KYA TUM VAHI HO - new part

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SUMMARY:- This is a Tia - Ranveer fic. In this there are slight changes, not in the cast but the story. Sonia and Sumeet are married , Ranveer's dad is alive and he is a big businessman. He belongs to Sanganer but lives in Mumbai. Ranveer is a spoilt brat. His way of speaking is the same but he is a big flirt. There are five frnds of his who too like him are brats. Yuvi, Varun, Sid, Aman.all are basically good in studies even though one can never see thm styudy they get good marks. ththey all have 1 dormitory.

Tia and Ashi are sisters. They don't get along well bt can tolerate each other. Tia is into studies and fashion at the same time. She enjoys the attention she gets but doesn't entertain ne of them. She is the schoolz head- girl ( Ranveerz the head- boy).the five frds Tia, Ashi, Vrinda, mehet, Pri have 1 room.

guyz they r in twelfth.

PART 1

It is the first day in skool .All studdents assemble in the field. Suddenly anannouncement is made " The Head-boyand Head girl plz come to the stage." Tia goes and stands besides the principle Mr. Ashish Jambhwal , though all call him jumbo.

A guy comes and stands besides Tia. Tia doesn't look at him but he smiles at her. She doesn't notice him. This was the treatment meted out to all the guys. Guys ask Tia out but she refuses. She potrays as she doesn't like it but she loves all the attention. Even now while standing on the stage she could see guys looking at her and smiling, but it didn't bother her. what bothered her was that the guy next to her was the head-boy and he was constantly messing wid his hair. Several girls looked at him wid eyes full of love and hope.

The Principal then introduced the new head - boy and head-girl to everybody and asked them to shake hands. The guy, Ranveer , smiled again, but again, no reaction.

Ranveer (thinking) : shez pretty but very hard to impress but i like her style and attitude. we'll have fun.

Tia (thinking): he is so much in awe of himself. this years gonna be tough wid Tia having to spend time wid him. hez got beautiful eyes though.

PART2

The students are dismissed and all turn to leave, but Jumbo stops Ranveer and Tia.

J:Tia Ranveer ruko. main chahta hoon ki tum dono dost ban jao kyunki school ke head- boy aur head- girl ko saath mein kaafi saraa kaam karna padta hai jiske liye tum dono mein understanding honi chahiye. Tia meet Ranveer Sisodia , humari country ke business tycoon , Mr. Raj Sisodia, ka beta.Aur Ranveer yeh hai Tia Ahuja, Famous actress Sonia Ahuja , aur businessman Sumeet Ahuja ki beti.

T: hi. Raj Sisodia ka beta. tabhi itna attitude hai ismein. oh Tia's God kash Tia ko iske saath kam se kam time spend karna pade.

R: hi. Sonia Ahuja ki beti. That's why she is so pretty. hum dono ek saath kaafi cute lagenge. nice to meet you.

j: woh Tia actually ladkon e kam baat karti hai. par Tia Ranveer aisa waisa lladka nahi hai, school ka head-boy hai.Tia be nice and friendly with him atleast.

T: yes sir. nice to meet you too ranveer. Special haan, whatever, yeh tia ka Mr. Right to nahi hai na. aur Tia ko yeh accha bhi nahi lagta... par yeh dikhne mein bahut handsome hain... oh god tia yeh tum kya soch rahi ho. he is so tacky. camel. yeh Tia ko accha nahi lag sakta.parTia ko aisa kyun lagta hai yeh Tia ki life mein important hai. kya yeh ... woh toh nahi jiska intezaar Tia ko hai/nahi ais anahi ho sakta. woh toh Tia ke baarein mein bahut care karege. aur Tia ka dil usko dekhke Tia ko signal de dega.

R: aisa kyun lagta hai ki Tia humari kuch lagti hai? kyun?

What both couldn't realise was that it is not always that you can comprehend your feeligs. what they did understand was taht they would get to noe as time passes. till then they would have to wait.

PART 3

Well after then Jumbo dismisses both of them and both go to their rooms to find their friends but they don't find nebody dere so they go to the canteen. while on the way to the canteen , Tia collides with Ranveer who was cuming frm the other direction. Then Ranveer moves to his left and to her right( they are standing face to face so tiaz right is ranveerz left). Same thing happens in the other direction too, so Ranveer steps aside letting Tia go first.

