...HER....

hey all...hav written smethng...got this idea after reading harshus one shot....and harshu thaanx for the formating again......

do giv me ur feedback

HER

Life has its own meanings….

For some it means money…for some it means love….

But for me it means…nothing……

I was a little boy....and had always waited for my dad to give me one pat on my back…..

But all I got was an angry smirk…telling me I am good for nothing

and certainly nothing without him……

I got the legacy of shrewdness and selfishness from my father….

and all he taught me was to love d green note…..

I used to live in the bliss that I rule the world…

And was the most powerful and coveted among my friends…..

But all this was fake…and life had its own way…..

to enfold its realities…….

There came a girl…tall and fair…..

with perhaps the most wackiest attitude in the air….

Her looks disgusted me…not because she wasn't beautiful…

but because I could feel she saw through my fake world….

In a way she just made me disgust myself…..

Her presence made me accept that till now….

life had no real meaning…….

But I wanted to get out of this cobweb...

of shallow aloofness and delusioned joy…

and she became my inspiration….to carve my own niche….

Then came the glorious seven days…..

the seven days when I had actually lived for the first time

before that I was just running in a rat race…

crushing everyone beneath my false ego…..

she made me trudge new waters and showed me

every moment had a meaning of its own

smile was nothing but a faint tilt of lips for me…

but she made me laugh till I had a shiny gleam right there in my eyes

touch was nothing but a necessity….

but her one touch made me feel my presence and be utterly proud of myself….

Love was a trendy fashion…to be dumped with new arrivals…

But a look at her face told me…LOVE IS HER...

Love is this strange feeling…when all you want to do is..

ensure that she smiles always…

and all her pain is first met by me…..

but..alas….life ditched me here too…..

like myself, even those seven days were fake….

I had tried to win her over by faking love…

But I had no clue that all the time this love was as real as my heart beat…

She was the only one who was not mesmerized by my looks or my money….

she was the only one having this power over me...

She was the only one…who had cared to love my soul…..

Which I didn't know…existed deep within me…

She was broken as never before……

She was hurt to her very core

But yet she stood infront of me

Tall and stright with the grace of illumination

I realized then…that this was

my strength..my power..my enigma...

but I have lost her and perhaps even destiny wants this

she deserves someone as pure and divine as her

I know she would never forgive me

but she would always be there….as a friend….

I have to seal my love in my heart

and never let it reach my eyes…

because if she sees it..she would never even be a friend…

I have to grit my teeth and bear to see her with someone else

But all I pray to god is….whoever he is…is a real Heman

….and not a fake one like me…..

suddenly life really had no meaning…..

…..except Her…..

all I desire is to make her happy

so what if I am not the one sharing it with her

I wipe the tears which are falling from my eyes…..

…but with these tears…all my fakeness is washed away

today I have risen above shallow materialism…

.and have turned into a real man

maybe I would always be alone amidst hundreds of people

…maybe I will find someone else tomorrow…..

but the beauty of this love would go with me to my grave….

……and I would imbibe it in my songs….for the rest of the world to cherish it

but to understand it one has to be…REAL and SELFLESS

…and that's what she has made me today……….

U left me speechless.......what a beautiful n innovative way to describe ashi thru yuvi's eyes....u did it with so much perfection smriti 👏.....this one seriously touched my heart......AWESOME....u have to have to mail this to Raj smriti.....am so sure he would love it.....u just have to do this smriti......u ppl r sooooo talented......harshu brought out the emotional side of ashi so well.....n now u brought out yuvi's 👏...n also the wonderful n the most amazing mother dotty bond in the entire universe......am so so glad that AShi n Yuvi have such talented ppl as their fans.....just wish both of them could read all this stuff just once....n they would be proud to have u ppl as their fans😳 😃

Aww...smriti!!!!!1 Hats off to you!!!! That was really really amazing...I loved Yuvi's thoughts about ashi..

The best thing about it was that the whole poem told the whole AY story of season1!!! 👏 👏 👏

From d whole yashy's dominance over yuvi to d end where yuvi's all sad n remembering d memories...which r the only things he has...

Awesome...must say...this is a fitting sequel to my ashi one shot...in poetic verse! You rock! keep it up!

hey bhagguuu......
SMRITI SINGHVI...you are a surprise package today dear... 😳 😳 😳
gosh..I'm wid goose flesh yarrr.... 😛 😛
its amazingly written man...
I could acctualy feel YUVI expressing each and every line for his lady thats our AASHI...
gosh...it penetrated my heart man....
honestly...
so very well written...your power of expressing is very high...
I knew it..
but really confirmed from this one man... 😃 😃 😃
I mean....
its crystal clearly over here.. 😳 😳 😳
WAT is AASHI for YUVI man??????
LOVE, LIFE and what not re..
and as ASHITA said..
do pakka mail it to RAJ yarrr....I'm sure he'll love it man....its really written from deep core of yr heart....
don't you dare waste it...just mail it to him....
what ever you rite....its really unbeatable.....
you can write every shade of a relationship....
but this is a master stroke....
as far as I've read yr huge posts..
they were regarding AASHI...
but this one....
bhaggu bhaggu bhaggu !!!!!!!!!!
hatts off to you SIMI...
get going gurl....now I really lack adjectives for you.... 👏

Smriti...what shall I say? You have left me totally speechless and blank! I am so much touched with it😳it sooo describes yuvi's feelings for ashi... it's really very emotinal😳 i don't know what else to say😕 i am lacking of words... it's breath-taking ☺️ You are one of those few writers whom i admire a lot!☺️ that day you were like i can't make videomix or post videos or nething like that...but gurl you can write soo beautifully that you even don't need to post any videos or videomixes... Like ashi said, it feels soooo good to see those talents of AY fans on AY😳😳 you wrote this...then harshu's all one shots...mads and fate's fics...ashi's videomixes and soo many others! one or the other way... soo many AY fans are talented👏👏👏feels really good😳 and yesh do mail this to Raj😳 I am sure he would be really proud ☺️ I am just soo feeling special and emotional right now reading this ☺️ Just come online... you are getting million of huggies ☺️ 🤗 I don't know what's the best part i loved...coz it all was just awesum👏😳 but the last 3 stanza really touched me a lot! This is the true yuvi's feelings of ashi😳 I am just spellbound...though i know i said a lot😆😆😳

absolutely speechless.......luved each n every word u wrote.....it seems its jus yuvi's heart thts talking.......amazing amazing amazing.......really dun hav words to tell u how well u've broght acroess yuvi's character thru this n most importantly the way u hav shown ashi thru his eyes......wow simply awesome re 👏 .....a big hug to u 4 writing such sweet thing 🤗 do write more....

i luved these lines the most....

I know she would never forgive me

but she would always be there….as a friend….

I have to seal my love in my heart

and never let it reach my eyes…

because if she sees it..she would never even be a friend…

I have to grit my teeth and bear to see her with someone else

But all I pray to god is….whoever he is…is a real Heman

….and not a fake one like me…..

awwwww my yuvi 😭 😭 😭 these lines touched me the most!

huh superb ur work really touched my heart its seriously awesum it says it all truly describe each n every fellin yuvi has gone thru really luved the whole thin simply superb ❤️

its jus awesum its amazing fabulous ,.........,..........and the best i jus loved it

👏

thats about ALLL i can say... smritiiii!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i always knew u wrote beautifully, but this surpasses ALL!!!!!!!!! 😃 do write more!!! for tia and ranveer 😳