Hell is back!!!

dun b scared😆by hell i meant my shweet frnd sindhu aka hellraiser is back ☺️ 4 those who dnt knw.... hell has been a very popluar member of rf😃.......n the BEST fic writer too😳 so after a yr of persuation😉 .....she wrote a one shot 4 me😳 unfortunately she cant open her account😭.....so im posting it.....do read it n comment pleej 😃

luv ya lots sid🤗

ashi was furious...this was nt done at all....he was her ex-bf fer heavens sake...how can he ...date neone else...
she wailed in impatience...."M.P...dun juss stand dere ...do sumthin..yuvi cant date dat skank..she luks so cheapp..."
"ashi..dun b rude...so wat if dat female dresses a lil..umm..provocatively...its his lyfe...besides i din know u wanted 2 get 2gether wid him again"
"me wid dat psycho..of course nt..."
"den wats ur problem??"M.p asked exasperatedly...
"he cant date her...he juss cant."she said stamping her foot 2 emphasise the point...
"so basically...u dun want 2 date him...but u dunt want neone else also 2 date him"
"yess....is that really 2 much 2 ask"
"ashi..stop behavin like a 2yr old....u want him...go get him..or juss leave d poor guy alone"
"poor guy??y u bein so nice abt him..u dun like him do you..."ashi asked suspiciously
M.p juss rolled her eyes nd walked off 2 class...
"okaaay...so im bein a teensy weensy bit unreasonble.....so what...he is my ex"ashi said runnin after her..
"yes he IS ur ex..the key wrd here bein ex"
"ohh come on...he still has feelings for me...hes juss makin me jealous.."she replied confidently..
"ashi...ur in denial...juss 4get abt him for 2 secs..nd please can v go 2 class?"
M.P walked 2 class only half listenin 2 ashis theory of how yuvi was on the rebound...

later...
"M.p ..alrite im nt in denial ne more....i still luv him..nd it was a stupid decesion 2 brk up...now im gonna go nd gt 2gether with him"
"what makes u think he'll take u bak??"
"y wont he??"ashi asked ..quite puzzled
"ashi..wake up...he has a gf..nd he luks happy with d bimbo...."
"nonsense..hes juss waitin fer me 2 ask him out again.."
she stalked off in search of him before M.p could stop her

"hey yuvi..."she said brightly
"yes wacko..?"he asked contemptuously
"meet me at d tennis courts...in 10 mins...please?"she said sweetly....

yuvi snorted in disbelief...
dat wacko...how dare she..
she juss broke up wid him a month ago...now when he was finally happy again wid wats-her-name......
she wanted 2 get bak 2gether....as if....
yuvraj dev doesnt get his heart broken twice by the same girl...thank you very much..
nd mann..his heart did break..into tiny lil pieces...she din think of him den did she...
'yuvi i dun think dis is wrkin...i think i need some time to think....'
ohh please...she thought nd den decided 2 get bak wid him again....
im nt at her command 2 brk or make at her wish....
but she was beautifull nd gutsy.....it was fun bein wid her..
nd it was past..unfortunately.....
but if he chose it wouldnt b past.....
it could b future...
wat future......there would b no future...juss multiple heart breaks by a very beautiful but careless woman...i deserve better dan dat....
he stopped suddenly...
two doors awaited him...one to the tennis court nd one 2 the exit of the school...
one to love(maybe) nd one to freedom
he made his decesion.....
he took a deep breath nd opened d door....

ashi tossed d tennis ball nd caught it in her hand..
dis was wat she was doin since 15 mins...
yuvi was late...
or maybe he was nt coming..she thot with a sinking feeling..
maybe M.p was rite...he was happy...
nd y wud he chose her neway...she was difficult nd weird nd she broke his heart for no reason...
"ok ashi..so hes nt coming...dun cry....ur brave...lets go home"she told herself in a small voice
she looked up nd thru hazy eyes saw a curly haired figure with a very big grin on his face nd his arms wide open....
smiled thru her tears ..the wrld was gud again...
she walked up 2 him...dey luked at each other stupid smiles on their faces..
no wrds were needed...no apololgies required....
"come here u silly girl..."he pulled her into a hug...
dey walked into the sunset..still cuddled in a hug.......

wow its awesome 😳 ...thnx rakhi for posting it...nd plz do convey my msg to sindhu tht no doubt she is a hillarious writer,me liked her fic...