When Tia enters the canteen, she finds dat all her frnds are sitting with a group of guys. Ashi was chatting with a guy with long curly hair, Vrinda with a sardar, Meher with a stupid looking guy, and Pri with a guy who had the word ' WANNABE ' written on his face that too in caps.she doesn't want to join them and her decision is further strengthened when Ranveer goes and sits with all of them and asks her to join them , winking at her and then moving his hand through his hair.

T: oh tia's god yeh tia ke friends ko kya ho gaya hai. maurya ka pehla day aur unhone Tia ko desert kar diya. ab Tia kya karegi, kaise survive karegi apne frnds ke bina.

Then she gets up and leave.It is then that her friends noice that she had been in that room. Ashi is about to get up to go after her but is stopped by Ranveer, who goes himself.He finds her sitting on a bench in the garden.He goes and sits besides her.

R: Tia aap yahan akeli kya kar rahi hai?

T:tumse matlab. Tia ke frnds Tia ko ignore kare, tia ko stupid ladkon ke liye chod de, ismein tumhara kya jata hai. you you .. camel.

R( taken aback): hum toh yahan pe bas aapko bulane aaye the. humare aur aapke doston mein dosti ho gayi hai. kyun na hum bhi dost ban jaye.(moves his hand forward for a handshake)

T: Tia ko tum jaise .. gavar.. camel ka frnd nahi ban na hai. yahan se chale jao.

R: maurya ki koi bhi ladki Ranveer Sisodia ki dost banne ke liye kuch bhi karti ( moving his hand through his hair) aur app hai ki mana kar rahi hai.

T:tum apne aap ko bada handsome aur good looking samajhte ho na? Tia Ahuja tum jaise ladkon ko ghas bhi nahi dalti.(getting up to leave)

R: Tia hum aap se promise karte hain ki aap hume ghaas zaroor dalengi.

PART 4

Well Ranveer stuck to his promise. He never let a moment pass when they would meet and he wouldn't ask her out or express his 'feelings' for Tia.Even his friends were a little puzzled by his behaviour as he was a guy who was followed by girls but these days he followed a girl who didn't even pay attention to his advances.This behaviour of his also troubled several girls especially Rewa .

Rewa belonged to a respectable family, but her behaviour was like of a typical t.v. serial vamp. She never wasted a moment to fire an insult at Tia, who considered rewa to be non existent. Ashi was very pissed off by rewa's behavoiur, and even mentioned it to Yuvi, so that he could talk to Ranveer. ranveer disliked rewa a lot and like other times, today too he was going to give Rewa a good blast off as she had called Tia an attention seeking girl who literally ran after guys.

By the way Tia was pretty much okay with her friends' bfs.She even spoke to all of them and sat with them at lunch but she completely ignored Ranveer who would be looking at her all the time.

This is happening in the canteen where all the friends of the head-boy and head-girl a.ka. Ranveer and Tia are sitting.Rewa is sitting at a nearby table.

R:Rewa aap apne aap ko kya samajhtihai?aapko kisne haq diya humari Tia ko kuch kehne ka? kya aap janti hai ki Tia attention seeking nahin hai, woh toh hum hain joh unse beintehaan mohabbat karte hai. par yeh baar baar humare humara dil todti hain kyunki inko ladkon mein interest nahi hai.

At this point rewa started shedding her " crocodile tears' to gain sympathy. But Ranveer still jhadofying her. Then Tia stood up .

T: Mr. Ranveer Sisodia

R: you can call me Ranveer, janu jaan, darling, hubby, nething you like.

T( continuing as if Ranveer never spoke):puhlease for heaven's sake stop troubling her

R: par inhone aapko

T: Tia doesn't care

R: par Ranveer does. koi bhi humari Tia ke baarein mein ulta seedha nahi keh sakta.

T: puhleas Ranveer Shyla ko trouble mat karo

R: ek shart par..... ki aap humare saath date pe jayengi.

This was too much for Tia and she left the canteen. None of her friends bulged as such things were common, Ranveer ka pyaar aur Tia ka gussa, was nothing new.It was Ranveer who followed her.


