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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey sags the part was awsoem ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part Sagarika ๐Ÿ‘

"Sabhr ka phal Tia hoti hai" ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 6

That day none of they students were in the mood to study specially the guys Ranveer was the most distracted of them all, well not because of the coming vacations but because of Tia. Tia was wearing a light pinl dress and was looking extremely gorgeous. Ranveer was unable to get his eyes off her.It must have been a hundred times when he tried to strike a conversation with her but today she was surrounded by her friends the entire day.

In class , however, Ranveer was sitting besides her, as usual, and kept looking at her. For this he had to be scolded several times, but today, it seemed like he didn't care.

After the class was over Jumbo called ranveer and tia to his room for some back.In the meantime, Yuvi told ashi and her friends about Ranveer's feelings for tia.

Y: Ranveer sach mein Tia se pyaar karne laga hai. ab woh uske baare mein bahut serious hai.

A:yeh to hona hi tha

S: matlab

P: Tia jaisi ladki se kaun pyaar nahi krega

M: aur maine toh humashe se hi Ranveer ki aankhon mein tia ke liye pyaar dekha hai.woh jo bhi karta tha mazak nahi thaS.unse apni feelings der se realise kiya.

Va: par inka faidaa kya hoga Ranveer ka dil to tootega hi.Tia toh use tolerate bhi ahi kar pati hai.

V: aisi baat nahi hai.Tia bhi Ranveer se pyaar karti hai. i am sure

Am: kaise pata

A: woh Tia ki ek diary hai jismein Tia ne Ranveer ke baare mein feelings likhi hai. is diary mein Tia ke true self ke baare mein sab kuch hai.

UY: par ranveer aur tia ko kaise samjhaye apni feelings xpress karne ke liye.

Vr: woh tum humpe chod do.

Am: hello ranveer ek to upset hai is wajah se ki woh tia se do mahine mil nahi payega aur ab pata nahi tum kya karoge.

At this all the girls and sid start laughing.The others look at them puzzled.

Va: tum has kyun trahe ho .kya baat hai hume in bhi batao na.

After Jumbo lets Ranveer and Tia go, Ranveer finds the moment perfect to talk to tia as they both are alone.

R: Tia hum aapse kuch pucche

T: puccho

R: woh aap chuttiyon mein kya karengi?

T: tia ke mumma aur pappa bahar ja rahein hain, isliye Tia, Ashi, Pri, aur Vrinda meher ke ghar par stay karenge.

R: M eher ka ghar kahan pe hai?

T: Tia ko pata nahi meher ka new ghar kahan pe hai.

R:oh. accha Tia aap humse naraz toh nahi hai humari harkatonke liye.

T: nahi Tia tumpe naraz nahi hai.Tia noes ki tum aise hi ho, saari ladkiyon ke saath aise hi behave karte ho

R: nahi woh hum toh..

At this point they reach the canteen and are surrounded by their friends and do not get a moment to talk to each other before leaving.

Ranveer comes to Tia's room to say bye to her after which he hurriedly leaves as the girls start giggling and he gets embarassed..The guya leave Maurya to return home.Ranveer looks back and finds tia looking out of the window , but he thinks it is his imagination as Tia would not want to see him at all, if possible, for he had troubled her a lot.

But what Ranveer doesn't understand that it is not only anger that makes a girl avoid a guy, but it can be something else too..........

Edited by ranv_rules - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww you are awesome writer
I read both the parts
Greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat parts
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Can't wait for the next part
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yes Iam the first to reply ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey sagarika,count me in also as a regualr reader of ur fic,d part was awesomeeeeeee ๐Ÿ‘
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 7

Tia and the girls arrive at Meher's new house.A they get out of the car, Tia notices a big palatial house. She goes and just when she was about to read the name plate, a car suddenly arrives from behind and keeps honking, so she leaves without reading the name plate. But she loves the house as it was the kinds she had always dreamt of.

The girls drag Tia inside with them. Tia loves being with her friends but today she was in a different state of mind altogether. She felt as if in the car she sqw aome1 she knew. she even asks meher about the palatial house but Meher has no info about the ppl in this area as she is knew to this place.

