college life[luv life]A-Y;T-R fic.pt-1,2

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it's a fic which some r already aware tht it was started by me long b4 nd coz of my boards i didn't continued...dis time am starting dis fic all again with a different name with each nd every part updated...

Gideline: its a fic on Uv-Aashi and Tia-Ranveer...its on the life of the college students...nd also abt love

Characters : Uv, Aashi , Tia and Ranveer and some from da show itself all takes admission in a well known college named "PRESTIGE COLLEGE"...all belongs to rich family...
some more r there which would be introduced later

parts posted page no.

part-1 pg-1

Part-2 pg-1

storry begins here...

Part-1

In a shopping mall{TREASURE ISLAND}...

Sumeet : princess chalo mujhe meeting mein jaana hai

Tia: papa abhi toh Tia ne kuch bhi nahin liya hai, puhleese todi der aur

Sumeet : tumhe aisa lag raha hai tumne abhi tak kuch nahin liya??????jabki tum already 10 packets gadi mein rakhwa chucki ho

Sumeet was abt to say more when Tia drags him in plantaloons nd takes him to da side of girls wadrobe

Tia picks one of da dress

Tia : papa yeh Tia pe kaisa lagega?

Sumeet : meri princess pe toh sabb acha lagta hai parr beta we'll come later to buy all this abhi mujhe bohot late ho raha hai na

Tia : papa kal Tia ke college ka first day hai...Tia wahan sabb se best dress pehen kar jaana chahti hai...papa aap koh nahin pata Tia koh kal ka kitna tension hai...

Sumeet : Tension???dress ke liye?

Tia : nahin papa ...ek toh Tia ke liye yeh city ek dum nayi hai uppar se Tia is no more in da school now she's in college so Tia wants to look even more preety than before

Sumeet : ohh my poor baby

Tia: puhlese papa am no more a baby now

just opposite to girls wadrobe was boys wadrobe where a boy along with some of his frnds were sitting...Voice of the girl sitting opposite side was entering into that boys ears...

he found the voice very sweet he was eager to see that girl who's voice he heard, so he turned back to see...but wasn't able to because da face of that girl was opposite to him

just than he hears one more voice...

"Ranveer Jaldi chalo mujhe tumhe ek paagal ladki koh dikhana hai"

Ranveer turns his face to that boy

Ranveer : kya hua Uv bana

Uv : jaldi chalo mujhe tumhe ek wierdo se milana hai...jisse mai bas abhi-abhi jhagar kar aa raha hun

Ranveer : nething serious???

Uv : no nothing of tht sort…but still come with me I want to show u tht mad gal...

Uv takes Ranveer to that place in the mall where he shared hot talk with that girl...but when he went there he dint found that gal

Uv : pata nahin wohh kahaan chali gayi abhi toh yahi thhi khair chodo hum Sid ke pass chalte hai

Ranveer : abb wohh kahan hai?

Uv : wohh M.D. main sabka wait kar raha hai

Ranveer : bana aap chaliye hum baki sabb koh wahaan lekar aate hai

Uv : cool

Ranveer goes in da pantaloon again to take all rest of his frnds along with him...while coming out of pantaloons with his frnds Ranveer again looked towards gal's wardrobe but didn't found tht gal whose voice he found soo sweet

Raveer{in mind}: shayad unhe unke papa le gaye honge

Thinking dis a smile rolled on his face…

In MD[Mc Donald]…

Sid [seeing ranveer nd rest] : dude tum sab kahan reh gaye thhe…pata hai muche kitni bhook lag rahi thhi?????

Ranveer : bana aap hum sabb ke liye kyu ruke apko bhook lg rahi thhi toh apko kuch order de dena chahiye thha na?

Sid : wohh toh maine ur Uv ne mil kar sabb ke liye de diya hai bass aata hi hoga…acha yeh chodo…dude tum koi paagal ladki ke baare me bata rahen thhe [to Uv]

Ranveer : arre ha bana aapne toh bataaya hi nahin aapka jagda kyu hua?

Uv : main happily yeh mall dekh raha thha aur pata nahin wohh ladki kaha se mere saamne aagayi aur main usse takra gaya...aur wohh bina break ki gaadi mujhe chilane lag gayi...really guys u all missed the chance to meet tht paagal khaane se bhagi hui weirdo…

a girl who was sitting with her friends on near by table was listening all what Uv was saying...

she angrily gets up and came infront of him saying...