PART 5

Several days past by. The students didn't even realise dat it was their last week in school b4 the vacations. All of them were in a cheerful mood except Ranveer and Tia. These days Ranveer did not trouble Tia, he just followed her everywhere. Even in class he always made it a point to sit near Tia.At times he even came to Tia's room on pretext of having left a book with Ashi or probably to take notes.

The change in ranveer's behaviour didn't affect Tia much. Now she used to be her normal self, chatting with the guys, having fun, she wasn't conscious about Ranveer anymore.

Yuvi, Sid Varun and, Aman found Ranveer's behaviour to be different from the normal.Earlier he left left a moment to flirt with girls but this particular week he looked very sad and moros.His friends tried to ask him about the problem he had but he dismissed them saying tha it was nothing.But today is the last day and then all would be going for the vacations , so they all decide to try for the last time.

they all are sitiing in their room listening to songs while Ranveer was sitting at the window looking outside.

Y:Ranveer dude tumhe ho kya gay hai?itne ajeeb kyun behave kar rahe ho? whats the mtter? apne doston ko toh bata sakte ho.

V:Tia

At this Ranveer looked at all of them with surprise since he obviously wasn't paying attention to anything that they were saying.but this particular name brought him out of his daze.

R:huh.. aapne kuch kaha.

A:nahi ranveer humein jo janna tha uska jawaab mil gaya.

S: haan bro yeh batayo ki tumhe pyaar kab aur kaise hua.

Ranveer looked at them with a surprised look.

R:aapko kaise

ALL: hum tumhare dost hai yaar tumhare dil ka haal samajhte hain.

R:humein pyaar tab hua jab humne unhe pehli baar dekha.jab pehli baar unhone humara naam liya.jab pehli baar woh muskurayi.aur tab jab woh humare upar gussa hoti hai.hum unhe jab bhi dekhte hai toh unse pyar ho jata hai.ab hum yeh baat soch bhi nahi pa rahe ki woh humse do mahine door rahengi.hum unke bagair nahi reh payenge.

S:humara dost toh gaya.Ranveer don't worry tumhari problem hum solve karenge.tum Tia se chhutiyon me miloge, zaroor.

Ranveer looked at him with eyes full of hope and happiness.

Y: aha Ranveer ke face par glow toh dekho.Humara dost toh gaya. abyeh sirf Tia ke baare mein sochega, humein bhool jayega.

S:love ballads likhega, romantic gaane sunega,akele mein pagalon ki tarah hasega

V:aankhen band karega toh ek hi chehra nazar aayega.

A: har jagah bas Tia Tia aur sirf Tia.

All:aankhen band karke jo ek chehra nazar aaya, woh tumhi ho

R:banna aap sab humein hi kyun .. aap logon bhi toh girlfrnds hai na phir aap ( blushing)

Y:magar humse believe nahi ho raha ki Ranveer Sisodia , The Casanova has fallen in love.

R: accha bas kijiye humein chidhana.bataiye Sid ki hum Tia se kaise milenge.

S: woh toh ek surprise hain.Yucvi tumhare ghar ja raha hai.Tumhare aur mere ghar ke beech one full house hai.aur huvarun aur aman bhi aa jayenge. phir hum sab ek saath time spend karenge.

R: par Tia.

Y: patience ranveer patience.

V: after all sabra ka fal meetha hota hai.

Y: nahi tia hoti hai.

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PART 6

That day none of they students were in the mood to study specially the guys Ranveer was the most distracted of them all, well not because of the coming vacations but because of Tia. Tia was wearing a light pinl dress and was looking extremely gorgeous. Ranveer was unable to get his eyes off her.It must have been a hundred times when he tried to strike a conversation with her but today she was surrounded by her friends the entire day.

In class , however, Ranveer was sitting besides her, as usual, and kept looking at her. For this he had to be scolded several times, but today, it seemed like he didn't care.

After the class was over Jumbo called ranveer and tia to his room for some back.In the meantime, Yuvi told ashi and her friends about Ranveer's feelings for tia.

Y: Ranveer sach mein Tia se pyaar karne laga hai. ab woh uske baare mein bahut serious hai.

A:yeh to hona hi tha

S: matlab

P: Tia jaisi ladki se kaun pyaar nahi krega

M: aur maine toh humashe se hi Ranveer ki aankhon mein tia ke liye pyaar dekha hai.woh jo bhi karta tha mazak nahi thaS.unse apni feelings der se realise kiya.

