Irresistible...AY one shot!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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As part of the Ashi Yuvi Fic-A-Thon...
Requested by: smriti
Concept: uv's acting drunk and his motive is to kiss ashi....i want a full rockingly hot one shot...

~*Irresistible*~
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"Cheers dude!" his friend said.

"Hey thanx man. Wow dude...you rock..thanx a lot for the beers!" They clinked their cans of beer together and Yuvi took a swig from his. Man...life was good. They were sitting at the entrance...watching the rain, which was pretty heavy.

"Anyways yuvi...gotta go man...havta meet my girl in half an hour. See you later."

"Bye...n thanks for the beer mate!" Yuvi waved to his friend and then resumed sitting down and thinking. He was just enjoying the feel of the fine spray of rain on his face. His reverie was interrupted by a loud splashing coming from the general direction of the gate He squinted his eyes and could make out a blur coming towards the school.Further inspection revealed that it was none other than ashi....

*

Ashi was in a terrific mood. She had forgotten to take an umbrella to the party and now suddenly it had started pouring. Her mom had told her to take one of course but she had refused to look like a total idiot with it. She might have taken one if she had paid any heed to the sky but then again it was not really her fault.

It was all her dear sweet mother's fault that she had hardly paid any attention to anything after said dear sweet mother had decided her outfit for the party. Sonia Ray might have a lot of qualities...but agreeing with her daughter was not one of them Ashi had been forced to wear a white tee over a pink skirt...a pink skirt!!!

Apart from the fact that she totally detested the color...it clashed horribly with her hair. On top of that she was wearing leather boots...which were all soggy with water.Running through a downpour hadn't exactly helped matters.

Yes...she was really in a real terrific mood........

*

Yuvi coughed on his drink staring at her running towards him. In all his Maurya days, he hadn't ever seen an ashi more pissed off than now. He grinned.....this was going to be great...a pissed off red head was exactly what he needed now...He took another swig from is can...a plan formulating inside his mind.

Finally! Ashi thought..she had made it, almost to the school. She had just stepped on the first step when she saw Yuvi sitting there, beer can in hand, staring at her. He seemed to be drunk.

"Heeyyyy ashiii...what're you doing here???" he asked slurring his words.

"Perfect! Just what I need to complete this beautiful beautiful day!" she said.

"You look..er...well...!"

"Why thank you so much Yuvraj! What would I do without you!"

He stood up and moved towards her. As he did so...he noticed that she was completely drenched...her hair all over her face and shoulders...her tee sticking to her...her skirt going weirdly with her hair...and her face already furious...and he hadn't even done anything!
To Yuvi she had never been more alluring.

Ashi didn't like the scrutiny over her appearance and ignored him moving instead towards the interior of the school entrance.

"Heyy...wait for mee..." he said and pretended to fall down. Ashi whirled round and tried to steady him. But the steps had become really slippery due to the rain and before she give him a hand...he fell...this time for real.
Ashi slapped a hand to her forehead. Yuvi groaned...'ok maybe that had not been in the plan.'

"Oww..ashii help me..pleasee...!!!" Ashi sighed and counted to three. 'Why do I always get stuck with him?!' she thought. She descended the steps to go and help him. H was still lying flat on the ground...getting drenched as well.

Why does he have to get drunk so much?' she thought. As she leaned down to pull him up...her wet hair strands fell across him. Yuvi held his breathe...and closed his eyes as ashi somehow pulled him up the steps...she straightened him and started guiding him slowly. He slowly let out the breathe he had been holding in.

He pretended to stumble a little so that he could keep his head on her shoulder...he was now totally leaning on her....she smelled of the rain...
Ashi was feeling decidedly uncomfortable...since Yuvi's nose was touching her neck and each time he breathed...her own breath would hitch.

Finally she stopped and slowly detached herself from him...

"Yuvi...now come on...walk with me..." He didn't answer but was watching her with a hazy smile on his drunk but otherwise cute face.

Now where did that come from? she hastily suppressed the thought.

"Come ON..!" she said irritatedly pulling him along, "tumhein itna drink karne ki kya zaroorat thi...psycho! Tum khud toh useless ho...mujhe bhi marwaoge! Ek toh this stupid skirt! And that rain! Mumma...am gonna kill you just lemme reach you! And why are you smiling Mr. drunkard?!"

He smiled and pulled her towards him and wrapped his arms around her.
"Bcoz you look too cute when you're angry," saying so he kissed her. Ashi felt her irritation slipping away as she started losing herself in the kiss...

Finally she pushed him back. "Yuvi...what the hell? Get back." she pushed him back further.

"Aww come on babes!!!" he said pulling her again.

Then she looked at him properly. "You...you're not even drunk are you? You were pretending!!!" She said thwapping him with her hands.

"All right all right...I was..I was!"

"You idiot..you made me almost carry you till here!"

"Ok so I pretended to be a lil drunk.."
"Little???"

"Ok...too much drunk...I just wanted to kiss you ok? Its so rare to kiss a girl in a pink skirt..." she narrowed her eyes.

