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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Draco_Elt

lol originally the chp was named as "_When We Kiss & things go wrong" but what happened when I come back to post chapter. My phone acts like Shreya & doesn't saves things when required.phir 2 min mae I thought of this title.hae Manav ko miss kia! Next update os gonna be Manavlicious..omg maine sabko Manav phankha bana dia hai..xD



then all thanks to your phone for best title.. 😛 😉 .. actually main Manav pankha pehle se hu.. but i guess serial me Manav ke character ko itna justice nahin mila jo milna chahiye tha.. Manav's character was very strong but negative banake rakh diya use... now i am enjoying this Manav and all thanks to you.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrumi



then all thanks to your phone for best title.. 😛 😉 .. actually main Manav pankha pehle se hu.. but i guess serial me Manav ke character ko itna justice nahin mila jo milna chahiye tha.. Manav's character was very strong but negative banake rakh diya use... now i am enjoying this Manav and all thanks to you.. 😊

could you believe? They didn't even knowledge him at the last episode. I was waiting ki ab Kabir Manav ke liae ab kuch bolega ab ab ya ab! But noo *blank face* Kuch vhi nahi hua.
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Posted: 9 years ago
FINALLY ! Read it ! Yay !!! What a "kissa of kisses" ! Oh goodness ! That was really complicated. By the time I reached the end, I was really confused about kisne kis ko kiss kiya ! ;) Sadly, our "king of kisses", Manav bhai wasn't a part of this kissa.. Poor him !!! And Mr. "Newly turned teenager" Sharma, also didnt get a chance :( "High profile" hone ke side effects !
But the rest, kuchh marzi se aur kuchh bin marzi played the "comedy of kisses" !
Thanks for bringing Anurag back ! :)
Do continue soon !
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Draco_Elt

could you believe? They didn't even knowledge him at the last episode. I was waiting ki ab Kabir Manav ke liae ab kuch bolega ab ab ya ab! But noo *blank face* Kuch vhi nahi hua.


haan yar.. i was expecting one last scene between Kabir and Manav.. but NO... actually in serial.. They both shared one "hatke" chemistry.. can't define in words.. but i enjoyed each and every scene of Kabir and Manav.. agar woh dono bahot pehle ek ho jate toh Shreya ki kafi jyada band bajti...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Draco_Elt

uuuimaaa !Long haired beauty. huhahahi ,well I admit I've awfully long hairs & my brother still thinks I've house elfs who help me in washing & drying them..You've me Shiny! I'm Anya, she's my reflection lol. Secret (which isn't a secret anymore) *I had a verrry hottt teacher after 8th standard. He chose me as house captain & boom ! I started levitating at him like a bloody firefly to fire ,and crazy stuffs took place*Hehe ain't killing Ram this soon.What say will Ram do it?

Aww But he is right .. How the hell do u manage that mane of yours by yourself ? I end up chopping my hair because it gets so irritating !! But now planning to grow them !! Lets see how long will i stick to that resolution of mine !!
*Eyes pop out* Meri ma !!! When I was in my 8th grade the only reason I was behind my teachers was to get some extra notes or submit my homeworks because I was late !!! Niharika I am definitely taking a ticket to come and meet you I require some classes from you for sure !! * Winks and nudges elbow * crazy stuffs eh... Tell me.. Tell me... My Fb messenger is always online for you !!!
What I think .. Hmm.. I feel he will give in... Because I know the author... But I also feel he wont give in.. Because I know the author way to well !! LOL!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yes, Yes and Yes...*shouting and dancing around* just loved this chapter so much...
(I know I am super late to comment though but finally I am here for you my Darling Neha!)
What a beautiful chapter it was, Ram Mr.Ram your personality attracts me so much towards you, what a strong character he is and he fell for Richa, well Richa seriously you are a lucky woman:Mr. Manav "Hottie" Gupta is your hubby and Ram ended up kissing you...just WOW😆 But poor Ram feeling so bad for him, Richa picked Manav over him but that's completely fine...It's Richa's choice(waise bhi Manav ko chidna kaun chahega) but what the hell Maya is trying to seduce Ram?? Lol eagerly waiting for Ram's reaction...I am very excited to know what's gonna happen next?

