no fear 2 death wen ay 2gather, ay 1 shot

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Posted: 18 years ago
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mood is really in d core of bad 2day... so thought 2 kinda relief myself by writting a stupid imagined fic..

ashi-OMGGG!! uvvvv!!!!! yahan se bachnaa mushkil hai....

ashi's hand shivering....

uv- is breathing fast in fear....... ashi ab???????!!

both'r giving full strenth 2 b stucked on d rock. wot actually happened dat both were on a bet dat who'd reach in d Mauria's near situated hill first.. uv lost his balance of d cycle n went reached 2 d dead end of d road.. he somehow survived by grabbing an unshaped rock stucked wid d hill.. ashi was like soo lost wot 2 do n so she went 2 pull uv back n wa happend by a slip she was almost falling frm d hill n uv somehow managed 2 catch her 1 hand, her hand was going sliped soon by every moments.... n our ashi tried 2 grab another piece of rock stucking wid d hill n she finally managed 2 grab dat n stuck dere.. d hill is 2 high n under dere's nothing buh rock hard surface.. they could've desided 2 jump if dere were water under buh it's rock hard surface.. no way 2 get outta situation!! now...................

ashi- how'll we get ova frm here!! GOSHH ma hand is getting slipped!!!

uv was suiting more seing ashi's hand wasn't having enough strenth anymore 2 stay dere by grabing d rock..

uv- ashi sweetat plzz keep grabing dat rock.. i'll think something.

ashi- psycho.. soch ne ke lie brain pa muscles hona chahiye body par nehi.😆

uv- ashi plzz this is no time 4 joke..

uv noticed n seemed dat ashi was gonna slip right now, she's trying hard 2 cum up, not actually working..

uv- aashiii..

ashi- uv, can't keep grabing for 1 more sec aaaaaargh.

ashii sliping sliping...... !!! she sliped frm d rock!!!!

uv somehow caugh her weist b4 she sliped.. phew.. trying rock hard 2 keep himself n her steedy dere..... buh 1 can't hav dat much strenth.. uv lost his power now, wasn't feeling enough strenth 2 keep graabing d rock..

uv- as.. sh-..- shiii..

called her wid hard try n came much closer 2 her..

uv- ashi we gotta leave d world now i guess..

ashi- ya uv, i know.

seemed she still nt aware.. she couldn't believe life'd giv her so lil time 2 live!!

uv- so a last hug?😳

uv first kissed her n so she did.. den by really hard emotion he tried 2 hug her..😳😳 n caught 1 of her hand tightlyy.. no more strenth then left in any of them 2 b sucked wid d hill rock by grabing..

ashi- uv ready?

uv- ya, 4..3.. 2.. 2 an a hulf.. quarter 1... 1................

both stared at each other 4 a very lil moment n..........

(left d rock thy were gabing.....) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA... ....................................... "$@#**>>>>.....DHARUM!!!!!!..*#$$ *>>........##*********..........

afta 4 hours........ ashi got her sense back!!!!!!😛 she got up wid so much pain at leg n head.... she grabed her head 4 so much pain..

ashi- AAAAAHh...... HUH??????!!!!!!!

something strange happend!! she found herself kinda far away frm d hill frm where she n uv've fallen wen she should b layed near 2 d hill's ground!!

n here uv also get's his sense back!!!!!!!😛😛 buh here wa happend...!! is he found himself on d up f d hill frm where he n ashi've fallen!! uv was really shocked! how can dat b he has fallen down n afta getting sense back he's up of d hill?!!!!!!😕 dere nowhere ashi 2 b seen around him n ashi dere in d surface under d hill, no where uv 2 b seen!!!!!! both frm dird own direction said—wa d psychoitic(ashi said)/ wackoitic(uv said) thing is going no here?!!!!😆

uv got really feared where ashi is! n dere he's also confused wot was actully going on dere and dere same reaction also 4 ashi.. uv now thought 2 get down of d hill somehow..

uv- i gotta find asshi..

so he tried 2 find some other wacky road wid unshaped rockes.... wid so much prob in d road he finally got down under d hill. he started screaming--- ASHIIIIIIIIIIIIII...........

ashi dere thought she heard something..

ashi thought is it uv shouting dere?

ashi also started shouting- uuvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv.......... kaha ho????!!!!!!!!

