OS:I care because...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kabir was reading the book that Ananya had gifted him last week. He marvelled at the place she had managed to make for herself in his life. She had started off as his budbudati reporter, had then become his friend. In time she had become his closest friend and now she was an indispensable part of my life. He hesitated to give his feelings for her a name. But she was the most important person in his life.
Ananya stormed into his apartment. He had never seen her this angry.

Ananya: How dare you Kabir Sharma!

Kabir: What happened Ananya

She threw papers on his face. These papers were the documents investigating her father;s murder.

Kabir (sternly): How did you get your hands on these? You continued investigating your father's case after I

Ananya: After you lied to me and told me that he had committed suicide. You knew all along that my father's death was a cold blooded murder which had been made to look like a suicide.

The pharma mafia murdered him and you lied to! I am going to get justice for my father. I am going to destroy these people.

Kabir: Are you crazy? Do you know how danger this is? The nexus includes politcians, bureaucrats, police, businessmen. Everyone. Your father isnt the only one they murdered. I am so sorry that I lied to you. But I had to protect you.

Ananya: Protect me?! Who asked you to protect me? Who asked you to take the decisions of my life? Who??!! Don't you always say that you respect everyone's right to make decisions for themselves? Then why?

He had asked himself these questions thousands of times. As she stood shouting and crying in front of him, the answer finally became clear to him.

Ananya: What was the worst that could have happened if I had pursued them? They would have killed me right? I wouldn't have minded such a death... Not..

Kabir: SHUT UP ANANYA. Not one more word. How can you speak of death so casuaully?!

Ananya. It's my life. How do you care?

Kabir: I care, I care because my day isn't complete without talking to you and teasing. I care because i can do anything to bring a smile on your face. I care because it kills me to see you pain.

I care because I am in love with you.

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TurnThePage thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice...but Ananya ki jawaab bhi de dete 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You...
I'm so disappointed!!
You always write such beautiful pieces and meaningful posts..
Yet, till date, you never replied to me. I have asked so many times about what to call you, that you are such a beautiful and creative writer, that...
*huffs*
*calms herself*
I'm sorry. I'm really sorry for that above. Apparently, ur OS vali Ananya went inside me and I blurted out everything which I usually don't.
But I guess this explains that I really liked this Os. It was short, sweet and meaningful. I was delighted to see Ananya in Kabir's apartment. But that spark between them was oh m g!
But the way this ended, wow. When Kabir just stood up and scolded her again. (Scolding of different types is KaYa trademark, isn't it!) that was so stunning yet warming. And when he actually speaks out his heart in the end, it was soo o o o beautiful :*
We can die here for Ananya's response to this, but I guess, some things are better unsaid...left to imagination ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum!! But Ananya ka jawab?? :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is very well written.
Ananya has to think of the family dependent on her before taking a drastic step.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Short yet effective. Great work :)
Do write more
Sagi97 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice post. And the nice setting, thats what exactly is going to happen *fangirl dreaming*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one ... more or less like castle and beckett scene when she comes to know that castle had deal with guys regarding her mothers investigation and told her about his feelings.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ananya ka jawab bhi de dete
awesome os
loved the way you ended it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love and prayer
Yogini

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