KYA TUM VAHI HO (rt fic) part 14 pg 18 - Page 12

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awsome πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ plz cont soon😊 😊 😊
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AWSOME Work Sagrika I just read your thred & trust me it very Very cooooooooool but when you will end the tia-ranveer love story plz make story for ashi-yuvi too plzzzzzzzzzzzz πŸ‘πŸΌ
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guys im relly srry for nt posting for a long time.
but its just dat im having skool till 5 now thanx 2 the extra classes nd i cum bak home very tired and am unable to cum online.

i promise 2 post 2day.

sagarika


p.s. thanx all of u for ur comments.it really helps.
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thanks a lot sagrika.par pls jaldi likhna. πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
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Yaa plzz jaldi karna but now i am happy that u have said you'll cont soon
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PART 11

That evening everybody got ready pretty fast except the usual late - lateef -Tia.

A:Tia kitna time laga rahi ho, it's already eight . aur hume 9 pahuchna hai.

T:bas das minut aur.

:tabse das minute bole jaa rahi ho

V: yeh das minute kabkhatam honge.

T:babes Tia bas aayi.

P(whispering so that Tia couldn't hear) :ek kaam karte hain hum Tia ko yahin chod dete hai.Ranveer use le aayega and she would be able to talk to him in the car.

Ashi gives her a thumbs-up sign.

A:Tia hum jaa rahe hain.tum baad mein aa jana.

T:par par..(she came out of the bathroom in a bathrobe running, but thay had already left).

ab Tia kyakare.Tia akeli chalejayegi.

She then takes her dress and goes to dress up .

while she was in the loo, getting ready, Ranveer had been sent there, so he was w8ing for her in the room.Tia came out from the bathroom wearing a nice hot dress and looking xtremely stunning.But Ranveer didn't even look at her as he was busy reading a magazine.

T:hi Ranveer.kaise ho?

R:thik(without lifting his eyes)

T:accha. tum aaj bahut hi acche lag rahe ho.

R:hmm

T:Tia kaisi lag rahi hai.

R:acchi.(without even looking)

Tia really felt very upset as it was generally Ranveer who started the conversation but he wasn't even replying properly.

T:chalein

Ranveer got up, he kept the magazine and went and sat in the car.Tia came and sat next to him.The entire way Ranveer didn't talk to tia oreven look at her, helooked very interested in riving.tia tried to talk to him, but till when can you speak when you get cold responses like haan, accha, ok.so, she also gave up and sat silently the entire way.

When they reached the disco, Tia was ushered to a side by her friends and bombareded with questions about what happened on the way,but everybody became upset when they gotan answer in the negative.

Tia sat at the bar while all were dancing.Then yuvi pulled tia and started dancing with her.ranveer on the other hand was dancing with ashi.Then they rotated their parteners.ranveer with vrinda, tia with aman,this happened several times till they both had danced with everybody possible, carefylly avoiding each other.But as luck would have it. they were soon pushed together in the centre by their friends so that they could dance.as soon as they saw these two 2gether evrybody, stopped and looked at them intently, praying that everything goes well.But alas,Tia and Ranveer kept on looking at otherpeople avoiding each other's eyes till Ranveer went oustside.

Tia who , by now had big tears in her eyes went to the loo.Ashi followed her.

A:tum yahan pe kyun chali aayi

T:ashi Tia ne kitni koshish ki Ranveer se baat karne ki ghsr pe, car mein par woh tia ko ignore kar raha hai.aur Tia sab kuch tolerate kar sakti hai par uska ignorance nahi.coz Tia loves him.

Tia ki kya galti hai, yahi ki usse pyaar kiya.Tia darti thi ki woh Tia ki feelinga ka mazk udayega isliye Tia chup rahi.Tia usse jhagadti thi ki woh Tia ko irritate kane ke liye usse baat kare.Tia use marti thi taki usse choo sake.Tia ka bhi man karta hai usse baatein karne ka, usse choone ka, usse kiss karne ka.par.... woh.. tia ...se baat hi nahi karta.

A(hugging her) :Tia tumne uski feelings ko hurt kiya hai.usse misunderstand karke.jao apologise karo.

Tia leaves smiling.

A:and haan get ur kiss too.

Edited by ranv_rules - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part sagarika πŸ‘ plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.

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Posted: 19 years ago
yipee i m d first 1 2 reply.

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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part Sagarika πŸ‘

hope Tia n Ranny patch up soon 😳 😳

continue soon

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I am waiting for Tia - Ranveer to patch up . I can't see Ranveer ignoring chweet Tia .

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon πŸ˜›

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