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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

awwwwwwwwwww thank youuuuuuuuuu🤗 🤗🤗...you know wats suprising nahi nahi shocking meee??...u managed to write more than three linessssssssssss😲 😲.....aww that means u might have realy kind of liked it☺️☺️....awww...thaanx...see am blushing☺️.....and wel yaa yuvi is stuck with that dumb brianless dudd😆..but then am sure you noticed the amount of love he held for her😆.....and as for the kissssssss.well trust me i soo wanted the kiss to happen sooo soo much....😍...but well the hwole purpose of thhe fic was uncertainity and unsureity about their relationship and their place in each others lives....glaad u liked it😳 ...and thaanx for not getting tooo scared by the length and being brave enough to read it all😳🤗...you know your comments actually make the effort worth it☺️...lovee yaaaa🤗🤗

aaargh...😡

matlab sab mere peeche pad jaao...i thnk i shud wear a sign in my sig box *ATTENTION:gurl whu neva rytz more than three lynz*

nd abt the kiss...well...actly ryt...bst prt of fic ws uncrtanity....quited diffrnt endin...😳

nd i wud hav read it even if it ws double the length...im vry brave....😃

do ryt more

i noe u luvv rytin romance drippin f ix....😆

lotsa luv 🤗🤗

pinky...

ps..muhahahha....again i break my 3 lyn curse..😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ahem ahem ahem ahem...well firstly I wanna say chow chorry SIMI for late reply, but hardly got the PC re ladki, and secondly no1 will find a dumb girl like me to reply so late...okay watever, I know you would have used absolutely golden phrases in my tareef, but yu deserve it jhasi ki rani mata Smriti ji, and now I land up to yr FIC gurl.... Nitu madam...yu are dam dam dam lucky re...this has become my fav. fic, and dedicated to you...I'm so bloddy J...................

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he he heeeeee.... Hey Simi, I always loved yr fics to da core, and each is a piece of cake and a pleasure to read, but this one was spectacular, I love dit like nething, it was totally different frm yr other shots, and showed complete AY flavours in it till no extent gurl, I started reading the fic and bursted out laughing at the name SIA

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hmmmm....I know it very very well wat were yu upto darling, and what yu didnot do at this very point, Yuvi stuck up with a complete bunch of tantrums, and he is jhelofying one after the other, but just the thought of LIGHTS made him fall for his true love man...aw aww awwwwww.... I was again taken to the AY-land hai maaaaaaaa... still I am over there, shhhh... don't disturb me get it.... hey bhagguu..Yuvi is grinning and the chick s blushing thinking wat not...hey bhaggguu..... idiot chickyyyyyyyy......... doesnot know who is the acctual ahem ahem ahem......

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Finally Yuvi is freed from the barless jail and landing at Maurya..... phew..... and when it cums to our Aashi Yuvi, they can never ever meet perfectly, it has to be the total bhaigiri or dada style wat say ha? " Hey Psyco..." just this one shout, and ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....we'll are with wide open mouths...awww...aww...awww....I wish this was there when remix was on air man.....I would have definately gone completely out of my head and face blushing....hey bhagguu...still I am blushing..mammaaa....yakkkkk...I hate Mitra toooooo.....bloody not a mitra, but a shatru....Fabulous Aashi, us bugster ke saath to aisey aisey kaarnamein karne chahiye, to turn his black robe into multicoloured pallet....eeeuukkkkkkkk..... he is a ( BEEP BEEP BEEP ), but imagining, yuvi was the first victim of our aashi trick....aww aww awww..... to to toooooooooo cute man....just way way wayyy toooo cuteeee.... well it has to be yaarrr, thats his Janm Siddh Adhikaar ( Birth rite), oh gosh.... Our Ay, are now fooling the sleepyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy creeepppyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Guards.... ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa........ Mission Successful..... ( hey bhagguuu Simi, yr Fic has made me even more hyper now yaarrrr...... mein zyada hi form mein aa rahi hoon to type man....and these bozos are ringing the door bell one after the another......)

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oh goshhhh.........Yuvi , a dady's boy, bigde huey baap ka ameer beta, who never ever drove a bycyle even in his dreams.....man man mann...I have fallen in love with this dialouge SIMI....."Are you telling me that you have never driven a CYCLE?" "How in the world did you grow up? There hasn't been a day in my childhood when Mom didn't fuss over my wounds from cycle ride falls" hey bhagguuuuuuuuuu...... mujhey bachao... that is just so so so so sooooooo Aashi style gurl...... she would have exactly done the very thing that you've written, Yuvi and Aashi going at 12:00 on a cycle ride to an unknown place, and Aashi is Aashi, we can never expect her to drive slow, Yuvi darling........ hope you are fine.. but I am not SIMI.... goshhhhhhhhhhh..... I love you for this SHOT gurl...honestly....loveddddddddddddddddd it man.... hey hey hey...still I haven't finished yet...read ahead....

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oh my gosh SIMI, now I come the most happening part of this SHOT, I can't tell you, I swear to GOD, I was mesmerized by this one, literally taken or rather blown away man.... I'm not at all exagerating, but writing wat I actually felt to the core...hey bhagguu.... it is indeed very very onvious, a place like this, would only be loved by Aashi, and the CHAPEL.....oh my god..... lighting a candle in a chapel, wat can be more serene than this man....... playing the piano......... awwwwwww awwwwwwwww awwwwwwww awwwwwwww awwwwww.... help me bhagguuuuuuuuuuu..... well acctually he can't even help it, I'm gone away into deeper AY MAP man..... SIMI, thanks a lot to you gurl...... and dam lucky NITU for having this rocking fic as yr birthday gifty......