Va: par inka faidaa kya hoga Ranveer ka dil to tootega hi.Tia toh use tolerate bhi ahi kar pati hai.

V: aisi baat nahi hai.Tia bhi Ranveer se pyaar karti hai. i am sure

Am: kaise pata

A: woh Tia ki ek diary hai jismein Tia ne Ranveer ke baare mein feelings likhi hai. is diary mein Tia ke true self ke baare mein sab kuch hai.

UY: par ranveer aur tia ko kaise samjhaye apni feelings xpress karne ke liye.

Vr: woh tum humpe chod do.

Am: hello ranveer ek to upset hai is wajah se ki woh tia se do mahine mil nahi payega aur ab pata nahi tum kya karoge.

At this all the girls and sid start laughing.The others look at them puzzled.

Va: tum has kyun trahe ho .kya baat hai hume in bhi batao na.

After Jumbo lets Ranveer and Tia go, Ranveer finds the moment perfect to talk to tia as they both are alone.

R: Tia hum aapse kuch pucche

T: puccho

R: woh aap chuttiyon mein kya karengi?

T: tia ke mumma aur pappa bahar ja rahein hain, isliye Tia, Ashi, Pri, aur Vrinda meher ke ghar par stay karenge.

R: Meher ka ghar kahan pe hai?

T: Tia ko pata nahi meher ka new ghar kahan pe hai.

R:oh. accha Tia aap humse naraz toh nahi hai humari harkatonke liye.

T: nahi Tia tumpe naraz nahi hai.Tia noes ki tum aise hi ho, saari ladkiyon ke saath aise hi behave karte ho

R: nahi woh hum toh..

At this point they reach the canteen and are surrounded by their friends and do not get a moment to talk to each other before leaving.

Ranveer comes to Tia's room to say bye to her after which he hurriedly leaves as the girls start giggling and he gets embarassed..The guya leave Maurya to return home.Ranveer looks back and finds tia looking out of the window , but he thinks it is his imagination as Tia would not want to see him at all, if possible, for he had troubled her a lot.

But what Ranveer doesn't understand that it is not only anger that makes a girl avoid a guy, but it can be something else too..........

PART 7

Tia and the girls arrive at Meher's new house.A they get out of the car, Tia notices a big palatial house. She goes and just when she was about to read the name plate, a car suddenly arrives from behind and keeps honking, so she leaves without reading the name plate. But she loves the house as it was the kinds she had always dreamt of.

The girls drag Tia inside with them. Tia loves being with her friends but today she was in a different state of mind altogether. She felt as if in the car she sqw aome1 she knew. she even asks meher about the palatial house but Meher has no info about the ppl in this area as she is knew to this place.

In the car there certainly was some1 Tia knew.When Tia was trying to read the nameplate, a car arrived from behind, the windows were tinted black so Tia couldn't see who was inside bit those inside could see her.Ranveer is surprised to see Tia outside his house.

R: aap logon ne woh dekha jo maine dekha?

Y: kya?

R: Tia

Am: kya ranveer kuch bhi haan tia yahan pe kaise aayegi.

R: nahin sach humne dekha unhe. humare ghar ke bahr woh ladki tia hi thhi.

Va: Ranveer tum Tia ke pyar mein pagal ho gaye ho. kya anaab shanaab bak rahe ho.Tia yahan pe kyun aayegi.

Y: haan use kaise pata chalega ki tum yahan rehte ho.

S: Ranveer thik keh raha hain. woh Tia hi thi.Tia, aur uske dost Meher ke ghar par rehne aaye hai. Ranveeer Meher abse hum dono ki neighbour hain. us naye ghar mein Meher ki family aayi hai.

R: arre waah. chaliye na hum Tia se milke aate hain( dragging his friends towards Meher's house)

Y: dude abhi nahi ka jayenge. pakka

R: par hum Tia se mile baigaar raat ko kaise so payenge.

S: simple uske sapne dekh lena.

And then they aal eat food and go to sleep.

Yuvi , varun , aman are staying at Ranveer's place, Sid is his neighbour.

The girls have all gone to sleep after a long time of chattering.But tia is unable to sleep , she is curious to find out who lives in that house, so she slips out of the house. There ranveer is also unable to sleep and has come out for a walk. Tia sees Ranveer but thinks that she is imagining.

