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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks sweety am posting a part which i was able to write in da midnight...
Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-7
Niether Uv nor Aashi wanted to go back leaving that moment which they were sharing before their frnds came
thats why Uv asked Sid to take rest with him...Sid tactfully handles the situation nd somehow manages
to take his frnds back leaving Aashi nd Uv alone
scene changes...

after some time both Uv and Aashi were sitting on the grass [in the garden means Uv ke ghar par] and talking...
Uv : Wacko maine jab tumhe rote huae dekha toh main bilkul darr gaya thha mujhe laga tum mujhe like hi
nahi karti...
Aashi[with a wicked smile] : aur agar sach mein aisa hota toh???
Uv understood why Aashi asked that question...
Uv : agar aisa hota toh phir mujhe yeh baat kehne ke liye koi aur ladki koh dhoondna padta...nahin shaayad dhoondna nahi padta kyunki wacko u are already aware kitni saari ladkiya mujh par marti hai...
Aashi hearing that unexpected answer from Uv became very-very sad and at same time nd angry but still somehow she controlled herself...
Uv : acha wacko tum bataao agar tum mujhse pyaar karti aur agar main tumse pyaar nahi karta toh???
Aashi<knowingly> : toh main shaayad tumhe chor kar SAHIL se...u know...
Uv was totally shocked on hearing this answer from Aashi... Uv : Aashi tumhe sach mein koi farakh nahin padta?
Aashi : isme konsi chonkne waali baat hai...yumhe bhi toh koi farakh nahin padta...
Uv now comes closer to Aashi...and placed his hands on Aashi's cheeks...
Uv's eyes were filled with tears and in very shaky tone looking into Aashi's eyes......
Uv : Aashi, jab se mujhe apni feelings tumhare liye realize hue...tab se maine apni life tumhare bina imagine nahi ki...aur nahi main imagine karna chahunga...
hearing this Aashi's eyes were filled with tears...she hugged Uv,Uv too hugged her back
both of them aparts...
Aashi<in complaining tone> : nahin tum unn ladkiyo ke pass jaaona jo tum par marti hai...tumne mujhse
aisa kyu kaha?...yeh bhi nahi socha mujhe kitna bura lagega
Uv : aur tumne jo kaha wohh??? tumne kyu nahi socha mujhe kaisa lagega?
Aashi : wohh toh tumne pehle kaha isliye maine purpously wohh kaha thha...waise isse mujhe yakin ho gaya tum shuru se hi Sahil se jalte thhe...
Uv : main aur uss Paagal se jealous kabhi nahi...
Aashi : psycho agar tum confess nahi karna chahte toh koi baat nahi parr isse sach toh nahi badal jayega na...
Uv : aur wacko tum...tum kyu nahi maan leti, jab bhi tum mujhe koi cheek ke saath dekhti thhi tumhe bohot bura lagta thha aur tum unn sabhi se jalti thhi...ohh sorry jalti ho...
Aashi : aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...tum khud koh defend karne ke liye jaanbujh kar yeh sabb keh rahe ho ...
Uv<repeating what Aashi said to him> : no problem wacko tum yeh manna nahi chahti toh its ok parr isse sach toh nahi badal jaayega na.....
Aashi gave Uv an angry look...
Uv : achha am sorry my cute... nahin ...my jalkukadi lioness saying this Uv ran from there with Aashi chasing him...
Uv ran all around the garden nd than finally ran inside the house saving himself from his angry
wacko running after Uv...
finally Uv gave off nd stopped...

Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
am up with the part soo plz comment soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
awesome part!!!

luved the jealousy arguement 😃

please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
It was toooooooo cooooooooool I just love it 👏 Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditisilawat

thanks picadally 😳 ...i had read the starting of ur fic it was gr8 time reading it ,but than i couldn't continued due to lack of time i'll do so after my boards...

hey dats k yaar u can read my fic ny time n if i read ur fic its not dat u hv 2 read my fic ya its k i liked ur fic a lot its very nice so i replied!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
oh goshhhhhhhhhh.
ADITI............
gr88888888888888888888888888 !!!!!!!!!!!
simply gr8888888888888
espcially...............
MY JALKUKADI LIONESS !!!!!!!
fantastic yarr...
continue soon !!!!!!!! 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
toooooooooo good.
please cont soon.
please,please,pleaseeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks gopi,sweety,picadally,divyaashimix,divajill08 for ur lovelly comments
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: aditisilawat

Thanks gopi,sweety,picadally,divyaashimix,divajill08 for ur lovelly comments

U are most welcome dear😊

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