and dere uv also heard ashi's call, both were getting desperate 2 find each other out as soon as possible... they were getting like mad!!!!

they were searching here n dere in d surface.. dat surface was kinda jungle atmosphere....

wot d?!!!!!!!!..................................... ashi is shocked!!!!!!! it's uv laying on d surface! seemed dere it bleed 2 much frm his head!!!! without standing dere 4 a moment she ran fast 2 him.

ashi- OMG! uv!! uv!!!!!!!!!!!

she started screaming like crazyyyy..... she puted her hand on his head, so much've bleed!! she touched her ear 2 his chest.. OMGG!! his heart isn't beating!!!!!!!!!!! ashi got totally losttttttt.. lots of tears came outta her eyes at a time.. no sound came frm her lips. she grabed uv's hand tightly n was staring at him helplessly....

n guess wa?? dere uv was searching 4 ashii crazily still then.. afta a while he felt something stucked wid his leg.

uv afta seeing dat uv was like nowhere! he's like lost his mind totally!!! he did a big HAAAA!!!! it's ashi laying on d surface!!! seemed her leg got really hurted n dere was still flowing some blood frm her head!!!!!! uv broke on his knees like a lost kid. soon he hold ashi's face.. n took her head on his arms..

uv- ashi?!! ashi!!!!!!

even he touched her vains on hand buh no beating was felt by him..!!!!!!!

he scremed!

uv-ASHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

grabbed her tightly n started crying looudly like a crybay.....

now dere she was sitting silently n staring at uv's face heard again uv's voice! screaming calling her "ASHI"!! voice seemed really close.. she turned back.. stood up n walked a bit dere n she saw dere's uv!!!!! he was like crying by grabbing some1!!!!!

ashi- uv? tum?😛

uv gotta shock!! he turned n saw it's ashi standing dere!!!!!!!!😛😛 uv looked at her in real confused face. ashi was laying at his arms at dat time.. buh another ashi standing dere???? n wen uv turned at her ashi she saw d lady uv was grabbing n crying it's she herself!!!!!! uv stood up by putting ashi's body 2 d surface lightly.. mooved 2 d ashi who was stanting in a shock n staring at him..... uv got another shock by mooving a bit.. he saw his own body near 2 her laying d same situation of dat body like ashi's 1, bleeding frm head 2 much!!!! they both stared at each 4 some minutes in confusion.. they thought wateva were happening wid them till now.. afta dat they had no more doubt dat both of them weren't member of d world anymore.. they'v now turned jus souls without body n their bodies were laying down jus beside them!!.. it was GOD's lil prank wid them.. 2 let them know dat how much they luv each other, how much they care bout each other n wot'd b d life of any of them without 1. they knew now they were jus souls, body wasn't wid them anymore. they jus couldn't wait 4 a single moment 2 hav each other's touch.... they mooved fast 2wards eachother n hugged in a hurry seemd they'r not gonna hav each other's enough of d touch any day.. hugged like 4eva like fevistick......😳😳 n thanked GOD 4 reuniting them still afta getting away frm d body.. they felt each other by d hug like they neva hugged!........... uv wraped ashi wid his safe n comfortable arms n ashi huged uv back wid her luvable n full of cared arms.......😳😳 they though everything that they've done in d world wen they were d member of d world.. they did a lot of pranks wid each otha.. buh none of them was 2 hart any of them.. it was called d luvprank..😳 so GOD jus desided they both now can hav heaven 4eva n may enter 2gather!!😛😛

GOD— u 2 r most wellcumed 2 d next world of d world n in2 d haven. GOD called themm..😛😛

buh lol seemed they were so busy in feeling d desperately waited hug dat they didn't hear wot GOD jus've offered 2 themm...😆😳😳 so GOD gave a sweet laugh at their cute chemistry n luv..😳😳 so GOD ordered d Ferestas 2 flow d 2 cute luvbirds n shift them frm dis surface 2 d espcial 4eva heaven jus 4 psycho n wacko.😛😛😳😳