T: tia tum us tacky camel ke baare mein kyun soch rahi ho. woh gavar is ghar mein kaise reh sakta hai. par uske dad toh bahut rich hai. nahi Tia woh itna important nahi hai iki tum uske baare mein sochon .

then she goes back to Meher's house.

Ranveer overhears Tia and is a bit upset though he is proud that Tia liked his house. He too returns and has a peaceful sleep. full of 'sweet' dreams ar actually dreams of sweet people.

The next day is Yuvi's birthday.So yuvi wanted to meet his girlfriend early in the morning. He wakes all the guys up and goes to Meher';s house. Meher's brother is Sid and Ranveer's very good friend. He takes them to the girls room.

The room is opened by ashi, who is unable to beleive her eyes that she saw yuvi in the morning and slams the door on his face, thiuinking taht she is dreaming. But then Ranveer knocks on the door and Ashi realise that they all were there, physically. She lets all of tehm enter. Tia was having a bath and Ranveer is a bit disappointed on being unable to see her.Everybody wishes Yuvi.Ashi gives him a small peck on the cheek. yuvi invites them to a disco that night and all agree to come. Just as they were about to leave after talking for a few minutes, Tia comes in a blue dress, with wet hair . Ranveer looks at her dumbstruck. he is only able to utter a hi when Yuvi and varun drag him along.

T: toh ranveer ko Tia ne kal raat dekha tha, Tia dream nahi kar rahi thi. iska matlab woh gahr ranveer ka hi hai.

A: kya bak bak kar rahi ho

T: kuch nahi

Vr: haan aaj Yuvi ka birthday hai aur hum sab ko raat ko disco mein jana hain

T: accha Tia nahi jayegi

M: kyun

T: Tia ka mood nahi hai.Yuvi ka birtyhday party mein Tia kya karegi?

A: main kuch nahi janti mere Yuvi ki party mein tum aa rahi ho

T: par..

A: keh diya bas keh diya.

PART 8

It is evening and almost time for the party.

Meher's family is out of town for a week or two, so they don't need to worry about taking permission and coming early. everybody is ready except tia , who was getting ready. in the meantime

A: yaar yeh tia itna time kyun laga rahi hai?

M: Ranveer se milna jo hai

V: vaise guys humne ladkon ko keh to diya ki Tia Ranveer ko pasand karti hai, par kya sach mein

P: mujhe nahi lagta

A: mujhe lagta hai. ek kaam karte hai, abet lagte hai, agar tia n e ranveer ko school start hone se pehle kiss kiya to main jeeti varna pri tum jeeti

P: ok. done. lagi bet.

A: lek kaam karte hai. hum sab nikal jaate hain aur tia ko chod dete hai

V: par woh kaise aayegi

M: ranveer hai na

P: fine lets go

they all leave leaving Tia alone. Ranveer waits for Tia in Meher's room. she comes out wearing a black off- shoulder dress, looking totally hot. Ranveer looks at her charmed by her beauty.

T: tum yahan kya kar raheho camel aur tia ke friends kahan hai

R: woh sab chale gaye

T: what tia ko chod kar. tia kya karegi ab

R: aapko humare ssaath jana padega, kya aap

R: tum thik to ho na, tia aur tumhare saath jayegi. forget it

R: thik hai. phir hum chalte hai. aap yahin rahiye.bye

T: nahi nahi ruko. tia is sorry. tia tumhare saath jane ke lye taiyaar hai. bas five minutes.

she then goes to wear a necklace, but is unable to do so. Ranveer goes to help her, she first objects but then allows him to to put the necklace.He removes her hair from her back.his touch sends shivers down the body, he could see his effect on her and smiles to himself

T: jaldi karo

R: lijiye ho gaya

R: vaise aap bahut hi pretty lag rahi hai

T: thanx.after all tia ahuja hona koi aisi vais baat nahi.

Ranveer smiles at her.then they leave for the party.all the way Tia remians silent, and speaks only to scold him.when they reach the party,Ranveer opens the door for her and holds out his hand, but Tia doesn't even notice. after all the cake cutting, everybody goes to dance. ranveer asks tia for a dance but she refuses.so he goes and dances with some other girl.tia goes and orders a juice at the counter,but only drinks where available, so tia asks the bartender to give her anything.so he gives her a glass of beer. tia drinks it without even thinking.soon the beer has its effect on Tia.she goes and pushes the girl, who was dancing with Ranveer, away and starts dancing herself. Ranveer is obviously delighted and is unaware that tia is drunk.