" whats ur problem Psycho"

Uv after starring tht gal for a fews seconds…

Uv : ohh acha hua tum yahaan aa gayi...guys main abhi tumhe issi wacko ke baare mein bata raha thha...

before that girl could say ne thing Ranveer said

Ranveer : Aashi ???

ok tht was da very first part do let me know what do u think abt it...suggestions nd criticisms r most wellcome... wht all is missing in da fic...will be waiting for ur response...

Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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its very nice aditi 😊
plz do continue asap 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: shriyaroxxx

its very nice aditi 😊
plz do continue asap 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys plz tell me should i go ahead with it...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya its nice but it has already been posted if possible continue from where u left it.
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Part-2
Ranveer : Aashi aap???
Aashi now turns her face side to look that who called her name...
Aashi : duh huh Ranveer is it u?
Ranveer gets up from the chair to meet Aashi
Ranveer : Aashi aap kab aayi???
Aashi : hey bhaggu u've still not changed da way u talk…
Ranveer : Aashi aap bhi na….
Aashi : look again……yeh aap-aap kya hai haan?
Ranveer : acha aap yeh chodiye aur pehle bataaiye ki aap yahaan Indore mein?
Aashi : yup am back in Indore a month b4…
Ranveer : this is not done Aashi aap kab se aagayi aur humme pata bhi nahin thha...aur abb aap
wapas chalijayegi
Aashi : who told main waapas jaa rahi hun...maine yahin college mein admission le liya hai
Uv {who was listening to their convo}: Ranveer tum iss wacko koh jaante ho?
Aashi : ya Ranveer tum iss Psycho koh kaise...?
Ranveer : Aashi aap baithiye hum aapko sabb se milwate hai
Ranveer: Aashi aap baki sabb koh toh jaanti ho...yeh sabb hamari batch ke hi toh thhe
Aashi : ya i remember all
Aashi meets all the except Sid and Uv whom she didn't knew
Ranveer : aur Aashi yeh Sid hai… aur inse toh aap mil hi chuki hai yeh Uv hai, yeh bhi london se yahaan aaye hai
Sid : dude what do u mean by yeh bhi?
Aashi put her hand forward...infront of Sid
Aashi : hi am Anvesha...am also from London
Uv was li'll bit shocked to hear that she too came from London
both Sid and Aashi shakes hand...
Aashi didn't bothered to introduce herself infront of Uv.....same was with Uv
Just than a voice comes from the table backside
"Aashi make it fast, we have to go"
Aashi : u all reach to da parking zone I'll catch u der within 5 mins
Ranveer : aap jab Indore chor ke gayi thhi tab apne ek bhi baar humme ya batch ke kissi aur koh contact nahi kiya na hi apne humme aapka contact no. diya
Aashi : am extremely sorry Ranveer for tht...tab sabb itni jaldi-jaldi ho gaya thha isliye time hi nahin mila nd dis time look I succeed in making my Mom-dad…
Ranveer : apne kon se college mein admission liya
Aashi : prestige
Ranveer, Sid ,Uv and all: PRESTIGE COLLEGE MEIN
Aashi : haan par tum sabb itni jorr se aur shocking tone mein kyu boll rahe ho
Ranveer : Aashi hum sab ne bhi wahi admission liya hai
Aashi : gr8 phir hum saath rahenge...Ranveer tum mujhe apna number de do baaki ki baatein hum phone
par kar lenge…
both Ranveer and Aashi exchanged each others no. then Aashi leaves
Uv : dude tum iss paagal koh kaise jaante ho?
Ranveer : bana yeh hummare saath school mein thhi parr phir 10th standard ke baad inhe London jaana parra
Sid : wohh kyu?
Ranveer : unke parents unhe le gaye thhe...wohh jana toh nahi chahti thhi par phir bhi chali gayi
bass uske baad hummari unse koi baat nahi hui aur phir aaj wohh hummare saamne ek dum aa gayi
Uv : wohh kissi ke bhi saamne ek dum hi aati hai
all laughed at this...than all leaves saying to meet tomorrow in the college....
Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey aditi its grtt as it is am into fic reading dese days so do definately post moree...good work... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

ya its nice but it has already been posted if possible continue from where u left it.

thnx sweta...i thought to strt da fic all again coz da link of continuation was broken in middle ...nd after a long leap no1[exept u,soniya nd komal] would be remembering soo i started da story from da first part....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Aditi mujhe pehle bhi aapki ye fic acchi lagi thi aur ab bhi lagti hai 😊 Plzzz cont sooooon 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx sweety...am confussed whether i should go ahea with dis or should i cont from where i left as sweta told...what do u think?

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