Ananya needs Kabir, it's Kanik's death anniversary tomorrow, I am glad Kabir is there by her side, nothing will go wrong Kabir is there...KaYa are so cute seriously and loved Sudhir-Kabir conversation...yaar Daughters are born with superpowers is so true!!! waise I wanna confess: I am missing Manav so much from this update...and Sanjh climbed on Kabir's head...Aww Sanjh is so sweet, now I am imagining every single scene on Sanjh Bajapi and man! he is looking sooo adorable doing that!! Thank you so much for making Anurag's entry again...was missing this boy too...Anya and Rivan these two have their own beautiful chemistry together...I am sure both are going to impress me to the fullest...and Rivan kissed Rahila and in return Anya kissed Arjun Sir...what a perfect revenge!!!😉

Neha you are just wonderful, Do i need to say it that I am a huge fan of your writing, you already knows it... *sighs* I am coming back from the World of Falling Slowly...whenever I read your update I always sink in the world of falling slowly...thank you for making this world Neha...
Thanks for the PM and one more thing...I love you so much...muaaahh❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Draco_Elt

Thank you so much ! BTW your name pls 😃Such huge praises.*looks at you like lost puppy*


I m divya
U deserve all that praises dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
"It's Rivan's hoodie Bahiya. I wear his hoodies in extreme winters" Anya huffed as it was matter of fact. She had started digging Rivan's wardrobe since they were eleven
Always snatching the Batman or Joker print he had. "Not going away from the topic. Anya I didn't kiss Rahila,we're discussing what song are we going to play in fest and then she was throwing me hints here & there" Rivan clarified, his voice Stern momentarily reminding Anurag of Manav. "Oh yes and you picked up those hints with pleasures and said 'Hey let's hook up. Kiss me & tell what did I had in breakfast" Anya butted,her voice now attracting the attentions of staff sitting at the corner. "Will you listen?" Rivan shouted agitated at the lack of support he was receiving.
"I didn't kiss her. Even if I did, what's that is bothering you Ms.Sharma? You didn't even remember it's my birthday after being my best bloody friend. I waited till four in the morning for your call ,message anything something but you didn't had time for me. But, Anurag she vaguely remembered to return Arjun Sir his phone. She remembered to meet him here today for music band selection even if he told us same 1 week ago" Rivan breathed after saying everything at one stretch. "Mr. Rivan Gupta" A voice caught Anya attention as Anurag,Rivan s she wiped the flow of tears from her face.
Not seeing where she was heading to,Anya ran with speed in the corridors. 'Firstly, he had audacity to kiss a bitch,and then turn points me. ' she thought to herself and seconds later was on floor . "You ass. Can't you see & walk " she rubbed her head where it hurt her and then immediately shuttled her mouth,"So sorry Arjun Sir. I wasn't knowing where I was going" she said,pulling the hoodie down. "Anyone with brains could get that" Arjun offered his hand to her and pulled her on feet. "I saw you running in corridors like you've spotted a ghost. Problem ?" Arjun smiled,'love of your life' Rivan's voice rang up in Anya's head and her anger rang up. "Nothing Sir" she stoned face, turned around. "Well ! Nothing means something. You've to give your appearance round for band in front of six of us teachers and such a sour mood wouldn't either help to sing " Arjun turned her around to face him by pulling her elbow. "You want to help?" Anya spoke through her gritted teeth, she could even get barred for the thought. "Yes . Genuinely" Arjun spoke, unconsciously playing with his hairs. "Then help" hardly had words escaped her mouth ,and she pressed Arjun against her, simultaneously pulling him in the janitor room in front. "That's inappropriate Miss Anya. Step aside" Arjun said,gasping at the closeness. "f**k rationality for a minute. " Anya breathed and locked her lips with his,drawing circles at the back of his hairs with her fingers. Stiffened Arjun gave it up to Anya,when she pulled his neck and both of them kissed for full one minutes. "f**k" Arjun muttered at the disgraceful state of his hairs & bolted out the door. Anya adjusting her jumper that was bit out of place tried to decide a excuse to come up to Arjun later on for her boldness. Slowly walking out the small spaced room ,she spotted Rivan lazily dancing and humming song to himself. "Rivan" she didn't knew why she shouted & ran towards him. "Hey hey hey! Why you crying idiot. I didn't mean anything seriously" Rivan whispered in Anya's ear as he collected her in her arms. "I too was walking behind Rivan,Anya .All you noticed to hug was him. I feel like Ron between Harry Potter & Ginny Weaselly. " Anurag commented slight astonished at the hugging figures. "Stop sobbing YaYa. " Rivan pulled her into a hug again,as they started to walk towards Room No 5,for appearance test.
'How am I going to face Arjun sir ever again? How am I going to tell Rivan about it? What will someone say if they come to know about what I did 15 mins earlier' Anya asked herself as they entered the room.
Well welcome to the hormonal world of Teenage everyone.