Tia then takes him aside.

T: ranveer tumhe pata hai ki tia tumse bahut payaar karti hi.tia ko tumhari aankhen bohot hi acche lagti hai,specially jab unmein ttiake liye pyaar nazar aata hai.par sabse se zyaada accha to tia ko tumhare lips acche lagte hai. plz ranveer tia ko kiss karo na

Ranveer finds it difficult to control himself from fulfilling tia's desire and understands that tia must be drunk or else she wouldn't have made such a request.

R: tia aap hosh mein nahi hai.chaliye aapko ghar chod de

T: nahi ranveer tia hosh mein hai.plz tia ko kiss karona.

PART 9

Ranveer took Tia or shall we say carried her to Mehr's house and then to her room.he informed the others abt Tia's condition and they left the party to return.

Ranveer laid Tia down on the bed and was going to leave but Tia was holding his hand and won't let go.Even in sleep she was murmuring dat Tia loves you Ranveer. Tia loves you. Puhlease kiss Tia.

R: Tia agar apne yeh sab tab kaha hota jab aap hosh mein hoti toh hum aap ki iccha zaroor poori karte. ek baar kya hazar baar karte.par Tia aap hosh mein nahi hai aur hum aapke behoshi ka faidaa nahi utha sakte.

He then went to sleep next to tia holding her hand.The others slept on the sofa or on the floor.Ashi slept on the bed besides Tia.

Tia was the first person to get up in the morning.she got up with a lot of difficulty as there was a lot of pain in her head.Then she noticed dat Ranveer was sleeping besides her holding her hand.

T:RANVEER!!

R: arre tia aap uth gayi. ab kaisi hai aap.(smiling to himself remembering what tia did last night)

Tia saw him smiling and her doubt became strong.

T:kal raat ko kya hua tha Ranveer

R: kal raat ko Tia aap

T: kal raat ko tumne Tia ke saath kya kiya batao.Tia knows ki you drugged Tia aur phir uski behoshi ka faidaa uthaya.u are disgusting.

R: Tia humne aisa kuch nahi kiya.aap humein galat samajh rahi hai.

Ashi:Tia kal tum hosh mein nahi thi aur ismein Ranveer ki koi galti nahi thi.

T: tumhe beechmein bolne ki koi zaroorat nahi.Tia is sure ki iss camel ne Tia ka faidaa uthaya.

R: Tia aap ek baar humari baat toh suniye.

T: Tia ko tumhari koi baat nahi sunni.infact Tia ko tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhni.

R: thik hai Tia agar aap yahi chahti hai to yahi sahi.par ek baar apne dil se poochiyega ki kya hum aapka faidaa tha sakte hai.

Saying this Ranveer left Meher's hous.The guys also left with him.After this Tia got a full blasting frm ashi.

A: Tia tum apne aap ko kya samajhti ho.kya zaroorat thi yeh sab kehne kiRanveer ne tumhara kya bigada hai, bas pyaar hi toh karta hai tumse. agar pyaar karna paap hai toh tum bhi paapi o.

T: Tia Ranveer se pyaar nahi karti.

P: Ashi ne toh Ranveer ka naam liya hi nahi.

PART 10

The days passed by.There was an uncomfortable air always around the friends because of Tia and Ranveer. Ranveer now completely avoided Tia.Ashi had tried several times to make Tia realise her mistake but to no avail.This day too like the other ones, a heated argument was going on between the girls.

V: Tia for heaven's sake, plz yeh actig chodo aur apni feelings ko accept karlo.Ranveer se apologise karlo.

T:Tia aisa kuch nahi karegi.aur tia konsi feelings accept kare, bolo, yehi ki Tia Ranveer ko hate karti hai.

P:Tia hum sab jante hai, tum bhi janti ho ki tumhari feelings kya hai.

M:haan babes yeh hide- and-seek ka game mat khelo.

T(shouting):TUM MEINSE KISIKO TIA KI BAAT SAMAJH KYUN NAHI AATI?TIA DOESN'T LOVE RANVEER.DO U UNDERTAND.