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and now the water part, both the rockstars are playing in the deep waters...aai haiiiiii..... muddy muddyyy..... wety wety.... oh my goshhhhhhhh........ the senario is gonna be like !@#$ %^&*() hey bhagguuu.... Aashi wants to thank him, and she is blushing from her heart and soul, she really wants to hug him hard, and never wants him to go away, for the very first time in her life she got truely jealous of a barbie doll, who was actually grabbing her Heman.... not at all cool yaarrr...but the jealousy rocked man SIMI, way way wayyy to cute man... as yu said, she'll do nething to get into SIA's shoes... absolutely...nething for her very TRUE LOVE a.k.a YUVRAJ DEV............

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PS: Sorry gurl, was not able to put emoticons properly...but wanted to write ot the fullest which I did.... U Rock SIMI, Love you lots.... and NITU..wish yu a very belated HAppy Birthday Once again......

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 fic smriti di keep writing !
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockin_humz

gr8 fic smriti di keep writing !

awwww thankuu shoo much sweet of u to hav found and read it😳😳.........

and diiiiiiiii😡😡..come on am not that budhaa reeee😭😭..if u call me dii then no more fics for u😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwww 😳 thanx for your shweet comment sonya i realy missed them in my ptevious ficcys 😳 😳 glad that you are back 😳

and divuuuuuu gurllllllll your comment always always brings a biggy wala smile to my faceeee 😳 😳 it realyyy realy makes the efforts worth it 😳 and in a way its cause of your comments which makes me write more of these boring kahanees coz u never tend to find them boring 😳 😳 ....thankuu girlyyyy 🤗 🤗 🤗 ...loveee youuuu 🤗 ...and yaa i liked the name tooo 😉 it kind off fitted the personality 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

🤗Happy Birthday Nappy🤗

i couldnt give you cards or siggies or gifts or cakes...sowieee that your best frnd is soo dumbbb and tallentles i cldnt even do the post theek se😭 😭.....all i could do is write this bit...its kind off not good...but still its for youuuuuuuuuu i wrote it as best as i could......😳 🤗🤗hope you like it nappyyyyy😳

before you start reading i just wanted to tell you that you rooooooock and i lovee you loadssssss just the way you areee you are toooooooo cuteee you irritate me to the coreeeeeee and i soooo hate it wen u shw me your pumkins.....but stillllll you are the beshtttttttt......you are the onlyyyy oneeeeeee around here whome i can take for granted....you know whyyy....coz i knwwwwwwwwwwww come wat may at the end of the day u wld say smritii i lovee youuu.....😳 🤗🤗...ym is boring without you napsssssssss🤗🤗

Loonyy pehle to sorry for late replyy😭 but you know how lajee am naa😳😳

And pehle to I just wanna sayy I LOVE YOUU🤗🤗🤗 You are the bestest friend one could ever havee! The 1st thing when i log in(in morning and now when i come from skool) is check wheither you are onlinee or nott!😳 And if you are not...I would give u 100 curses☺️😆 Than i would be like...I wont talk to loony ever now but then as soon as u come... I just cant stop myself clicking on your name☺️☺️ And well that's the best thing about us... we might plan to not talk with each other...but we just cant help it😆

You are the most looniest creature i have seen in this whole world...but i lovee youu😳 coz sometimesssss you becomeee sooo cuteeeI wish to just come over ur place and give u one big kickyy☺️ but sumtimes u become soo meanoo with mee You and everyonee but still your cuteness covers up ur meaness for mee😳😳 But that doesnt mean that my kicky's will end okeee?? Inafct they will increasee☺️ Here is dose 1☺️
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 (More come and get on yhaoo😆 am tired of typing emoticons😆...Hope you got it😉)

Neways loony on a serious nottee... I havent seen such supporting and caring friend than you😳😳 Thankooo soo much for giving me your friendship😳 My day seriously doesnt end if i dont talk with u😳 I lovee youu and adoree you to the coree😳 My second ashii🤗 Ashi taught me to folllow my heart, to be rebel, to be original and real, to be naughtyy, to fight for my rights and many thingss... but you taught me the real meanings of the teachings of our ashi😳🤗🤗 Thankoo for everything smriti DIDI😆😉😳 You are one of bestest thing that happen in my lifee🤗🤗

You remember the old days...when we 1st met😆 How awkward we felt to talk with each other...infact when we met...v used to ask each other for AY videos😆😆 but well as time passed...our friendship grew and my love and respect for you grew too☺️ Each passing day...I have been loving you more and more🤗(even though u hide things from me😭) And i will keep loving you more each passing day...I promise(This promise is not meant to be broken😳 it's meant to be fulfilled and it will😳)

Love youu loonyy and thankooo for the wonderfull giftyy🤗 As for your dumbness... I already told u that YOU ARE NOT DUMB!!Dare you say that one more timeYou might not know much more about computers...but that doesnt mean u are dumb I mean look at yourself... you smartness is hidden in your hyper posts😳 and offcoursee...your are the professional pen writerr😳😉 Which is one of the huge talent in youu...and i adoree it😳😳 You are just the besttt loonyyyyy... very creative and very lovablee...I lovee youuu loonyyyyyyyy🤗🤗....youu rockkkkk😎

PS: More kickyss arriving on YM☺️😆 Watch out!😉
PPS: I may not have said all whatever i wanted to say... coz my feelings for you are endless😳😳 And soo it might not ever end😳😆 You my one of my bestest friendyyy everrrrrrr🤗🤗 *Touch Wood*

Edited by *nitz_rocks* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wwowwwwwwh i'm totally deepeed in2 d story.... gr8!! apna dil wanna read forward more.. 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aaaaaaaah how i missssssssed that brilliant shreyasiiii 😳 it means soooo much to be appreciated by a briillant writer herself 😳 😳 😳 welcome backkkk furl realy missed your comments in my ficcyss

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