...ishq ek khata hai...ek gunaah hai...par behad khoobsoorat goonah...aj ye goonah humne bhi kar li...saza toh kismat degi humein, par humein har saza qubool hai...bus ek bar aapko hum aapni mohabbat ka izhar kar de...aapko paane ki duaa nahi karte bus apni aakhri duaaon mein apka naam rakhna chahte hai...aapni khuda se bus itni inayat hai ke bhale hi maut aa jae par mere mann mein aapko lekar kabhi koi shaq na aaye, mera pyaar aapke liye kabhi kam na par jaye...aap se kya shikayat? Hum toh aapne aap se sharminda hai...bus ek tasalli hai humein...ke aapse bus aap hi se beintehaan mohabbat karte hai..."
Nalini stared i. Disbelief...

These were not the dialogues she wrote...
But they were way much Better... direct from a heart to a heart...
Dil se...dil tak...
Someone...plss continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update


Pl cont soon

Love and prayer
Yogini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!! Awsum going!
Update soon! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is awesome.
You are very good at expressing i must say sachi..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Monar...
Wonderful OS...loved every part of it...waiting for you to continue...

@Kashish...

Sorry am at a loss for words to express what I felt when I read your dialogues...

Superb, awesom, wonderful would all be insufficient...so I guess you can understand what I'm trying to say...

Hope we get to see something similar in the show...

Thanks to both of you for making my weekend so interesting and happy...

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