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Kabir snaked his arms around Ananya as she stood up to go to Manav's cabin. "Sir" Ananya exclaimed, as he pulled her closer. The chances of them being caught by any other staff were high but Kabir wanted to dip his hands in the sparkling paint of romance. "I feel like a teenager again" He mumbled breathing against her neck and pulled aside the hairs that came in between his lips & her flesh. "And it's Kabir. " He further said as Ananya turned around lightly kissing his collar bone"By teenage I remembered, You've a teenage daughter too. " ,"Shite ! I didn't had a talk with her since Seher's accident. 3 days" Kabir threw back his head in disappointment and Ananya pulled his cheek "Check on her K.." she stopped midway ,his name not rolling out of her tongue. Kabir raised an eyebrow in amusement as he caught Ananya hesitant with his name,"K.A.B.I.R" Ananya flushed after saying his name consciously and ran out of the cabin making Kabir chuckle and go back to his work.


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"Ram" Richa tried stopping Ram from walking towards his car but he was admen on not sharing a word with the Lady. "Go away Richa. Walk away, that's what you did 7 years back. " Ram said searching for his car keys but in the anger blubbering in his veins had made his lose control over actions. "Ram try to understand" Richa said touching his arm again.
"I completely understand Mrs Gupta. l do" Ram said jerking his hand & tripping down the stairs and landed with a loud thud on ground floor of parking. Richa ran behind him and helping him stand up she said "Ram please. I love him" . With wobbling leg and fizzy vision, Ram stood up and Richa immediately went pale when she saw blood oozing from his chin. Pulling folded piece of cloth from his suit jacket,Richa dappled it on the gash. "You love him, everyone knows that. You choose him over me seven years ago. You walked over my heart Richa ! And you won't ever understand what I lost" Ram said finally giving up & sulked on floor. Not really listening to what Ram was talking about, she continued nursing his gash. "I lost my ability to love again. I still remember you & me strolling in California streets at 2Am for ice cream " Ram smiled over the passage of memory. Richa wasn't at all focused on whatever things Ram was saying to hear. Her main attention was on his gash which had now stopped oozing blood. Ram blamed his fall from stairs for the step he took next. Gently holding out her hand in his ,he bent down to Richa's face level & kissed her lightly.
SLAP
A loud echo of smack across his face was echoing in the parking. "I accept the help you are ready to offer us.But, Mr.Ram Bhardwaj don't ever show me your face again. " Richa pulled his collar and spoke right into his ears. "I...I'm ..Sorry" He mumbled, had he just kissed her? HER ,Wife of Business Executive of KKN Manav Gupta "I might Sound like my husband, but keep your sorry ass saved for yourself. " Richa shouted,whipping her lips with the selves of her shirt. "I said I'm f**king sorry Richa. I'm a human with needs & desires if it has escaped your notice. Yes,My men will be there to guard you & your family. But when I die please tell Manav that I'll propose you,before him and won't get late by two minutes to sweep you off your feet in next birth. This slap will always remind me what I was & I am. I was a second man to you even when you spent 5 months of your first pregnancy with me. I was second man ever. Good luck " Ram left without looking back.


