KAYA OS- U R MINE.....

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U R MINE...

she looked pretty in her pink off shoulder gown which he had gifted her thinking abt him and what exactly can his surprise be she combs her hair and simply clips it with a pin, she likes it that way. imagining what he must be wearing, his white shirt and black blazer were something she had fallen for. she wore her favorite heels along with the gown it matched well and then left her room to know exactly where he was, what was he doing and what was he upto??? she walked the corridor and it was dim lit place, she felt alone and awkward but she walked longing to meet him and finally reached the room where he had ask her to come but as soon as she entered she felt a bit scared seeing it completely dark and as she was abt to turn her gown got in to her heels and she slipped... opening one of her eye which were both tightly shut she found herself in the safest place she could ever think off- his strong arms which always promised to protect her, care for her and love her. you are safe, m der he said in a soft and lovable tone. safe but i got scared she says making herself stand. m sorry he said again as he held her hand to take her inside the room. it was dark and darkness always scared her but the warmth of his palms was more than enough to comfort her but all of a sudden his hand slipped out of hers and she was confused!!! I have a surprise he whispered in her ear and then she realized she was standing alone but after a few moments of feeling the soothing music & light fragrance of fresh roses and lilies what she saw was one candle that lit after the other continuously and above each one were her photographs- morning fresh terrace wala face,the banging my head in books face, the out of the kitchen face, the storeroom wala not so clean face, the occasionally eye liner wala face, the regular ice cream customer wala face, the dresses trial and error face, the vegetable vendor se bargaining wala face and many other pictures which she herself did not know of when he clicked them! I love her he said which she was delighted to hear once again and then he comes towards holding her hand he takes her to the very well set dining table where were served all her favourite dishes along with his choice of some handpicked wine. she was overwhelmed to see that a hardcore Punjabi had actually sacrificed his favorite butter chicken and tandoori naan for having a light meal with a light hearted conversation with her over dinner. how is the surprise he asked and what was going on in her mind was that all of it was perfect- perfect lighting, perfect music, perfect food with an extremely perfect person. he held her hand and took her for a dance. this is special she said as she blushed rosy pink, the colour very much similar to her gown. but now he was busy unpinning her hair, this is better he said as his voice magnetized her. she danced with him enjoying the moment as his dark chocolaty brown eyes studied what her round almond shaped eyes tried to convey. all this was a big surprise for her but what astonished her was that how he knelt down then bowed down in front of her taking his hand into hers and putting a solitaire on her wedding finger. LETS GET MARRIED he said with his so charismatic eyes longing to listen to the already known answer. tears rolled down her eyes as she heard his three words, this was something she was knowing, she knew how much he loved very much, she knew that they were gonna get married- her dream which will come true someday but what she felt now was something no less than a fairytale with her prince charming. do I deserve all this were her words as he embraced her. you do, u deserve all my attention, my love my care, my affection, my warmth, my consideration and even my envy because I will never desire to share u with anyone else, all my insecurities because my biggest fear is that I might lose u which I never want to happen because I LOVE U and U ARE MINE!!!! a thank u was her response as tears continuously flowed down her eyes when she buried her head into his chest!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
This is amazing
Wedding Proposal..
Quite a interesting idea

You write is so beautifully...
I want to comment long
But doing some other stuff too.

But in last, i want to say that this is mind blowing

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written!!
Its amazing..so romantic! 😳
loved it 😊

-Amber-
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Posted: 10 years ago
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a perfect os as everything was soo perfect.!
such a romace filled peice.
amazing marriage proposal.
and the different picture's idea was fabulous.
marvellous.
beautiful os.
Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os
beautifully written
i was into it till the end
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KaYa_licious

This is amazing

Wedding Proposal..
Quite a interesting idea
thank u sanya😊

You write is so beautifully...
I want to comment long
But doing some other stuff too.
m happy that u took out time to read it😊

But in last, i want to say that this is mind blowing
yeah another compliment😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: a.patel

Beautifully written!!
Its amazing..so romantic! 😳
loved it 😊

-Amber-


thank u so much😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: krazykaju

a perfect os as everything was soo perfect.!
such a romace filled peice.
amazing marriage proposal.
and the different picture's idea was fabulous.
marvellous.
beautiful os.


thank u so much for such kind compliments😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pd786

lovely os

beautifully written
i was into it till the end


it was my pleasure, thank u so much😊

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