Kaya SS : Beneath It All.. Ch2-3 Pg 15- 15/6

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nikki-73

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Wow

no other words to describe it..

it was absolutely amazing..

So the sherni is back home..

expecting a lo of sparks to fly between them...

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sanswons

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

I am loving every bit of your short story. Could u send me the updates?

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nikki-73

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Just finished reading all three parts..

Ur amazing..

i almost felt like i was watching all of these happening...didnt feel like i was just reading it..

thank u for writing such an amazin story 👍🏼

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sonyjknum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Simply awesome

I dont know why n

But reading Kabir's part I imagine RK all along

Waiting for their confrontation

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Perfection perfection perfection.

I loved this...

I am still speechless the way you just showed their inner turmoil and emotions was exceptional.

I loved this n want to read more work of yours.

Pm me please.

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Chitra RaviKiran

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

The confusion is unraveling in a pretty beautiful way. So Kabir wasn't aware of Ananya's feelings for him? Or was Ananya forced to get engaged to Akshay? Tarini is a strong sounding board to Kabir. I just hope she helps their re union

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ria.2710

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

So much suspense and only one question everyone dat is why Ananya left???? Great going yaar..update soon...

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fan.matsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

G8 story Avantika... Very gripping... Pls update soon

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punremgel98

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Omg! Omg!! This is soo good! I just finished reading all the three chapters & i have fallen in love! This is soo good! I loved the last part especially when ananya stood up to Akshay! The best part of your writing is that the details and the intensity with which you write makes anyone connect to the story. When you mentioned KaYas pain, it was though i myself felt the pain! Please PM when u update! Please pleaseee