Can I Fall For Him ???

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Hi friends... here is a small shot that I have written,please devote just 5 mins to this one Hope you'll like it 😃 , please do comment on it, as it really make my spirits high 😉

CAN I FALL FOR HIM???


It was very late at night, and our red headed doll was fast asleep in her dreams, probably dating a dragon or dancing with spirits, well it's our AASHI and everything is possible with her right…suddenly a rocking ENRIQUE ringtone irritated her sleep and she woke up saying… "Hey bhagguu…I'm gonna kill the moron!!!!" 😡

AASHI: what the hell, you psyco????
YUVI: hey AASHI??? So rahi thi kya?
AASHI: duh-uh….bilkul nahi, night watch kar rahi hoon bats and owls par!
YUVI: matlab?
AASHI: Idiot, what do you expect me to do at ( she gazed at her watch) 3AM?
YUVI: goshhh…pata nahi, I'm feeling strange?
AASHI: whats new in that?
YUVI: remember SHIKHA, that tall fair chick?
AASHI: you want me to remember girls? Are you in your senses?
YUVI: nahi you wacked out female, I think…
AASHI laughed…
AASHI: do you have brains to think sweetheart?
YUVI: I think finally I am in love…with SHIKHA .
AASHI: congratulations…. Six months mein yeh tumhara eighth love hai rite..
YUVI: arey this is the final one yaar..pichaley kitney dino se I'm not sleeping at night.
AASHI: INSOMIA ho gaya hoga.
YUVI: bhookh nahi lagti.
AASHI: hajmola ka overdoze hua hoga.
YUVI: charo directions mein usi ka face flash hota hai.
AASHI: specks lagne waley hai tumhey.
YUVI: baithe baithe mein uskey hi baarey mein dream karta hoon.
AASHI: ( yorned…) Day Dreaming ki bimari hai tumko.
YUVI: oh shut upp AASHI !!! you are so unromantic.
AASHI: creepy yak, you want me to be romantic at this time. Dhin bhar you keep blabbering, tab yaad nahi aaya yeh batana, meri rocking sleep ko shocking bana diya isney !
YUVI:yeh rite, LOVE ek aisa topic hota hai jiskey baarey mein discussion ka koi time nahi hota, but mein yeh tumsey keh raha hoon, so stupid of me, have you ever fallen for any guy? Doosaro ki chodo, you know me since years, have you ever fallen even for me??? 😉

AASHI was taken a back by what YUVI said, it seemed that YUVI exactly said what AASHI wanted to hear, since such a long time, 😳 😳 now AASHI was completely into her senses, but was an alien to any such situation.YUVI was constanly saying one or the other thing bout his 9th CRUSH to AASHI, but she was lost completely by the particular statement, her feelings were now being realized by her, by one casual statement, her feelings were now being realized by her, by one casual statement..... 😊 😊 😊
AASHI's concentration had gone away from what YUVI was saying, and kept thinking and thinking and thinking, her sleep went miles away, and she didnot even realise when YUVI had disconnected the call.... all she asked to herself was...


" CAN I FALL FOR HIM???"

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats really cool..i just loved it..i hope you plzzz finish it and get ashi to put her feelings in front of yuvi..plzz do it fast..once again i have to say itzz awesome 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey bhaggu i love it!!! How nice man!!! You should turn this thing into a full length fic. Honestly. Rocking job
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks a lot Komal and kay_123... 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow ya its awesum...luv it...do write more 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwww this is shoooo cuteeeee 😳 😳 😳...loved it...love the friendship kind of feel you have given in their relationhip 😳 ...thats the beauty of their relationship.... its so perfectlyy complete 😳...when they want they can be friends and gigle and laugh away to glory on each other and on the world 😳 ....when they want they can be enemies and stand against each other if they feel they are right 👏 👏...and when they want then nobody in the whole wide world can stop them from drooling over each other with dreamy eyes and love in the air and everywhere 😍 😍.... loved the phone convo🤣 🤣she had a ready answer for al his questions except the last bit....could she fall for him?....😳..and the answer is yes she could have fallen hard only and only for him...because hes the only fake yet the most adorable and real heman she could have got😳
Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey divya cool yaar....i miss their mad talks n crazy fights so much 😳 😆 n some how u sort of potray yuvi ashi 's feeling so well yaar..i really like it...u should become d director for remix 2 .. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooh...vry vry cute....uf curc she cn fall fr him....
nd ossum dialogues...
>>u wnt me 2 think abt gals<<<<....lolz...
i jus luvd the humour ......nd the last prt..>>>didnt ralize when he disconnected<<....datz 222222 cute....nyc 1 divu...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well let me tell you divya..my name is also komal..so u got 2 komal's here 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey divi, I just read this one shot of yours, and must say its way too cool, loved it to the core sweety a total different side of ashi yuvi relation and thats true friendship, brilliant job. 😊

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