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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-20
The maurya students r in the corridor of maurya high and heading towards their rooms!the gang is discussing about adi's
dinner party!
uv=wacko vahaan to bade style se bol aai ki hum aa jayenge and tum apna so called bahut bada chakkar chalaogi!karogi kya!
ashi=physco kyun apne physco hone ka sabko saboot de rahe ho!party kab hai
uv=kal
ashi=to party ki tension tum abhi kyun le rahe ho!main apna chakkar chalaungi aur hum sab kal jayenge thats it!now will u
plz keep ur big mouth shut!
uv=wacko r u mad that jumbo jaise use kuch pata nahi chalega vo hume zaroor pakad lega
ranveer=ashi aapka idea risky to nahi hai na
ashi=not at all thakur!just chillax!hum kal jayenge and thats ashi's promise and u know ashi apna promise kabhie nahi todti
just then jumbo comes and says......
jumbo=ye sab aap kya discussion kar rahe hai!
sid=vo jum i mean jambwal sir hum discuss kar rahe the ki ki
pri=hum discuss kar rahe the ki annual exams mein kya kya aayega
jumbo=annual exams!par vo to ek saal baad hai
uv=par sir extra preparation to pehle se hi karni padti hai na
jumbo(sneezing)=ex tr a p rep aration!surprise aaj pehli baar aap sab ko music chodkar padai ki extra preparation karte huye
dekh raha hun!
but rite now go to ur rooms now
all=yes sir
they all go to their respective rooms!
finally sunday has come the party day has come
its evening time
tia is in her room and she is confused about her dress
tia=tia kya pehne!red dress or blue one
just then pri comes and says.....tia tum abhi tak ready nahi huyi!c'mmon hurry up!
tia=babes tia is confused ki vo kya pehne ye red dress ya ye blue wala
pri=blue dress!u will look gorgeous in it!
tia=thx for the help babes!tia abhi change karke aati hai!2 minutes!
she comes after 2 minutes and says......
tia=lets go!
pri=ok
they r in the corridor where uv,sid and ranveer were already standing!but ashi was not there
tia=ashi kahaan hai
uv=miss wacko abhi tak nahi aayi!
just then ashi comes!
ashi=hey guyz chalo!
uv=kya!aise hi vo tumhara idea!
ashi(showing a cassete)=haan chalo mera vo chakkar chala hi dete hai!subah se itna xcite ho rahe ho uske liye!
just then jumbo comes!
jumbo=ye itna tayyar hoke aap sab kahan ja rahe hai!
ashi=music practice ke liye sir music section hall mein ja rahe the
jumbo=is waqt
ashi=ab sir music ke liye kya din kya shaam kya raat aur kya aadhi raat aur kya earliest morning
jumbo=ok ok u all can go but sid aur pri to tumhare band mein nahi hai
sid=actually sir pri aur main to isliye jaa rahe hai taki hum bhi learn kar sake
jumbo=ok u can go!
he leaves and they all go to the hall
uv=mujhe pata nahi tha ki adi apni dinner party yahaan de raha hai!
ashi=shut up!ok ab mera idea suno!ye cassete hai humare hi band ke songs ka!to ye hum daal dete hai is music system mein!
and ye play button on kar dete hai!
the music starts playing!
uv=ab
ashi=ab ye ki hum yahaan ka darwaaza andar se lock kar denge!aur music chalta rahega tojumbo ko lagega hum rehearse kar rahe
aur vo andar nahi aayega
timbo can u do the honour plz
tia=sure read head!
she goes and locks the room
uv=wowwwwwwwww i mean fantabulous
ashi=hai na
ranveer=par ashi darwaza humne band kar diya to hum party mein jayenge kaise
ashi=ye humari window hai na
tia=through this window!!!!!
ashi=yup timblet u got it rite!
tia=whatever
they all one by one escape through the window and reach the hotel whre adi was throwing the dinner party
they all meet adi and sit with him!varun and amy were already there! just then others including chandni also come and they
also sit!
adi=ok guyz lets strt!menu mein se jo order karna hai kar lo!the treat is all mine
varun=cool!
they all order the best dishes!
after some time the waiter brings the food!
all r eating food!
adi's hand just reaches on his pocket!he feels that as if his pocket is empty!he strts checking his pocket and he was rite
there was nothing in his pocket!
adi(in mind)=oh shit main to apna wallet hi lana bhool gaya!
he is damnnnnnnn confused and nervous and having an xpression of AB KYA KAROON!
he sees varun, sitting at his left is eating wildly!
adi=varun bas kar yaar
varun=are adi agar main aise nahi khaunga to chandni ko doubt ho jayega ki tera birthday fake hai

ashi was sitting at his right side
adi just very slowly tells her the whole matter and asks 4 help!
just then every1 finish their food!and varun says....
varun=chalo lets order the sweet dish
adi strts sneezing and says......... ab tu sweet dish bhi khayega
varun aur nahi to kya
varun orders for the sweet dish for one and all!
ashi(slowly) to adi=dun worry adi i have a fantastic idea!bas ab kamaal dekho!
she sees 2 cockroaches under the table and she grabs them and puts one of them in uv's plate and the other one in tia's plate
and adi is like saying.......what r u doing
ashi=just 1 sec and watch the magic!
tia strts shouting and uv does the same
tia=ewwwwwwwww
uv=yukkkkkkkkkkkkkk cockroachhhhhhhh
the manager comes and apologise
and ashi in addition says.........what do u mean aapne tia ahujaaaa aur yuvraj dev jaise gr8888888 persons ko itna spoil food
dene ki himmat kaise ki!we want the compensation!
manager=ok ma'am plz count down aapka aajka sara food and sweet dish freeeee
ashi=ok i have count down!huhh
chalo guyz!
and they all exit from there!
and ashi and adi r just laughing together uv sees this and feels wierd!he is somehowwwwwwww a lil bit jealous!
p.s.:sorry for posting the part late!hope u all like it