so. how was dat?😛😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 [ 😲 :o] [:o 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲.....youuuuu haveee written a oneeeee shottttttttt 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 aweeeshmeeee shooooock ☺️ am shooooo happyyyyyyyy☺️...let me read it and then i wld be back with a longer replyyyyyyyyy☺️☺️☺️....gosh am sooo soo eciteddddddd a new ay one shottttttttthaaaaanx thaaanx for the wonderfulllllll surpriseeeeeeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 [ 😲 :o] [:o 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲.....youuuuu haveee written a oneeeee shottttttttt 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 aweeeshmeeee shooooock ☺️ am shooooo happyyyyyyyy☺️...let me read it and then i wld be back with a longer replyyyyyyyyy☺️☺️☺️....gosh am sooo soo eciteddddddd a new ay one shottttttttthaaaaanx thaaanx for the wonderfulllllll surpriseeeeeeee

wellcum wellcum,😆 lol i jus had this idea of one shot, i guess not gonna hav any more idea 4 writting any other 1 shot.. k read it.. lol really kinda weirdo thoughts r included lmaao..😆 this thought was ghumoing n chakkar katoing on ma mind frm somedays 2day jus written..😳

Edited by usharafuddin - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh my goooooooooooooooooood i read itttttttttttttttttttttttt☺️v☺️

its dammmmmmmmm daaammmmmmmmmmmm cuteeeeeeeeeeee☺️...looooooved it u have expressed it sooooooo soooo awesmelyy and in such a cuteish mannerrrrrr☺️.....i wana reply a real real long review over this ficcyyy☺️☺️...soo that i wld do tomoroooo...for now just knw that its superbbbbb👏👏👏...i mean the story is ok but the way u have written it is watt making it soo beautyfulll and aweshmelyy cuteeeeeee☺️...just like wackotic psychoticsssss😃😃...wld be back wid a proper revieww real sooon probably by tomoroo😉

pssssssssss....u said ur moods horribly bad todayyy??/....wat happend babesss hope alls welllll🤗🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

oh my goooooooooooooooooood i read itttttttttttttttttttttttt☺️v☺️

its dammmmmmmmm daaammmmmmmmmmmm cuteeeeeeeeeeee☺️...looooooved it u have expressed it sooooooo soooo awesmelyy and in such a cuteish mannerrrrrr☺️.....i wana reply a real real long review over this ficcyyy☺️☺️...soo that i wld do tomoroooo...for now just knw that its superbbbbb👏👏👏...i mean the story is ok but the way u have written it is watt making it soo beautyfulll and aweshmelyy cuteeeeeee☺️...just like wackotic psychoticsssss😃😃...wld be back wid a proper revieww real sooon probably by tomoroo😉

pssssssssss....u said ur moods horribly bad todayyy??/....wat happend babesss hope alls welllll🤗🤗

awwee my lol thankoo u liked it!!😛 woww lol i was getting ferared dat wot'll any1 reply by this 2 much weirdo fic😆 aww will w8 4 yo longy reply🤗

Edited by usharafuddin - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its so cute....juz simpy amazing idea hiba...wow loved ur love story......muah muah muah... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanaayuvi

its so cute....juz simpy amazing idea hiba...wow loved ur love story......muah muah muah... 😳

awwee thankoo hun..😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i read againnnnnn 😃 its shooo shoo cuteee and now am replying my hyperyy long replyyy 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heeeeevsss 🤗...its shooo shoooooooo shooo cuteeeeeeee😳....u knw am shoo proude of lal AY fanssss👏👏...i mean they are ever ready to try out new things..without thinking about whether or not it wld be appreciated....and u knw thats the reason whyyy each and everything we do turns out to be shooo adorable and loveable😳😳...we do it with so much heart and soul that it obviouslyy has to be special and worth all efforts😳😳....and u knw heebssss u hav written it shoo cutelyy that despite the weired story u hav managed to make it fit into AY styleee👏 👏👏.....i mean i never thot this story wld suit ay😛...but u hav written it soo in ay style u hav not lost track of their basic character and personality and have managed to make dis situation so diff from ay point of view👏👏...must say gurll u realy knw them well😳....

and i just loved looooooooooved this line....."psycho sochne ke liye brains main muscles chahiye body pe nahi"🤣....oh my god this is woooo woooo woooooooo👏👏...i mean thats wat ashi is all aboutttttttt👏...she wldnt hav just stood there and let death take her away without giving her best fight for survival😳..she wnt just stand there and crib and cry and let death laugh at her...she wnt just succumb to destiny...rather she wld fight and make others around her fight back too👏 👏..and wen she accepts her fate it wld be with open arms and a smiling face showing its her decission to accept it and not destiny's cruel shock👏👏....i mean shes always been this ways trying to cheer people up in the most difficult of times👏👏..i mean who in the world wld even think of joking in such a situation....normal people wld hav lost all their humorous cells by so much of strain and stress😆 😆...but well this is our ashiiii😳..she wld crack the dumbest jokes😳 just to make the air lighter just to calm herself down and calm her frnds dwn so that they all hav a cool mind and can think cooly😳....awwww...shs adolableeeeee🤗🤗..love her spirit her braveryyyy...shes the strength and the light of hope to all the people around her😳🤗..shes the positive force which keeps them all going on and on🤗......