Somewhere 1 km away from the parking lot. In the light rain that treated Delhi out of blue,someone's feet tripped over a cobble he missed seeing on the road & he fell,twisting his ankle & he cried out,glimmers of tear streaking from his Hazel eyes "I'll be the second man ever & ever & forever" he whispered to himself before he heard a loud screeching of brake sounds and his head banging into something hard.


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"YaYa " Sanjh climbed on Kabir's head as Kabir tried handling out his son & daughter on call simultaneously . "Sanjh how's he?" Anya meekly spoke,as she wrapped her idle hand around Rivan's waist. "He's.. Sanjh stop climbing my god damned head. YaYa he's getting naughty by each passing day" Kabir spoke,trapping Sanjh between his left arm as the kid pouted in defeat & looked at Anita for some rescue. "Traits of Sharma heritage" Anya spoke,not letting Rivan stand up. "You fine YaYa?!" Kabir questioned her,"School taking a troll on me Papa. I still don't know how to react to Seher bear accident. It hurts to know I was being kept out of it,and what about you & mom? Am I without a mother ?" Anya felt Arjun Sir watching her from the backstage as she controlled her tears & Rivan checked nail paint on her fingers. "YaYa. I & Shreya!" Kabir felt at complete loss of words. He had never thought this,the whole divorce reveal thing with Anya. And now there he was torn at the sad tone of mention of mother by his closet kid. "It's okay Papa. Bye will talk later,I love you ." Saying so Kabir heard the clicking of call dismal & he looked at Sanjh who was still in his arms. "Dad Kay?" Sanjh sensing the dullness in room suddenly said." Super Kay!" Kabir ruffled his hairs & set him on floor watching him run off with speed ,uttering vrooom vrooom with each turns he took.
"You don't seem fine Son" Sudhir said, sitting next to Kabir. "Breaking headlines are much easier than daughters" Kabir exclaimed as he saw Ananya walking down with Seher's sleepy head bobbing side ways. "I second that Son! Daughters are born with superpowers to understand their Fathers even without words. I guess Anya didn't wanted to talk to you cause she knows talking about the Shreya & whole divorce thing would hurt you" Sudhir took Seher from Ananya ,"Aha ! Imagine World with you all alpha males. A world without women would probably be heaven like angels" Anita retorted grinning at her husband . "Don't flatter yourselves Ladies! Demon was once God's favorite Angel" Sudhir nudged his wife with finger on her cheeks and Anita gave in to the conversation. Sudhir Kashyap was always known was his closing one liners. "Kabir " Ananya spoke, hesitant again on addressing him by his formal name in front of her parents. "Yeah!" Kabir immediately answered slightly amused by Kashyap's banters,now that he knew where Ananya gave it back to him with witty remarks. "I was going out for a coffee, Care to drop me?" Ananya straightened the front of her pullover & sighed,hoping that Kabir caught the hint of just being them out for coffee. "Sure. " Kabir catching the fly in air immediately honked out of the door quietly biding bye to everyone and taking Ananya along.