"Ok...a red head in a pink skirt...nice combo by the way.." she had her hands on her hips now...."plus u were...err....drenched...and angry" he said coming closer..."completely irresistible...."

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Comments are extremely appreciated! I'm very nervous about this one!😕
Edited by xMarauderx - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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harshuuuuuuuuu harshuu harshuu am sooo hyperly hyper ki i cant even type properly......its just perfectlyyyyyyyyy irresistable.....waat an awesme awesme awesme title...i simply loved the title coz d way u hav described ashi..compltly drenched....hair all over her face and shoulders....t sticking to her and a rockinglyy weired PINK skirt to compliment her hair.....🤣{ashi cld hav worn a pink skirt only in ur ficyy devilzz}hw can she be resisted in such a discription and certainly nt frm uv 😳i looved the unplanned fall Mr Dev had and wid his breath gone i lost my breath too and am still finding it bt it wnt cme daat easilyy.....its just mindblowingly awesmeee and u get a perfect 100 in the hotto metre..though u havnt used any heavy words to make it hot but the simpleee backdrop of a maad ashi and a wacked out nad knocked out uv was all daat was needed.....thaaanx devilz for writing dis sooo beautyfullyyy🤗 🤗and all i can do right nw is😍

PS....devolzzz dnt go by the lengt of the reply rember i gave u an insten one and am sure u knw who is who was and who always will be more hyper and yaa dnt forget she took two days to write a reply soo its mee who wiiins😳

Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Completely Irresistable 🤗 awww...awwww...awww... This shot has made me allllll the way dreamy☺️ I loved it...loved it....loved it...loved it...loved it chooooooooo much☺️☺️ It's just the best! ☺️I could visualize each nd every part sooo...sooo clearly☺️ And ashi in pink skirt and her red hair😆😳😳 nice combo🤣... only suitable for ashi☺️☺️ Could just imagine yuvi's reaction after seeing ashi in pink skirt☺️ And mayb that's why he made wonderful....wonderful...wonderful plan to kiss ashi☺️ awwwwwwwww... such an awesum plan... poor ashi had to carry him all the way through😉 smarty yuvi☺️ wish i was there and seeing them chup chup ke 😍😍 i would be in dreams all through my life☺️😍😍 But I just can't stop myself reading this over and over again☺️😆 read it like 10 times ab tak☺️☺️ And this part:

He stood up and moved towards her. As he did so...he noticed that she was completely drenched...her hair all over her face and shoulders...her tee sticking to her...her skirt going weirdly with her hair...and her face already furious...and he hadn't even done anything!
To Yuvi she had never been more alluring.

Awww...its soo hottie hottie ☺️ Luved it chooo much☺️ No wonder why yuvi was all the way drolling over ashi☺️😆 and I agree with yuvi...ashi really looks cute when she is angry☺️ Can't wait for your next shot!! I am sure that too is going to be mountaining like all this soo far☺️☺️☺️ hey bhaggu!! help... i am going too dreamy... by now i read it 12 times😆😳😳 Just waiting for another shot ☺️

PS: longer reply than smriti 😆 coz i am more hyper than her😆😆☺️

Edited by *nitz_rocks* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww 😳 dis fic was simply irresistable to read too 😳 luved it specially d red nd pink nice combo 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wat can i say.....coz however i mite try i wont b able to express in words how much i luved it......i will only say i wish remix's script were in ur hands 😉 .......n specially this scene had been jus exactly as u hav written ☺️😍 its too gd 4 words enemy 🤗 .....n i seriously can tell u tht in words 😳 u rock 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 👏
jus luved it reeeeeee!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhhhhhhhh..... harshu..... it ij chooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeet 😳 i luuuub it 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww!!to describe in one smiley:" src="file:///C:/Program%20Files/Yahoo!/Messenger/media/smile ys/105.gif" align=textTop sm="105">" src="file:///C:/Program%20Files/Yahoo!/Messenger/media/smile ys/105.gif" align=textTop sm="105">" src="file:///C:/Program%20Files/Yahoo!/Messenger/media/smile ys/105.gif" align=textTop sm="105">" src="file:///C:/Program%20Files/Yahoo!/Messenger/media/smile ys/105.gif" align=textTop sm="105">" src="file:///C:/Program%20Files/Yahoo!/Messenger/media/smile ys/105.gif" align=textTop sm="105"> what an amazingly amazing oneshot!! lyk shellzie sed totally irresistible ☺️😆 i luved each n every word!! my yuvi d flirt 😳 if i ever get a guy like him........😳 anyway..amazing as usual jamesie 👏

ps: i LIKE d red n pink combo!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww awwwww awwwwwwwww cho choooo chooooooo chweeetttt ☺️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its awesomeeeeeeeeeeee 👏 nd loved d pink nd red combo wala part 😉 nd how many time i hv 2 tell u dat i luuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv ur oneshots 😳 nd i agree wid smriti,kash remix ka scritps were in ur hands,d AY one 😳

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