In the car there certainly was some1 Tia knew.When Tia was trying to read the nameplate, a car arrived from behind, the windows were tinted black so Tia couldn't see who was inside bit those inside could see her.Ranveer is surprised to see Tia outside his house.

R: aap logon ne woh dekha jo maine dekha?

Y: kya?

R: Tia

Am: kya ranver kuch bhi haan tia yahan pe kaise aayegi.

R: nahin sach humne dekha unhe. humare ghar ke bahr woh ladki tia hi thhi.

Va: Ranveer tum Tia ke pyar mein pagal ho gaye ho. kya anaab shanaab bak rahe ho.Tia yahan pe kyun aayegi.

Y: haan use kaise pata chalega ki tum yahan rehte ho.

S: Ranveer thik keh raha hain. woh Tia hi thi.Tia, aur uske dost Meher ke ghar par rehne aaye hai. Ranveeer Meher abse hum dono ki neighbour hain. us naye ghar mein Meher ki family aayi hai.

R: arre waah. chaliye na hum Tia se milke aate hain( dragging his friends towards Meher's house)

Y: dude abhi nahi ka jayenge. pakka

R: par hum Tia se mile bbaigaar raat ko kaise so payenge.

S: simple uske sapne dekh lena.

And then they aal eat food and go to sleep.

Yuvi , varun , aman are staying at Ranveer's place, Sid is his neighbour.

The girl have all gone to sleep after a long time of chattering.But tia is unable to sleep , she is curious to find out who lives in that house, so she slips out of the house. There ranveer is also unable to sleep and has come out for a walk. Tia sees RAnveer but thinks that she is imagining.

T: tia tum us tacky camel ke baare mein kyun soch rahi ho. woh gavar is ghar mein kaise reh sakta hai. par uske dad toh bahut rich hai. nahi Tia woh itna important nahi hai iki tum uske baare mein sochon .

then she goes back to Meher's house.

Ranveer overhears Tia and is a bit upset though he is proud that Tia liked his house. He too returns and has a peaceful sleep. full of 'sweet' dreams ar actually dreams of sweet people.

The next day is Yuvi's birthday.So yuvi wanted to meet his girlfriend early in the morning. He wakes all the guys up and goes to Meher';s house. Meher's brother is Sid and Ranveer's very good friend. He takes them to the girls room.

The room is opened by ashi, who is unable to beleive her eyes that she saw yuvi in the morning and slams the door on his face, thiuinking taht she is dreaming. But then Ranveer knocks on the door and Ashi realise that theya ll were there, physically. She lets all of tehm enter. Tia was having a bath and Ranveer is a bit disappointed on being unable to see her.Everybody wishes Yuvi.Ashi gives him a small peck on the cheek. yuvi invites them to a disco that night and all agree to come. Just as they were about to leave after talking for a few minutes, Tia comes in a blue dress, with wet hair . Ranveer looks at her dumbstruck. he is only able to utter a hi when Yuvi and varun drag him along.

T: toh ranveer ko Tia ne kal raat dekha tha, Tia dream nahi kar rahi thi. iska matlab woh gahr ranveer ka hi hai.

A: kya bak bak kar rahi ho

T: kuch nahi

Vr: haan aaj Yuvi ka birthday hai aur hum sab ko raat ko disco mein jana hain

T: accha Tia nahi jayegi

M: kyun

T: Tia ka mood nahi hai.Yuvi ka birthday party mein Tia kya karegi?

A: main kuch nahi janti mere Yuvi ki party min tum aa rahi ho

T: par..

A: keh diya bas keh diya.tum jaa rahi ho nd dats final

Edited by ranv_rules - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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guys in this fic i have been continuing regularly but u don't comment.even the last part only honey_13 ,dancediva nd saya commented. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Edited by ranv_rules - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
cool yaar ๐Ÿ‘
tia and ranveer finally ๐Ÿ˜‰
cont soon...................
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
awesome part Sagarika ๐Ÿ‘

continue soon

Divz

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