A(moving in with what seemed like a diary in hand) :well as a matter of fact i do.mein janti hoon ki tum kya feel karti ho Ranveer ke liye.guys tum sab ko kuch padhvana hai.

4th April

Aaj Tia ka Maurya mein first day tha.Aaj Maurya mein Tia, Ranveer se mili.Ranveer Sisodia, the most good looking guy ever born.

7th April

Tia ne aaj Ranveer se baat ki.tia thinks that Tia is in love with Ranveer

12th April

Tia ko aisa kyun lagta hai ki woh Ranveer hi haijisko bhagwan ne Tia ke liye banaya hai.Ranveer Tia tumse poochti hai

KYA TUM VAHI HO?

31st April

Ranveer bhi aajkal publicly Tia ke liye apne love ka declaration karta hai.par tia janti hai ki yeh sab mazak hai.woh Tia se kyun pyaar karega, uske paas to kaafi ladkiyan hai pyaar karne ke liye.

Tia is scared ki agar ranveer ko Tia ki feelings ka pasta chal gaya toh woh Tia ka mazak udayega.isliye Tia ne kisiko apni feelings nahi batayi- tumhare siva diary.

9th May

Aaj yuvi ka birthday tha.Tia ko party tak Ranveer ne drop kiya.magar party mein Tia ne nashe mein Ranveer ko apni true feelings batadi. Tia is scared ki ab kya hoga?

10th May

Tia need not be scared anymore.aaj Tia ne Ranveer ko bahut scold kiya.Ranveer bahut upset hai.ab woh tia se baat bhi nahi karega.aur usse yeh kabhi nahi pata chale ga ki Tia loves him.

15th May

Ranveer abhi tak Tia ko nahi dikha

20th May

no sign of Ranveer yet.

Tia tumhari poori diary mein sirf ek hi insaan ka naam likha hai- RANVEER.Kya tum ab bhi yahi kahogi ki tum Ranveer se pyaar nahi karti?

T( shocked): woh..... actually......umm... Tia.... woh

P:it's ok Tia we understand par ab tumhe Ranveer ke paas jana padega.

T: nahi babes Tia aisa nahi kar sakti.

A: fine mat jao.main yeh diary jaaake ranveer ko de deti hoon.simple.

M:good idea.kyun vrinda.

V:main Ashi ke saath hoon.

T:ok.ok Tia Ranveer se baat karegi.par aaj shaam ki party mein.

A:promise

T:Tia promise.

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PART 11

That evening everybody got ready pretty fast except the usual late - lateef -Tia.

A:Tia kitna time laga rahi ho, it's already eight . aur hume 9 pahuchna hai.

T:bas das minut aur.

P:tabse das minute bole jaa rahi ho

V: yeh das minute kabkhatam honge.

T:babes Tia bas aayi.

P(whispering so that Tia couldn't hear) :ek kaam karte hain hum Tia ko yahin chod dete hai.Ranveer use le aayega and she would be able to talk to him in the car.

Ashi gives her a thumbs-up sign.

A:Tia hum jaa rahe hain.tum baad mein aa jana.

T:par par..(she came out of the bathroom in a bathrobe running, but thay had already left).

ab Tia kyakare.Tia akeli chalejayegi.

She then takes her dress and goes to dress up .

while she was in the loo, getting ready, Ranveer had been sent there, so he was w8ing for her in the room.Tia came out from the bathroom wearing a nice hot dress and looking xtremely stunning.But Ranveer didn't even look at her as he was busy reading a magazine.

T:hi Ranveer.kaise ho?

R:thik(without lifting his eyes)

T:accha. tum aaj bahut hi acche lag rahe ho.

R:hmm

T:Tia kaisi lag rahi hai.

R:acchi.(without even looking)

Tia really felt very upset as it was generally Ranveer who started the conversation but he wasn't even replying properly.

T:chalein

Ranveer got up, he kept the magazine and went and sat in the car.Tia came and sat next to him.The entire way Ranveer didn't talk to tia oreven look at her, helooked very interested in riving.tia tried to talk to him, but till when can you speak when you get cold responses like haan, accha, ok.so, she also gave up and sat silently the entire way.

When they reached the disco, Tia was ushered to a side by her friends and bombareded with questions about what happened on the way,but everybody became upset when they got an answer in the negative.