and oh my goooooooooood the way yuvi says....'and nw i guess we wld hav to leave the world....so a last hug'...awww...😍😍😍.....that hug that kiss the way they cry on seeing each other hurt the way they realize that they love each other soo soooooo much....aww and the way u hav shwn that if not in the material world they are atleast together now in the heavenly world of god and dis togetherness is forever types😍😍😍...too tooooooo gooood👏..loved the line...its god's cruel prank on them to make them realize how much they mean to each other....👏👏..it soo soo awesmee u hav made their love realy eternal by this one...loved it keep it going babes...i wld love to read more of ur cutenesss😳🤗🤗

Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

heeeeevsss 🤗...its shooo shoooooooo shooo cuteeeeeeee😳....u knw am shoo proude of lal AY fanssss👏👏...i mean they are ever ready to try out new things..without thinking about whether or not it wld be appreciated....and u knw thats the reason whyyy each and everything we do turns out to be shooo adorable and loveable😳😳...we do it with so much heart and soul that it obviouslyy has to be special and worth all efforts😳😳....and u knw heebssss u hav written it shoo cutelyy that despite the weired story u hav managed to make it fit into AY styleee👏 👏👏.....i mean i never thot this story wld suit ay😛...but u hav written it soo in ay style u hav not lost track of their basic character and personality and have managed to make dis situation so diff from ay point of view👏👏...must say gurll u realy knw them well😳....

and i just loved looooooooooved this line....."psycho sochne ke liye brains main muscles chahiye body pe nahi"🤣....oh my god this is woooo woooo woooooooo👏👏...i mean thats wat ashi is all aboutttttttt👏...she wldnt hav just stood there and let death take her away without giving her best fight for survival😳..she wnt just stand there and crib and cry and let death laugh at her...she wnt just succumb to destiny...rather she wld fight and make others around her fight back too👏 👏..and wen she accepts her fate it wld be with open arms and a smiling face showing its her decission to accept it and not destiny's cruel shock👏👏....i mean shes always been this ways trying to cheer people up in the most difficult of times👏👏..i mean who in the world wld even think of joking in such a situation....normal people wld hav lost all their humorous cells by so much of strain and stress😆 😆...but well this is our ashiiii😳..she wld crack the dumbest jokes😳 just to make the air lighter just to calm herself down and calm her frnds dwn so that they all hav a cool mind and can think cooly😳....awwww...shs adolableeeeee🤗🤗..love her spirit her braveryyyy...shes the strength and the light of hope to all the people around her😳🤗..shes the positive force which keeps them all going on and on🤗......

and oh my goooooooooood the way yuvi says....'and nw i guess we wld hav to leave the world....so a last hug'...awww...😍😍😍.....that hug that kiss the way they cry on seeing each other hurt the way they realize that they love each other soo soooooo much....aww and the way u hav shwn that if not in the material world they are atleast together now in the heavenly world of god and dis togetherness is forever types😍😍😍...too tooooooo gooood👏..loved the line...its god's cruel prank on them to make them realize how much they mean to each other....👏👏..it soo soo awesmee u hav made their love realy eternal by this one...loved it keep it going babes...i wld love to read more of ur cutenesss😳🤗🤗

awww suchcha adorable reply...🤗🤗 lol yeh dat's our ashi, nonstop cute jokes any time even in such condition of going away frm d world..😳😳 n dat line psycho sochne ke liye brains main muscles chahiye body pe nehi" i guess da was told by ashi during d garden fight where leo kicked uv.😆. ay jus rock ma world, remxians' world......😛😛

n lol nothing i hav in ma mind now. demag is pooraa khaali now lmaao.. if i get ny weirdo idea again will post 4 sure weather it's good or weird lol... your words give me energy man..😛😳

Edited by usharafuddin - 18 years ago

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