chinu

first comment ought to b mine rite 😳 u knw its awesome 👏 👏 👏 bt wat ppl dunno is tht sindhu almost gav me a heartattack.....she din write the last para earlier 😡 .....n ended it on the line
he took a deep breath nd opened d door

only after sumtime she wrote the last para.....n finally i knew which door he exactly opened 🤣.....really awesome sid....i luv the last para the most 😳 😳 😳

plz write more 4 me 😳 (n now lemme run b4 u cum to hit me 4 being so greedy of ur fics 😆 😆 😆 )

ummm i dont know who's sindhu thnx rakhi for her intro...
da fic is roching...its short very sweet...
Sindhu plz do write one more fic...

good to see her back.... well, more like, um, good to see her fics 😉
y didn't u urself come online on IF, sindhu? ❓
but anyway, great job as usual 👏 i love reading ur fics 😛 .... keep up with the good wrk 😃

sid siddyyy siddoooo(c)coz dis names only reserved fr me 😆 wow dis is gr88 atleast u agreed to write fr sum1 eri persuation toh kabh chalii hee nain...dis is so cute specialy d lat line "come here u sily girl" 😆 awww...tooo goood
nd yess da hell is seriusly back 😆 😆 😉 lub u 🤗🤗🤗nd for words to describe ur fic ..leme see d dictionary fr d biggest wrd 😳 🤣

Originally posted by: uvcraziestfan

sid siddyyy siddoooo(c)coz dis names only reserved fr me 😆 wow dis is gr88 atleast u agreed to write fr sum1 eri perstion toh kabh chalii hee nain...dis is so cute specialy d lat line "come hereu sily girl" 😆 tooo goood
nd yess da hell is seriusly back 😆 😆 😉 lub u 🤗🤗🤗nd for words to describe ur fic ..leme see d dictionary r d biggest wrd 😳 🤣

well shellz......bahut mehnat karni padti hai😉......meri 1 yr persuation ka resullt hai yeh😆

oh my goooooooooood..sindhu i dnt knw u but am fallen in love wid u..dis rocks....i dnt knw why but it realyy tocuhed my heart like helllll..am actly crying and grinning and am soooooo sooo very happpyyyy.....thaanxk you soooooooo much for letitng uv choose the door he chose.....u hav shwn all aspects of ashi uv love...i mean u did a grtttttt job by hswing uvs debate btw his heart and his mind am soo happy he simply didnt jump and went for her...rather he made her wait and made her ralize his worth at the same time realzing her own worth in his life.....and d way u hav expressed gosshh its mindblwoingggg

or maybe he was nt coming..she thot with a sinking feeling..
maybe M.p was rite...he was happy...
nd y wud he chose her neway...she was difficult nd weird nd she broke his heart for no reason...
"ok ashi..so hes nt coming...dun cry....ur brave...lets go home"she told herself in a small voice
she looked up nd thru hazy eyes saw a curly haired figure with a very big grin on his face nd his arms wide open....
smiled thru her tears ..the wrld was gud again...
she walked up 2 him...dey luked at each other stupid smiles on their faces..
no wrds were needed...no apololgies required....
"come here u silly girl..."he pulled her into a hug...
dey walked into the sunset..still cuddled in a hug....... 👏👏👏AWESMEE👏👏

.........goosh dis is waat ay are silly maad crazyyyyy and dey definately need no words..just like here he just saw her face had a huge grina nd opened his arms to hold her forever throughout life..... 👏 👏 👏 ..

ps...i wld lovee to knw u dear dis is smriti dis side and i cant tel u u already hav left a huuuge impact on mee....great great jooob..... 👏 👏

😊 hi welcome back hellraiser good work
poorva

hey bhagguuuu....hey HELL RAISER....
where were you man?????
goshhh....
POOR GUY???????????? 😆
waooooooo...sahi adjective man......rokking... 😃
the way you've expressed the AASHI MP convo...heheeeeeeee.... 😆 😆 😆
fantastic yarrrr....kya jealousy chalu thi yarrrr!!!
the BIMBO BAMBO gurl friend...hahaaaaaaaaaaaa....
a bit trickyto imagine YUVI wid one...but really amazing imagining AASHI so jealous man.... 👏
"ok ashi..so hes nt coming...dun cry....ur brave...lets go home"she told herself in a small voice
she looked up nd thru hazy eyes saw a curly haired figure with a very big grin on his face nd his arms wide open....
smiled thru her tears ..the wrld was gud again...
she walked up 2 him...dey luked at each other stupid smiles on their faces..
no wrds were needed...no apololgies required....
"come here u silly girl..."he pulled her into a hug...
dey walked into the sunset..still cuddled in a hug.......
this para was a master stroke man....I really loved it HELL RAISER...( sry donno yr real name...) 😉
hey bhaggu...it was perfect Hell raiser...
crazzy, rokking as ever...waiting for yr more fics.... 😛