"I can't believe it. Shreya came back at 2 AM ? And what did you do alone?" Ananya said over their third round of steaming coffee. "I wasn't alone Ananya. I'd my Loneliness with me. LOL do I sound like Amitabh of Silsila 'Mai aur meri tanhi" ? " Kabir rubbed his stubble that had overgrown and ordered himself Tea. "With that look No ! You look like , Bruce Wayne from Dark Knight Rises" Ananya reached out for Kabir's hand & entwined it with her's smoothly under the table. To say Kabir wasn't surprised by her step was an understatement,he was amazed at how much that Ananya made him feel wanted in just 24 hours of their relationship. He was amazed at how beautifully she held up conversations with him over something as mundane as sipping of coffee. "Bruce Wayne. " Suddenly Ananya froze at her spot & Kabir clutched her hand in arc reflex as they saw Shravan walking up to them. "Bruce Wayne was dang lucky. He got to romance Harvey Dent's Girlfriend. " He said sitting down in front of them. "Why do you come here?" Kabir simply asked, resisting himself not to create any scene further. "And did you buy this caf Mr.Sharma? No you didn't so better keep your mouth locked. I come here to see her" Shravan said pointing at Ananya. "You're certainly not unwelcomed." Kabir said, his voice lacing with hate that could give The Dark Lord a run for role. " Drop it low Sharma ! Ananya Tomorrow is Kanik'" He stopped and looked at her . Thier eyes locked & next Ananya knew was that she hided her face in Kabir's sweatshirt. "It's Kanik's third death anniversary" Shravan spoke,with a lump in his throat. "You reek Shravan!" Kabir draped a hand around Ananya in comfort. "f**k you Kabir. I'm trying to hold up a conversation with Ananya. Don't act like her boyfriend" Shravan said,his eyes bloodshot red. "We've conservation with people who are in bloody state to hold it up. Not with drunkards" Kabir throwing money on the table, carefully helped Ananya out. "Please f**king listen me Ananya. I'll be waiting for you." Shravan shouted


"He had his eyes Kabir. His eyes" Ananya hugged Kabir as soon as they were out of seen sight. Not knowing what to do ,he simply hugged her & both of them started walking down the dark pavement. A light tone of "Tornado" still being audible in the street.

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"Shravan." Maya tried talking to her fiance for tenth time. "f**king Hell May! Get lost" Shravan gulping down the whiskey at late 1AM shouted at her. "You promised me to accompany me in Vevo fashion show. And now you're backing off,seriously what would my peers think of me?" Maya,a charming Lady in her mid twenties shouted back. "Oh my God! What will poor Maya show off to her friends now. Holy Lord! I don't care. Lift your ass turn around leave " Shravan said loosening up his shirt. Stamping her boots on the floor Maya was walking down the stairs when she spotted her fiance's elder brother. "Heyo Ram!" she said & got ignored. Limping to the foyer Ram was getting ready to slam the door shut when he heard high intakes of breathe behind him. "Oh my God Ram. What's that on your head? And leg? Had you had a accident" touching the bandage on his head Maya purred. "What you want" Ram stoically asked knowing that his brother was drinking mountains above. "You" Without any further warning Maya blocked him on the wall,he couldn't even throw her across & walk out. Her hands instantly went up to the his dark mop of hairs and next their bodies were grinding each other. Technically, Maya was grinding herself on Ram. Soon her hands went down his pants


Should Ram or will Ram? Will Ram loose it to Maya's sexual escapade.


Watch it out.[/B]

Kindly ignore typos. Posting at IF with cellphone is such a mid finger task I tell you. Enjoy & Don't forget to comment (Silent readers, Jesus is watching. )
And lastly, Wohooo ! That was such a complex chapter ,I realised. Before you grab my collar for complexity issues & twisting few character in a 360 flip. Let me run pls.

*hoots for self*

*runs like road runner*

*Beep beep*
Bye.
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was just awesome Niharika.I really loved this

I would really like to thank library, Wikipedia (harsh) for telling me about tis one


sorry the previous one post was by mistake 😊
Edited by ashviklyra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

FINALLY ! Read it ! Yay !!! What a "kissa of kisses" ! Oh goodness ! That was really complicated. By the time I reached the end, I was really confused about kisne kis ko kiss kiya ! ;) Sadly, our "king of kisses", Manav bhai wasn't a part of this kissa.. Poor him !!! And Mr. "Newly turned teenager" Sharma, also didnt get a chance :( "High profile" hone ke side effects !

But the rest, kuchh marzi se aur kuchh bin marzi played the "comedy of kisses" !
Thanks for bringing Anurag back ! :)
Do continue soon !

My mission of confusing people in this part got accomplished. dances like Shinchan* Kabir is all above this kiss drama. Vo high profile cheezae karta ! yup will update soon.

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