Tia sat at the bar while all were dancing.Then yuvi pulled tia and started dancing with her.ranveer on the other hand was dancing with ashi.Then they rotated their parteners.ranveer with vrinda, tia with aman,this happened several times till they both had danced with everybody possible, carefylly avoiding each other.But as luck would have it. they were soon pushed together in the centre by their friends so that they could dance.as soon as they saw these two 2gether evrybody, stopped and looked at them intently, praying that everything goes well.But alas,Tia and Ranveer kept on looking at otherpeople avoiding each other's eyes till Ranveer went oustside.

Tia who , by now had big tears in her eyes went to the loo.Ashi followed her.

A:tum yahan pe kyun chali aayi

T:ashi Tia ne kitni koshish ki Ranveer se baat karne ki ghsr pe, car mein par woh tia ko ignore kar raha hai.aur Tia sab kuch tolerate kar sakti hai par uska ignorance nahi.coz Tia loves him.

Tia ki kya galti hai, yahi ki usse pyaar kiya.Tia darti thi ki woh Tia ki feelinga ka mazk udayega isliye Tia chup rahi.Tia usse jhagadti thi ki woh Tia ko irritate kane ke liye usse baat kare.Tia use marti thi taki usse choo sake.Tia ka bhi man karta hai usse baatein karne ka, usse choone ka, usse kiss karne ka.par.... woh.. tia ...se baat hi nahi karta.

A:(hugging her)Tia tumne uski feelings ko hurt kiya hai.usse misunderstand karke.jao apologise karo.

Tia leaves smiling.

A:and haan get ur kiss too.

PART 12

Tia goes outside and sits on a bench besides Ranveer.

R:aap yahan pe kyun aayi hain.chale jaiye.humein aapse koi baat nahi karni.

T:par Tia ko karni hai, aur Tia bina bole nahi jayegi.Tia is really sorry ranveer.puhlease usse maaf kardo.

R:aap yahan pe kyun aayi hai.hum aapse baat karna nahi chahte.aap plz yahan se chali jayiye.

T:par ek baar Tia ki baat toh sunlo.

R(getting teary - eyed):nahi Tia.humari galti kya hai batayiye, yahi ki humein aapse pyaar ho gaya.hum sirf aapke dost banna chahte the aur apne hum par itna ganda ilzaam lagaya.(starting to cry)us din nashe ki halat mein aap humein kiss karna chahti thi.hum chahte toh aapko kiss kar sakte the par humne aisa nahi kiya.hum aapko Meher ke ghar le gaye.aap humara haath nahi chod rahi thi, isliye hum vahin par so gaye.subah jab neend khuli toh aapne humein kaha ki humne aapki behoshi ka faidaa uthaya hai. kyun Tia bataiye humari galti kya hai. batayiye.

Tia slowly kissed him on the lips.

R:ab yeh kisliye tha.

T:Ranveer tum bahut baatein karte ho.chup hi nahi hote.ab Tia ki baat suno. Tia is sorry.Tia knows ki Tia ne tumhari feeelings hurt ki hai,par Tia ko laga ki tum Tia se pyaar nahi karte aur agar tumhe pata chal jataki Tia tumse pyaar karti hai toh tum uska mazak udate.Tia is really sorry Ranveer.

R:it's okay Tia( hugging Tia). vaise agar hum jab bhi zyaada bolne lage toh aap aise hi chup karaiyega.style accha hai.

T:akhir Tia ahuja hona koi aisi vaisi baat nahi.

Edited by ranv_rules - 19 years ago
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Well guys as i promised i will write the next part on 21st i.e. when my xams finish.

i have a bio exam tom then chem on hursday so i am pretty sure of the fact that my brain is gonna get very tired bcoz of all the learning i have to do.

so guys i want u all to tell me what should i write nd ya tose who haven't read this fic till now plz read nd comment.


luv

sagarika
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its wonderful! 👏
and good luck with ur bio and chem exams 😳
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and i am the first one to reply! yay!!! 😃 😃
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best of luck 4 ur bio and chem exams.
post soon d new part of ur fic.
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Awesome 😳 ...cont sooooooooooon!!
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wow sagrika at last u cont ur fic.
thanx yaar n cont soon.
all the best 4 ur exam.

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