##THOUGHTS4##[completed!!!pg44] - Page 14

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Posted: 20 years ago
well anushka darling dont be too sure i can break hopes as soon as i create it 😉 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
priyanka...this is too much....u still havent disclosed the suspense....who is it?? YUVI...or have u gotten yuvi and ashi married off and this is their son or something...come on pri...out with it now.....
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: rikzik

dhamki eh!i was planning to gift this fic to u but u seem to be spoiling my little surprise.😭coming out of it as for ur indication of the hair coming up and down....well babes..........y can't it be varun??😆😉neways ......wait and watch................read my clues i have left behind and guess.

omg......the fic as a gift to me.....thats soooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeet......and I did send the pics to u even b4 u posted this message......so now u can gift the fic to me 😉......and I am sure u know that the most precious gift u could ever give me is by saying that the guy is yuvi

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Posted: 20 years ago
k asita i am posting it and lamina yaar call me rikz its all rite but not pri 😆 it is such a dumb shortform to my name. 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
sorry i meant ashita in the abive post 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
i meant above in the above post.seems like i am too sleepy to making so many spelling mistakes
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Posted: 20 years ago
k.guys here enough of beating around the bush i think...............here i go and lamina see for urself who it is.there is no generation leap in my story. 😉



the greater the obstacle the more the glory in overcoming it.
each of us have a fire in our hearts for something.rt now it was his aim to hit the winning goal and keep that fire lit.in a flash he saw a face at quite a distance but his eyes could spot his at any corner of the universe."shut up!and concentrate on ur game u looser."his mind seemed to tell him.his full concentration back on the goal post now.
"sid,defend don't allow them to hound him"said nakool.
15......................14....................13............ ...............................12...............

the time was ticking..............
""the bird of time has but a little way
TO FLUTTER AND THE BIRD IS ON THE WING"but to the spread of the spectators each second seemed like an hour.the cooling effect of the rain not making any difference as they all were sweating.come on!come on!

"come on varun"mp prayed.......
"aman i know u can hold there"thought vrinda.
"ranveer puhlease tia ke liye apne captain aur team ko jitaao"tia prayed.
"come on nakool.my hero"meher thought..........

mp:ashi!come on cheer up.wts rong with u?y r u so mum?it's our school team yaar and they require the energy from us.come on lets cheer them"
vrinda:mp.samjha karo yaar.ashi ki position....uski school ek team mein toh ..........ummmmmm and the well understood rite?
mp:well!well wt a sticky position u r in i should say.teased mp.

ashi failed to react.she was staring at the way he was playing.wunnerful she thought.he looked all the more cute with his hair frolicking up and down.........the sweaty look made him appear more smart.......the red t-shirt was worn by all the team members but he looked smarter than everyone.he looks cute in nething she thought;but especially red.i remember him telling me..........................
"ashi.sweetheart.do u know y i am selecting red?
kyon?she had asked..............
well one thing is it always reminds me of ur red hair........he said admiring and smiling at her
"pulling my leg eh! "she asked
"well no darling seriously.this colour suits u more than neone i knowand this will always remind me of u of our love...........well it is other case that i always want to be with u.............
"duh uh!wt do u think i want?and seems like my lover is getting romantic eh!"she said looking at him with her naughty eyes..........and sending him signals....................."well y not "he said and their lips locked.......................

the entire scene came and went as a flash in her mind.as fast as a blink of the eye........well yuvi i know u can do it...come on!she thought............

"GOAL"he yelled....all the tigers roared together in unison.yuvi trying to ease his brathing.........yes i have done it!he said..................he ran like a wild tiger removing his shirt and kissing the sweaty drenched shirt and roared yeh!with all his teammates crowding around him and lifting the hero of todays match.........lifting him up and cheering him.............their joy knew no bounds....this win meant a lot................
"this is for u ashi.u wanted me to do something on my own will.....something which my heart tells me to do.......and here is something for u........."he closed his eyes and whispered to himself..............kissing the trophy held in his hand..........and smiling at it with pride..........and a speacial spark in his eyes............... 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
well ashita tell me how u liked ur kinda open gift eh! 😉 this fan fic is specially dedicated to my if forum friend ashita who is one of the biggest yuvi ashi fan i have seen after myself 😉 and to all other yuvi ashi lovers..........man am sounding out of place amn't i?
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Posted: 20 years ago
well guys the story is not over.............k.
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Posted: 20 years ago
thanx sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mcuh priyanka.....ur such a darling........but as I said I gotta go......otherwise my mom will kill me......will read ur continuation tommorow

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