Kaya SS : Beneath It All.. Ch2-3 Pg 15- 15/6

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kanika

@kank_dah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

great chapter 1.waiting for the story to unfold

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Ibushraa

@Ibushraa

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Fabulous write up...please send me ur blog link. .

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Thanks for the PMs Avantika =D

Have commented on blog.

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Ananya and her ex-fiance, that was shocking!!
So, it was the reason for her leaving. Was she going to marry him because of her father?
Did Kabir propose her at the same time and she left from there?
Maybe I'll get to connect the dots on the next update.
But whatever may have been the reason, this Akshay seemed to have been in the picture.
Everybody is happy with her return.She got her friends back and now it's turn for a certain someone to be fine too.
Well, that was great.
Looking forward to more.
Update soonish.

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SumuDaEscapist

@SumuDaEscapist

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Wow Dii... I'm definitely in for this! plz mujhe pm bhejiyega... Its still too early, but I don't know somehow I feel the tone is similar to TLIR, I just felt... dekhte hai... You can portray situations and Emotions so well... Love u

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Avantika my poppet,

Why do you always write such beautiful, tense, near dark stuff, full of anguished characters whose sorrows and angers bubble just below the surface? You have transformed even the bubbly Ananya into a tensely wound up creature, and as for your Devdas of a hero, his saving grace is that he reached for the water bottle, not the whisky!😉 I am always petitioning you to attempt a sunny, uncomplicated love story, but you never oblige!😉 And here I am, having stopped watching Reporters long ago. Anyhow, as I said, you write all this gloomy stuff so well that I always end up swallowing my complaints!

There are, invariably, so many lines I love in any of your chapters, and here an couple of examples would be:

He realised he wanted to harvest a little of her spirit, something pure and untainted by the worldly malice and apply it like a balm to his fractured heart.. And then

She was his missing piece, the one people write songs and books about, the one that makes people jump off the bridge or scream at the top of their lungs. He was sure of it..

The missing piece that completes the lover, that is the most ancient definition of the chosen other, of le grand amour, as the French would put it. The thing that inspires deewaangee, the obsessive quest for that missing other.

But why the "moth to the flame" simile? Hum sab jaante hain ki parwane ka kya haal hota hai!

I would write more, but I am in constant pain these days with my knee that is healing at such a slow pace that it is like watching the grass grow. So I shall call a halt here, my dear. Don't mind, please!

Shyamala Aunty

Chapter 3

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RajeshwariR

@RajeshwariR

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Amazing Avantika, really very gripping and cant wait to read about their reunion.
the way u hv described, I can visualize it so well. I mean its just unfolding before my eyes.
so much of passion between KaYa, its amazing the way u have portrayed it.
I am so curious to know what really happened? y did Ananya run away to London? for 4 years, she stayed away from him. I cant imagine how they both stayed away from each other fr so long when they r so much in love.

Cant help but compare to whats happening in the show now, Kabir trying to run away from his past and in ur story Ananya running away from the past.

Can u pls PM me when u write the next update? eagerly waiting for it :)

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ssss97

@ssss97

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Please can u send me the link of ur blog?

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#139

a cliff hanger. But its totally a beautiful updates. Kaya is so intense but you have made them all the more enticing. Its outstanding..

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#140

awesome update
im very confused abt ananya 😕
why she runaway from kabir
now suddenly she came back
didn't even said anything to kabir just left
now kabir got angry hurt frustration confusion 😕
I like tarini she know abt kabir everything & always there for him 🤗
now what abt that akshay chapter?
ananya was going to marry him with that jerk 🤪
seriously that akshay was really disgusting jerk pig 😡
how dare he talk abt kaya like that 😡
continue soon

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