It Does Not Hurt to Smile.. Oneshot TR

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Posted: 18 years ago
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For all TR fans.. (And AY too, if you want to read it 😳)

This is on no request..Just something I had written so thought of posting it.. 😳 here goes:

Today, Tia Ahuja, did something very unusual. She smiled. Now I know, you're wondering what the big deal is with smiling. Especially if you're as pretty as Tia, and have such white teeth which you do not forget to brush daily, smiling is a gift. But then again, this is Tia Ahuja you are talking about. She rarely smiles.

But today she did. And there was a special reason too, if it were me or you, we would've smiled as well. As usual she got up in the morning, quite early, if I might add, and went to work. Delving into files and folders of paperwork which she had yet to complete, she had completely forgotten that it was late in the afternoon when her stomach grumbled. Sighing, she got up and went to get some food from a store nearby, and took it to the nearby hillside area.

She liked that place, there were small mounds of hill, and lush greenery which was very peaceful. There was always a calm breeze going on there, which always made one very safe and comfortable. Especially on a day like this, when it was bright and sunny, the scenic beauty surrounding her was enthralling. She looked up to see a dove flying; doves were sign of peace. She looked up at the dove, enjoying its chaste and pure white color when she heard someone clearing their throat behind her.

"Fancy seeing you here,"

She groaned loudly, so loudly that she didn't even bother to suppress it as she turned around, "Why? I mean why are you here disturbing my peace, Ranveer?"

He smirked, his infamous devilish smirk that sent shivers down her spine. "The thing is, Tia, the thing is that I don't know why I am here. You see I was just going around this place, and then I thought I saw this hillside, and I decided to come here. Well actually--"

"Ranveer."

"actually, I thought that maybe by coming here--"

"RANVEER!"

"What?"

"You're rambling. Stop it, it is being incessantly annoying. And would you be kind enough to remove yourself from my presence?"

"Aww.. Come on, I cant be that bad, can I? I mean I am, after all, only a guy who hasn't even reached 25. Can't I just stand here with the incredibly sexy girl beside me?"

She looked up at him, really really looked up at him. His eyes were black, almost black and they were glittering with hidden mischief or sincerity, she didn't know. His face was clean shaven and his shirt had a button open on top. She was glad to see that he was not hairy, she hated hairy men. His hair was parted right in the middle, and it fell over his face in waves. His teeth were dazzlingly white, and as she felt the gaze of his eyes on her, she did something very uncharacteristic. She blushed.

And he noticed it.

"Dear me.! Is Tia blushing? Dear me, I think you may like me, dear."

She quickly glanced up, before denying it as fast as possible. "No I do no such thing, Ranveer."

"Tee-Tee, are you sure that you don't have a crush on me?"

She blushed again, she herself felt the warmth reach her cheeks before he gave a whoop.

"I don't love you Ranveer."

"Love? Who said anything about love? I was just merely--"

"For God's sake Ranveer, stop it. I don't love such a reptilistic skunk like you. You are such an insufferable, and a poor excuse of a man. Not to mention, half man – half camel." She finished quite lamely.

"But you do." He drawled in a sexy voice, which sent her heart rate to a complete massacre, "But you do have a crush on me, despite my being a reptilistic skunk, and an insufferable and poor excuse for a man. Why, Tia Ahuja, I believe that you are head over heels in love with me."

That was when it happened. That was exactly when her hand came up and left a very stinging print on his cheek. In short, she slapped him.

"Don't dare speak of me in that way. I don't love you, and never ever will I even think of lovi--"

she was cut off right there, because he kissed her. It wasn't forceful, no not at all, he kissed her quite gently, in fact. Yet it had an amazing amount of lust and passion in it, and before long she could feel herself succumbing to the kiss. He pulled her closer and her body relaxed under his touch. And after what felt like bliss, they pulled away, gasping for breath. He started kissing her neck, knowing that it was a sensual area for any girl as he whispered, "I like you too, you know Tia. I like you too. So what do you say we make this official? Me, you, us together?"

She didn't respond as he continued to kiss her neck, trailing kisses down her back until she moaned in pleasure. Instead she did something quite unusual, she smiled.

Do comment.. constructive criticism is always welcome 😳.. and if you want me to smile..then you have to comment 😳

Shreyasi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg i jus cant believe it ya...this was d first time i had read something coz it concerned my tiara n i must tell u it is jus amazing,jus outta d world....im actually impressed n i jus luv it...uve made my day babe...thank u sooooo much 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome shreyasi...tht was cho sweet... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The whole story reminds me of many of the mills and boons one which i really enjoyed but never thought of ranveer tia to be placed in M$B.but u did anmind blowing job.liked it tooooooooooo much shreyas.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: saranshi

The whole story reminds me of many of the mills and boons one which i really enjoyed but never thought of ranveer tia to be placed in M$B.but u did anmind blowing job.liked it tooooooooooo much shreyas.

u took words right out of my mouth😛...it is totally mills & boony...but way better👏..full of passion but falls short of being corny...just d rite touch😳...and i always believed dat tia-ranveer could have made a perfect mills & boon pair😳...

shreyasi..u have done a commendable job here👏...its so good dat i wish SA could have shown dis in Remix😳...but then it mite have been censored😕....but who cares.😉😆

so dis is wat one shot is...have seen so many posts wid dat title here..never bothered 2 read..but ur post wid tr at the end did d trick😉...

i am so happy i didn't miss dis one....i am actually saving it 2...promise me u will write more of dis on tr😳...its an order in fact.😆..

and shreyasi.😛..i smiled throughout while reading ur work..believe me it didn't hurt..it didn't hurt at all😳....

thanx a lot dear😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was amazing shreyasi 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳 Its beautiful...thats says it all from me!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oooooosooomm haf no wordsssss 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: saranshi

The whole story reminds me of many of the mills and boons one which i really enjoyed but never thought of ranveer tia to be placed in M$B.but u did anmind blowing job.liked it tooooooooooo much shreyas.

yes shreyasi thats what i felt too

.. though its hard to imagine ranveer with his hair parted in the middle and fallling over his fave in waves😳😉😆

Edited by aparna_1988 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: saranshi

The whole story reminds me of many of the mills and boons one which i really enjoyed but never thought of ranveer tia to be placed in M$B.but u did anmind blowing job.liked it tooooooooooo much shreyas.

totally agree wit u.....it was gr8,awesum....i dont hav any wrds...dis is 4 u

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