Edited by srishti bhutani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
👏 damn gud.....seriously i realli missd ur fic......
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
really cool shrishti very fine........... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: crazy_heenz

👏 damn gud.....seriously i realli missd ur fic......

Glad you are back Shristi. I too missed your fabulous work.👏👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
i really like ur fic so plz post the next part soon

luv ya loads
sonam 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
PART-21
MAURYA HIGH
its exactly 10 p.m. in the evening!jumbo is doing some work in his cabin!on continuously hearing the songs from the hall he sees his watch and says.........
jumbo=ye log abhi tak practice!jake dekhna padega
he leaves from the cabin and strts walking in the corridor!M.P. & vrinda (who know ashi's plan) sees him proceeding towards the hall and tries to stop him!
vrinda=sir sir main main main main
jumbo=are ye kya bakriyon ki tarah main main kar rahi ho leave my way and go to ur room
M.P.=sir vo actually humare bathrooom mein paani nahi aa raha
jumbo=what!to ye sab aap mujhe kyun bol rahe ho maintenance section mein jake boliye!
vrinda=sir light bhi nahi hai humare kamre mein
jumbo=par baki maurya mein to hai!chalo dikhao apna room mujhe hi dekhna padega
M.P.=yes sir plz aayiye
he goes with them towards the room
jumbo=yahaan to light hai
vrinda(nervously laughing)=achanak hi aa gayi!
jumbo=huh!now plz let me go!
M.P.=sir but
jumbo=now plz dun say nething and let me go
they try to stop his way but fail in doing so
he is just very close to the music section hall
uv,ashi,tia,pri,sid and ranveer are just getting in through the window!ashi just switches off the music system and opens the door and jumbo was standing in front of her!
jumbo=sorry if i disturbed the rehearsals
ashi=aaaaa not at all sir infact hum sab bhi wrap up karke vapas ja rahe the
uv=true sir
jumbo=ok then jayiye
ashi=ya sure
they all move from there!
jumbo(to himself)=kuch ajeeb lag raha hai!lagta hai thakaan ki vajah se shayad aisa laga raha hai khair main bhi chalta hu!
and he also leaves from there.

ADI'S HOUSE
Adi is in his room with varun!bunty is sleeping!adi is telling the whole prank that ashi did!
varun=man!what brain!chal ab tere fake birthday ke gifts kholte hai
adi=yaar ghum firke tu ye gifts kholne ko kyun keh deta hai
varun=kholna!
adi=ok!
varun=pehle smita ka khol!
adi=oh oh!to ye sab smita ka gift khul vane ke liye
varun=bas yaar tu aise karega to main chala jaunga
adi=ok ok!countdown!baithe reh
adi opens smita's gift!there is a wind chime!
adi=wind chime how sweet of her kyun varun!
varun strts blushing!
adi=accha aisa kar tu hi ise vahaan window ki taraf laga de!
varun=ok main ye laga raha hu par iska tu koi aur matlab mat nikalna
adi=haan haan bilkul bhi nahi
varun hangs the wind chime on the window side
and gets back to adi!
adi=chal ab tera gift kholte hai
he opens his gift and sees a toy pistil and a
happy birthday note
adi=whats this!
and he brings the pistil in front of his face chalofy the pistil and water comes out!
varun strts laughing!
adi=varun this is really stupid!hamesha kanjoos rahega
varun=are mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki tere fake birthday ke liye kya lau to main holi vali pistil hi le aaya!tujhe pasand nahi aayi to bunty ko de dena
adi=ye to bunty bhi reject kar dega
varun=ok ok ab jiske liye tune ye fake birthday manaya uska gift kholte hai
adi=hmmmm ok
adi opens chandni's gift and sees a pack of choclates and a showpiece!
varun=ye showpiece tu rakh le aur choclates mujhe dede
adi=chup ye choclates bhi main rakhunga aur ye showpiece bhi!jitni sweet vo hai utna hi sweet uska gift hai
varun=ok tu ye sweetness enjoy kar main chalta hun bye
adi=bye
and he leaves from there
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
👏 .....i seriously luuuuv ur fic shrishti.........n d bst part is dat its realli very entertainin 👏 .....damn gud yaar......an awsum job 👍🏼
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
yaar this part is really nice
just love the co-incidence by which whole of the gang was saved............ 😆

plz continue soon
luv
sonam 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
keep up the good work Shristi. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
really cool..holi ki pichkari really cool idea 😊

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